Prologue

Alluring Secret: Black Vow

Prologue

 

"And then he left—" The doe-eyed blonde Principalities angel was cut off by one of the second sphere angel, the Dominion, everyone went silent and bowed to him. The other smiled and bows back lightly as he gestured his hands to continue what they were doing. The doe-eyed Principalities angel as well as the other third sphere angels bowed back again and continued.

"He left and never again did he went back at the gates of heaven—" he chuckled. "And that's the legend of one of the most alluring secrets, the black vow. Now, run along little angels and do your duty. I will tell you more legends later but for now me and Dominion has to talk." The doe-eyed boy patted their backs as he escorted them to the door bidding goodbye before they do their duty as an angel and archangel, flapping their little wings ever so gently with a speed of light.He closed the door, chuckling on how innocent third sphere angels can be as he turned around and made his way to the vacant seat near the ash blond one, slouching as he seat and yawning.

"Were you out patrolling for Korea in six years, Luhan?" Sehun said his face full of concern, to patrol day and night in a country for six years or in angels time: six hours, without rest is a hard task to do, Sehun can only wonder why wasn't Luhan at his place? Why wasn't he a Dominion just like him? He brushed the fringes of the other boy that was covering his beautiful doe eyes. "Sehun, I know you're my bestfriend but can you stop acting like my father? To remind you, i'm already million years old." Luhan groaned and stretches his arms as he yawned, yet again. The latter chuckled on how childish the boy was, he nods in agreement as his face changed into a stern look.

"Luhan, what you're planning isn't a good idea. You should stop looking for answers and just do your duty as Principalities. I'm saying this because I am your bestfriend. You can't give up your wing for something like that." Luhan shakes his head and let out a sigh his gaze locked on the other boy's eyes.

"I have to, Sehun, it might not be a big deal for you but it is for me. I want answers, answers that none of you can ever give me, I have to find it. I don't want to wander another million years on who I really was. I can't be born as an angel because I don't have any symbol in the palm of my hands—" He lift up his hands and no symbols were found. "I might be a human before I became an angel but normally angels will know if they were a human, they might not have any memories of them being a human but angels know when they are, but how come.." He clasped Sehun's hand as he knelt down, pleading, to make Sehun help him. The boy could only sigh and nod in response as Luhan hugged him tightly "Be back after one hour. A year is enough to find your answers in earth." Luhan and mouthed Thank you as he left, flapping his wings and went down.

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namjuxiu
Okay, something came up. I dunno why but my chapter 1 is incomplete when I published it.. so I have to re-write again. OTL

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xiaodeer
#1
Chapter 2: Update soon!! XD
Littlelamblulu
#2
Chapter 2: GASP. OMG SO LUHAN IS GOING TO BE A HUMAN! AND HES GOING TO SEEK XIUMIN OUT!.
IM EXCITED!!!!!! :)
Minsuck #3
Chapter 2: I wanted to write a very large comment, but I have a headache and it's killing me ;3; so, sorry. Anyway, I bet this will be an awesome story. I love this kind of AU so I'll follow this till the end. I really loved it ;3;
dibsfortwo #4
Chapter 2: Urghhhhh this is so interesting pls continue writing! <3333
JustFei
#5
Chapter 1: love it already! :)
gokulex59
#6
WHY DID YOU REMOVE THE CHAPTER?! I was just about to write comment, and when I clicked to post it, ta-dah, the chapter was Slenderman's prey! I copied the comment so that I'd still show you that I definitely don't think you needed to remove the first chapter:

"Nope. It's great so far. You went neater, I realized :D and with that, I see almost no flaw; maybe tiny things that every fanfiction probably has, mines included :D I can't wait to see more from this story!

And just to make sure... Will Lu Han come back as a female after Minseok rejects him? I mean, I know it's a lot of chapters later, but I kinda felt like asking. After all, that was the main point of Alluring Secret: Black Wow."
Littlelamblulu
#7
Chapter 1: Is luhan human!? :O
gokulex59
#8
The title attached me here. It's one of the rare pocapoca things I passionately love, and I trust you about not screwing the plot up! :D

The first chapter was short, but definitely not hope-breaking. Your sentences and words are good, just try being neater. Like, writing different people's lines on different paragraphs. Good luck! :D