If there is the next life(hiatus)

Description

After reading a lot of fanfics about kryber, yulsic, taeny etc..i also want to write a fanfics. although my English and grammer are terrible, i gather up my courage to write this, hoping that i can increasing my English skill.sorry if there is someone who read my story and if my writting give you headache.

Foreword

 As i shift my gaze to the coma patient, the patient chart from my hand fell to the floor.

This familiar face, except for the clothing, yes i've found him.

He is no other one but a person in my dream who make my heart beat like crazy even thinking about him.

 

 After i open my eye and adjust the brightness, i saw unfamiliar place that looks alike a huge tent.

i look around and found yul sleeping with protruting tongue on the bed not far away from me.

As usual my shikshin duo soo and yoong are busy eating, not even notice i am watching them.

Suddenly the cloth sheet at the door open and taeng went in.

As soon as he see me awake he said aloud "you are finally awake" to me and shift everyone attention to me including yul who awake due to taeng loud voice.

 Wait a minute, why do they wear such clothes and why their hair style look alike ancient Korea man and what is this weird place.

 

 

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OneCentimeter
#1
Chapter 10: new reader here~! the plot is great but grammatical mistakes throughout the fic makes it hard to enjoy the story. Keep up the good work :) You're writing skill is improving by the chapter~!
dede123 #2
Chapter 9: I like your story so far author~ :D
Your idea of the story is good
Please update soon~ :)
CT4EVA
#3
I agreedd. Practice make our writing skill better. I love your story though
dede123 #4
Chapter 6: So short~ :(
I hope you update more author!! :)
Thanks!
God Bless!!! :D
yoonfanyrockz
#5
Chapter 4: pls update soon authir shi HWAITIING!!
JJoongie
#6
Chapter 3: update soon
Lydia-Gna-mOua
#7
AWESOME!! ^^
x_Eunjung #8
This seems interesting~ ^^