Love On Ride

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This is really an old fiction from winglin around 2009. The second story which actually was completed. ‘This Clumsiness’ is my third story… So the first one?? 'Vacant Of Heart', it still been hanging (on going). =)

This is romantic, angst, and comedy the genre I prefer, but I don’t know how I started my first story with such a dramatic one. ^^ Even I’m crying when wrote it.  I’m not kind of funny person, so just bear with me as this is my first attempt in writing this kind of genre. ^_^ I’ll try my best!

Tittle: Love On Ride

Author: Kimbab ssi_김밥ღ,

Genre: Romance, Angst, Fluff…

 Length: [7 chapters only]

Character:

-      Jung Yunho

-      Kim jaejoong

-      Kim Heechul

-      Choi Siwon

-      Kim Junsu

-      Park Yoochun

-      Shim Changmin and others...

(Main Yunjae)

I'm not own any character in this fiction and also it’s purely fiction only.

WARNING: This is BL story…which mean (Boys Love) just don't read if any of you against this kind of story. I don’t want to put any bad feeling on others. Also note; there have lots of error which I still find one day for re-edditing the whole of it.^^

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Foreword

[Person P.O.V]

‘Yattaaa~ here again in this wobbled bus! I hate it… I’d been force to ride on this old bus by my appa, which this old transportation seems would be blow out anytime as it moves with its wobbly tires!

That cruel appa had claims me to transfer here due to his open new branches company. But that was sooo unreasonable! Why he should choose this small town for his business?? From Seoul to Chungnam?! What exactly in his thought..? When I threw this question on him, he might only say here was like heaven for him. Should that be considered as an answer for my question?

Aish!

That appa of me never be serious…before this, I used to ride by my driver to school, now I’ve forced to take this wobbled vehicle! Whose know, for the past month…if I still remember the third days after my first attend to this ‘Namja High School’, which all boys in this school I mean. This wobbled vehicle has becomes my favorite ride. Hehe…know why?

Because… here on the middle seat of this bus which I’d sign it as my usual seat and where I will took a seat beside the window, just to see that ‘someone’ face in the early morning. This one boy always ride on his bicycles to school with the morning zephyr against his handsome face was able to captured my eyes and down to…my heart? ^^

That’s my favorite view before I have reach my school! I’ve met my first crush! That’s weird I become so fast to fallen in love. This is my first time…

*blushing cheeks*

And… how lucky I am when I found that boy was in the same class as me! Yaa… I feel so excited but during the class, I would only approach him commonly, so does him. I don’t know how to act friendly toward him even when I attempt to word out something, I feel myself flush when he shoot me with his intense gaze, which make me end up to look stupid instead.

But during my way to school it feel totally different when I saw him from this distance.
That boy will ride on his bicycles every morning as he follows the bus I’d ride on and he will waving here, right here at my direction! I would like to wave back, but….. I’m so nervous because I don’t know what kind of expression I should expose on my face.

*Turn to look outside of window*

Omo! That’s him…that’s him! Right now! Here again on his bicycles…sharp on time just like I’ve been expected for this moment. Now, he’s waving! What should I do? Should I wave back?? but my hand feel freeze on my side…but...I should try right?! At least we should try than nothing…

*waving his hand to that boy*

Eeh..?? Isn’t he really waving toward my direction?? Or…..erkk?!!! Gyaaa~ that waves for the boy who seat behind me?!

*cover his hand with pretend to rake out his head*

Yaa~ how embarrassing… yes I know this boy behind me, he always took a seat at the same spot like me. His name Kim Heechul, people use to know him as ‘Cinderella’. Urgh! Hate it… that’s good he was not in the same school with me...’
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“Oh, early in the morning can see lovers waving each other? That’s hurting… Haha…Yaa~ Kim Jaejoong, You never dare to wave back toward that boy before this, right? Now, looks like that Choi Siwon had been snatch away by someone else.”

One boy out of sudden sarcastically said as he standing next to me. I knew well this cynical tone of him. Aish! Here again this brat boy! Always put an irony on me… he is rebellious student ever I knew. Oh, don’t say I already have been rejected by Siwon?! Euwaaa~ No, I can’t accept it!

[End Person P.O.V]

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Sorry for any error of grammar or mistyping. *bow*

This is only intro… I’ll make another update tomorrow. Please give me some response. ^^

 

Credit: Essence* for a nice poster.

Kimbab ssi_김밥ღ

 

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athrun08
#1
Chapter 7: on year 2023 i just found out this story 😆
Niniwan #2
Chapter 4: Now 2019 ...still re-read heheheh never get bored!
Niniwan #3
Chapter 7: Again i re read this in 2018 hehehdhe
vyrmag
#4
I read it again and I loved once again. Please,keep writing!!
Elrhumy #5
Chapter 7: Dang finally Jae get trough his thick denseness n notice the sincere of yunho's feeling :D This just a cute story haha..
Elrhumy #6
Chapter 5: Huwhaaat?!? this just so unexpected... but really its low of siwon.. before he use heechul now rather than make fair fight he made Jae to back out n destroy Yunho's heart.. very selfish >_<
Elrhumy #7
Chapter 4: Eeeh why i smell some love quartet or something lol.. does heechul like Yunho? thats why siwon look unhappy in the festival..
Elrhumy #8
Chapter 3: Huwaaah yunho please save Jae.. n whats wrong with sichul, i think they're dating already..
Elrhumy #9
Chapter 2: Aaaah Jae should let go of siwon if he's obvious in love with someone else..
Elrhumy #10
Chapter 1: Honestly look like Yunho just try to get Jae's attention haha..