A Simple crush that turns into a disaster

A Simple crush that turns into a disaster

Chapter 4

The next day Ann came early on her class ..

Ann: *what will I do? .. he likes Fretzie .. but wait Fretzie likes Bret.. think Ann Li.. think*

Then she enter her classroom.. there are three students came earlier than her Joe,Kyra and James ?

Ann: what James?

James heard this and look at the owner of the voice .. while Ann covered her  mouth..

James: why?

Ann: nothing .. about yesterday .. sorry..

James: its okay .. nevermind..

Ann: I would like to help you..

James: huh?

Ann: I’ll help you about Fretzie ..

James: really?

Ann: yeah ..

James: okay .. tell me more about her ..

Then Ann started to tell things about Fretzie while James listens to her ..

After some minutes Jenny, Ryan , Tricia and Ivan came ..

Jenny: is that Ann talking to James? Or am I just dreaming?

Tricia: I think I’m part of your dream Jenny coz I can see it also ..

Ivan: hey girls.. it is really Ann talking to James and you’re not dreaming or anything ..

Ryan went to Ann and James..

Ryan: hey ..

James: oh Ryan..

Ryan: what are you talking about?

Ann: uhm nothing ..

James: yeah .. I just ask her about the school.. yeah the school..

Ann: yeah he’s right ..

Then Bret and Fretzie came..

James saw them and got a little bit jealous..

Ann: ah Fretzie.. hi!

Fretzie: hi Ann .. so your getting close to James huh..

Ann: ah.. hehe

They all went to their seats  and their class started ..

Mr. Rod: okay let’s start..

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The bell rang..

Ann: yes .. break time .. I’m hungry ..

Jenny: Ann wait why did you left earlier .. I went to your house but tita said you’re already here..

Ann: you know I ..

Fretzie: hey lets eat..

Ann: okay ..

Jenny: Ann you didn’t  answer me..

At the cafeteria ..

James: Ann can you join me to library later ..

They all look at Ann..

Ann: okay : )

Fretzie whisper to Jenny ..

Fretzie: is he over me now ?

Jenny: don’t know maybe because yesterday Ann and James went hometogether..

Fretzie:oh .. : )

After awhile Ann and James left ..

James: I’m planning a date with Fretzie.. could you help me ask her out?

Ann was quiet  ..

James: Ann?

Ann: ah yeah ..  :’(

James: is there something wrong ?

Ann: ah.. no I’m okay .. : )

James: so .. bring her to this address on Saturday..

Ann: okay ..  : )

The whole week was boring for Ann because she’s more concern on how she can ask Fretzie to come with her tomorrow ..

Ann: how will I do that?

Jenny: do what?

Ann: huh? Nothing ..

Jenny: okay ..

Ann: ah I have to go .. mom is waiting for me outside ..

Jenny: okay take care ..

Then Ann left ..

Fretzie: why did Ann left so early?

Jenny: she said tita’s outside waiting for her ..

Fretzie: so I better go also ..

Jenny: okay ..

Fretzie: Bret lets go..

James: ah can I join the two of you?

Bret: sure why not?

Fretzie: ah.. okay ..

Then they left..

Fretzie and Bret were laughing while James was at their back ..

Fretzie: you know Bret sometimes I just have to admit that you always make melaugh..

Bret: wow .. so you’ll accept me as your boyfriend?

James was shocked at this and looked at Fretzie ..

Fretzie: in time..

James sigh in relief..

Bret: of  course I’ll wait for you..

Fretzie: what if Ann didn’t tell me that you like me last summer .. then you’ll never had the chance to court me ..

Bret: maybe .. Ann’s really a reat person..

James was shocked when he heard it ..

James: *Ann was the one made them together.. then why did she help me?*

Bret: dude are you okay ..

James: yeah ..

Bret: ahm wait .. are you courting Ann?

James: what?! .. that’s completely impossible ..

Fretzie: what’s impossible with that .. Ann’s pretty, kind and sweet ..

James: *but I like you*

Bret: dude..

James: huh?

Bret: nevermind .. : )

The next day .. Ann went to Fretzie ..

Ann: hey pretty..

 Fretzie: Ann.. : )

Ann: can you coe with me please .. (pouting her lips)

Fretzie: okay.. but we  should come back before  12 pm..

Ann: okay..

Then they went to the address where James told her ..

Fretzie: Ann what’s the address here again?

Ann: ah were at Sky Light garden ..

Fretzie: okay .. (then Fretzie type the address and send it to Bret)

Ann: okay ..  were here ..

Fretzie: wait .. why are we on the garden again?

Ann: just wait ..

Fretzie: did Bret prepare this .. : )   (as she saw the prepared table, flowers and music)

Then James came..

Fretzie: James? (she looked at Ann and Ann smiled) Ann what’s this?

Ann: i.. I have to go ..

Ann turn her back and cried while running away .. She sit in a bench outside the garden..

Bret: Ann why are you crying?

Ann look at the person and she saw Bret ..

Ann: Bret? What are you doing here ?

Bret: Fretzie told me to come here and pick her up after she accompany you.

Ann: what ..

Bret: where’s Fretzie .?

Bret walk to the garden ..

Ann: no Bret!

Bret saw James giving flowers to Fretzie ..

Bret: what’s this?

Fretzie: Bret .. (she run towards Bret .)

Bret: dude what’s this?  Why are you having a date with my girlfriend?

James: girlfriend?

Bret: yeah .. she accept it last night ..

James look at Ann ..

James: sorry dude .. but .. I thought ..

Bret: its okay .. just remember she’s my girlfriend .. and you .. (talking to Ann) I thought you’re my friend ..

Ann: I’m so sorry .. :’(

Fretzie: how can you do this Ann..

Ann: I just want to help James ..

Bret: but you help me with Fretzie  last summer..

Ann: I know I’m sorry .. (crying)

Bret: lets go Fretzie..

Bret and Fretzie left ..

James: Ann..

Ann: I’m sorry James .. I have to go.. (crying)

Ann run away and she left her eye glass..

James: Ann ..

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iampatricianne #1
Hi guys I posted this story on wattpad na. Please check na lang :) Same title. Username ko po dun ay kasiKATHNIELako
iampatricianne #2
Hi guys I posted this story on wattpad na. Please check na lang :) Same title. Username ko po dun ay kasiKATHNIELako
Samantha_Thirlwall #3
Chapter 35: MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! I Like it!
iampatricianne #4
sorry di na ko makapagupdate baka sa vacation or sem break? super busy po eh ..start na ng klase namin..sisihin niyo ang ust ang aga magpapasok hehe joke lang..pero i'll update ngayon hirap kasi ng course ko eh kailangan ng focus .
katrinazuy #5
NEXT PLEASE :-)
SHANNEisLOVE #6
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ilabJAMLI4ever #9
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