Alluring Secret: Black Vow

Description

Luhan wants answers that the angels can never give him. Minseok only wants a normal life, but what's normal about meeting someone who claims himself as an angel and he needed answers from him? 

Foreword

"No! We'd rather die together!"

"You deserve better than this, im sorry."

"What we comitted is a sin. This vow, our vow, will be called black vow."

Author's note:

  • This story was inspired by one of my favorite vocaloid songs. Credits to HitoshizukuP. I will credit the song after the story is completed 'cause of reasons..
  • Mentions of , and violence in some chapters. 
  • It's my first time writing an exo fic. And a supernatural one, so please bear with it. >.<
  • This fic is xiuhan-centric but every exo members will make an appearance and my other otps too, along the way, keke~
  • Please let me know if there are grammatical errors or wrong spellings, thank you! ♥
  • And lastly enjoy my fic! :) Thank you!

 

Author's Thoughts
namjuxiu
Okay, something came up. I dunno why but my chapter 1 is incomplete when I published it.. so I have to re-write again. OTL
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xiaodeer #1
Chapter 2: Update soon!! XD
Littlelamblulu #2
Chapter 2: GASP. OMG SO LUHAN IS GOING TO BE A HUMAN! AND HES GOING TO SEEK XIUMIN OUT!.
IM EXCITED!!!!!! :)
Minsuck #3
Chapter 2: I wanted to write a very large comment, but I have a headache and it's killing me ;3; so, sorry. Anyway, I bet this will be an awesome story. I love this kind of AU so I'll follow this till the end. I really loved it ;3;
dibsfortwo #4
Chapter 2: Urghhhhh this is so interesting pls continue writing! <3333
JustFei #5
Chapter 1: love it already! :)
gokulex59 #6
WHY DID YOU REMOVE THE CHAPTER?! I was just about to write comment, and when I clicked to post it, ta-dah, the chapter was Slenderman's prey! I copied the comment so that I'd still show you that I definitely don't think you needed to remove the first chapter:

"Nope. It's great so far. You went neater, I realized :D and with that, I see almost no flaw; maybe tiny things that every fanfiction probably has, mines included :D I can't wait to see more from this story!

And just to make sure... Will Lu Han come back as a female after Minseok rejects him? I mean, I know it's a lot of chapters later, but I kinda felt like asking. After all, that was the main point of Alluring Secret: Black Wow."
Littlelamblulu #7
Chapter 1: Is luhan human!? :O
gokulex59 #8
The title attached me here. It's one of the rare pocapoca things I passionately love, and I trust you about not screwing the plot up! :D

The first chapter was short, but definitely not hope-breaking. Your sentences and words are good, just try being neater. Like, writing different people's lines on different paragraphs. Good luck! :D
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