Breathless

Description

It has unknowingly become a little flirting war; where she's attacking and he's defending. And if this continues, he will be out of breath soon.

 

An entry for BAP Writing Contest by iapple 
Prompt used is #Prompt 4: BAP's song crash

 when I see you, I lose my breath ❞
I keep thinking of you. You even made me forget my first love
Even if you keep telling me to leave, I’ll say that you’re my everything
Please give me a chance, If you hear my heart, give me a response
 
 
 

 

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Foreword

 

“Hyung! Hyung!”

 

Daehyun snapped out from his trance and turned to face the younger boy, giving him an as normal as possible kind of expression.

 

“What?”

 

“You’re staring.” Jongup whispered. Daehyun could hear that cheeky smirk in that short statement of his. But still, being Jung Daehyun, he denied it all.

 

“Hyung, I saw it too.” This time, the youngest, Junhong joined in their secret conversation. “You’re being too obvious, hyung.”

 

“What are you guys talking about?” Daehyun’s still trying to deny everything despite the two youngest making it clear in his face.

 

“Sunhwa noona.”

 

Daehyun uncomfortably avoided eye contact with them upon Jongup’s blunt comment. However, the two youngest were not bothering to make the situation any comfortable for their main vocalist.

 

“Seriously hyung, if I didn’t know, I would have thought you’ve forgotten how to breathe.”

 

“You’re exaggerating.”

 

“No he’s not,” Jongup interrupted, “Your face went so red and your mouth just keep opening and closing.”

 

“I-”

 

“Stop denying hyung.” Junhong smirked cheekily, “You’ve just perfectly become the main lead of our song, Crash.”

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Hyejunnie #1
busan won bin... & busan kim tae hee
Kekoko
#2
Chapter 3: I like it so much. The scene in the elevator was so nice, meoooow. xD Though Daehyun seemed a little older at first. I need more of these two.
annabelle7
#3
Chapter 3: Weeeeeee busan TS line daebak
themrsbooboo #4
Chapter 3: THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!! the plot reflects on real life so it makes it even more realistic!! I love it.
FeyFan
#5
Chapter 3: Wahhh.. It's ending that fast..
Thank your for the beautiful story!
FeyFan
#6
Chapter 2: Uah.. xD this is cute ~ kekeke..
anyway.. talking bout GDA, they did some blur interaction though xD Kekeke..
Update soon <3
EXOing #7
I like the characters....a lot!
tsekyi21 #8
Chapter 1: i should be studying, but this, this is too good. please update soon!<3
i hope this makes other people realize how cute sundae look together, and inspire them to write about them too ^^
FeyFan
#9
Chapter 1: XD Ah this is going to be very sweet <3
Update soon ^^
_mystique #10
OOOHHHHH~! DaeHwa fic! update soon <333