Chapter 1

The Passing of Time

 

Minseok was drowning. He didn't know how long he had been underwater, but he felt like every part of him was about to explode. His chest was on fire, his head heavy as lead. Every once and a while he could hear shouting and screaming. It hurt his ears. The rest was nothing but silence, except for every so often. Occasionally he would hear a different voice. This voice was soft, soothing even. It sounded sad and every time he heard it, it got quieter. At first it was becoming desperate, and then after a while it just sounded empty. Like the person behind it had lost all hope.

 

He couldn't handle that voice anymore. He couldn't handle the amount of sadness and desperation he heard in it. He had to pull through. He had to break the surface once again. He fought, kicking wildly at the water around him. He wanted to see the sun again. Wanted to tell the voice that he was okay and that everything was going to be okay. The problem was every time he fought he could feel himself going to wrong way. It scared him enough that he would stop. But he didn't want to drown. He didn't want to die.

 

He closed his eyes for a moment and heard a new voice. It wasn't the same one as usual, but it sounded just as sad.

 

“We can't keep this up Minseok. It's killing all of us, especially Luhan. It'll be best to just let you go,” the voice said. Minseok began to panic. Let him go? What did that mean? With a new burst of energy he began fighting again, more ferociously than ever before. This time he was headed in the correct direction. He could see the surface of the water this time. He reached for him, grasping desperately for the air on the other side. The closer he got, the louder sounds became. There was harsh beeping and shouting.

 

“Nurse get that man out of here!” a voice shouted.

 

“Minseok!”

 

“I don't believe it....he's really coming out of it...” After that everything went silent.

 

When Minseok woke his throat and head were on fire. He opened his eyes and the light nearly burned them out of their sockets. He tried to make noise, but nothing came out. He just started coughing. He rolled over onto his side when the coughing got worse. A nurse rushed in and sat next him, rubbing his back gently. When the coughing subsided he looked up at her.

 

“Welcome back Minseok,” the nurse said with a smile. Minseok looked around, finally adjusted to the light, and found that everything was the same as how he had remembered it. Everything was white. The only difference there wasn't another bed in the room. He was the only occupant. He heard shouting from the hall and looked over.

 

“Let go of me! I have to see him!” the voice yelled. Minseok winced when he heard something break. The nurse let out a frustrated sigh and opened the door. The first thing Minseok saw was flailing legs and he tried not to laugh too hard.

 

“Just let him in guys, it's alright,” the nurse said. Minseok heard a few not so polite words and Chanyeol walked into the room. When he saw Minseok he stopped and Minseok could see the tears form in his eyes.

 

“You idiot,” Chanyeol said, choking back his tears. He rushed over to the bed an practically fell into a hug. Minseok winced, but hugged back anyway. “Damn it Minseok, we thought we lost you.” Minseok pulled away and looked at him, afraid. “What's wrong?”

 

“I'm afraid to ask how long I've been asleep,” Minseok admitted quietly. His voice sounded so pathetic. Chanyeol wiped his eyes with his sleeve and looked sympathetic. He wasn't going to like the answer.

 

“I hate to be the one to break it to you man, but it's March 28th. You've been in a coma for three years,” Chanyeol replied.

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xBoyWhoCriedWolfx #1
Chapter 6: Yo Author-nim! I'm glad I found this sequel!! Yehet! It's not like I looked it up in your profile or anything (Yes I did. Sorry).
Maybe its too late but, I think you should keep going but if that's all there is to it then don't push yourself. Tho if you wanna continue this story, I kinda don't want it to end up being so long and the point of the story is gone. But it, its a fic about my OTP so I don't care if its long. As long as its good written and sweet af. Xiuhan FTW!! (/^•^)/
I really liked the ending! Thank you for this sweet fic Author-nim!! ❤️
jini_14
#2
Chapter 6: The ending is so sweet. Glad xiuhan is back together. ;>
KimMinSeokChangSub
#3
Chapter 6: Hello again ^^
I wanna thank you so much for this! I remember that time I was reading it. It was the time where my xiuhan feels gets extrem (oki I said that already in 'counting the days') but I just wanna tell you that story means alot to me. I know that sounds ridiculous... but I'm very happy to found your story again (special thanks to my friend how helped me)
Anyway, I'm so in love with your stories and I liked it to read all over again. Your idea was so good. And I'm so happy how it ends. Or maybe it goes on (;
I hope u will write more xiuhan stories *-*
So I think I'm done with fangirling xD
Thank you again ♡
XiuHan4evaH
#4
Chapter 6: mmmmm... its ok fic, im just grossed with the kissing part when Lulu woke up i knw its romantic but it would'nt hurt if he asked him to brush his mouth first or maybe just peck would be fine. Putting a make out scene at the ending just lost my excitement. A fic that has a good storyline but the ending is not that good which supposed to be the best part. My rating 6.5, i hope you dont take my comment in a negative way.. Just to let u know i dont regret reading it. Thanks!
PandaBiased
#5
Chapter 6: it's a happy ending, like you said. I think this story is perfect as it is now and if you don't know what more to write to it, then don't :)
PatriciaKoiFish
#6
Chapter 6: AND THE TEARS STREAM DOWN MY FACE
crazy4life2day
#7
Chapter 6: Such a sweet chap. As much as I enjoy this fic, I think this would be a good place to end it. Though if you ever came up with more ideas, I love to see more chaps.
nungongju
#8
Chapter 5: ; -; Luhannie!! Please be okay!! Hnnng... I'm going to cry. The babies are reunited!!
gokulex59
#9
Chapter 5: I hate your cliffhangers. Why do you have to finish it all with cliffhangers. Why are you doing this.
chankyudoong #10
Chapter 5: Omg... Luhan is awake now...
Hmmm... Curious about his reaction... Thank you for updating authornim.... ^.^