Sorry, my lover!

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Daehyuns love for Bang Yongguk is something that only he can know about but something happened and Bang Yongguk found out. They are starting a relantionship, but what will their friends say about it... 

Foreword

It's me first time writing a fanfiction so please forgive me if it's bad and ... but please give me your support for doing this! ^^

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bangdaehard #1
Chapter 7: First and foremost, I'm really sorry for my lateness! >_<
But yeah. The feedback I promised.


Hm, I felt like the story's pace was too abrupt, and things were rushed. Otherwise, I have no problem with your writing. Your grammar is fine and your sentence structure is not monotonous. My only qualm was how things progressed at an unrealistic speed. Other than that, I see a lot of potential in you.


Keep on writing! :)
inftocean #2
Chapter 7: awww~~ that was adorable!! XD and the whole yongguk getting jealous of that daelo interrection was cute!! haha.. possessive jealous boyfriend i see~~~ ;)
BubbleTeaRulez #3
Chapter 7: Really awesome story :)
LOL l love how everything happened all in one day xD
Oh Bang...you just started dating and you're already of every guy who Dae talks to x)
Chocomenta18 #4
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^
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