Chapter 1

The Dorky Us
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CH1: Come to Play

 

“Hurry up ummaaaa! I want to play with Sica!!” The blonde girl bounced on her seat as she waited for her mother to park the car.

 

The woman smiled at her daughter and huffed. “Alright, alright. We’re here. Don’t go too far from the playground arasso?”

 

“Arasso! Arasso! Unbuckle me already!!” The girl whined even more as her mother laughed at her. After she had been released from the car, immediately the girl bolted to the playground to find her friend. “Sica Sica Sica Sica!!” She looked around and only saw unfamiliar kids playing but not her friend.

 

“Don’t go anywhere but the playground, Hyo!” Again, the mother informed her daughter and sat on the bench. The little Hyoyeon huffed and ran to her mother. “What’s wrong?” The mother asked.

 

“Ummaaaa, I can’t find Sica.” Hyoyeon pouted and started to whine. “I wanna play with Sica~”

 

“Hmm. How about you ask Aunt Jung?” Mrs. Kim whispered as pointed at another woman beside her.

 

Hyoyeon stared at the woman blankly before asking. “Aunt Jung~ where is Sica?? Hyo wants to play with Sica!!”

 

“Come here, little Hyo.” Mrs. Jung held the little girl’s hand and brought her lips near to the girl’s ear. “If Hyo was Sica, where would you be?”

 

Hyoyeon began to think afterwards. She gave a long humming sound before turning her attention to the huge tree beside the playground. Automatically, she ran to the back of the tree and finally she had found her friend. “Sica!”

 

“Ohhhh~” The brunette let out a long yawn and napped against the tree. “You’re here already, Hyo??” The girl looked at her friend her eyes half open.

 

“Let’s play, Sica!!!” Hyoyeon dragged her friend to the seesaw.

 

“But I’m so tiredddd~”

 

“I love you too~ now let’s play!!!” Little Hyo whined to the older one. Little Sica nodded went to the other seat and play with her friend.

 

“Weeeee!”

 

 

-

 

 

“Unnie, can we go play there?” The doe eyed girl pulled the tanned girl’s wrist forcibly to the mini field just beside a huge playground.

 

The tanned girl stopped her and rubbed her wrist. “Yoonaaa~ you hurt unnie’s hand...” The doe eyed girl pouted and sat back on the sandbox with a loud thud, causing their sandcastle to collapse. “Our sandcastle!!!”

 

“Yoonaaaaa!! Our precious sandcastle!” Little Yul whined and dramatically knelt down in front of the sand. “Nuuuuuuuuuuuu~”

 

“Unnie don’t be such a baby! Let’s make another one later. Yoong wants to play there! There there there!!” Little Yoong once again pointed at the mini field as the latter huffed.

 

“We don’t have a ball to play there!!”

 

“I do!! Wanna play??” A shorty jerked in their conversation.

 

The tanned girl looked at the short one with an insecure look. “Are you a nice chingu or a bad chingu??”

 

The shorty giggled at the question of the tanned girl. “I am a chingu who aegyo too much!!! Annyeong~” The shorty showed off her aegyo and immediately the two girls covered their ears.

 

“Unnieeeee! Make her stop! The horrorrr!”

 

“Can I please punch you?!?!” Little Yul threw a glare at the shorty.

 

The latter responded with a smile and nodded. “I would love to be your chingu!! Let’s plaaaay!” The shorty ran to the field as the two girls only watch her.

 

“Unnie, she looks nice to me. Can we go play there now?!” Little Yoong whined even louder. The older one had no choice but to bring her partner to the field. The three started to play ball together.

 

 

-

 

 

“Aunt Choi! When will Youngie stop eating??” The puppy faced girl asked her aunt.

 

Mrs. Choi sighed and shook her head in denying. “Why don’t you ask her yourself, Tiffany?” She suggested as she patted the little girl’s head. “Or why don’t you go and join Taetae at the swing?”

 

Tiffany shook her head stubbornly. “Taetae is busy looking butts and when it comes to butts, Taetae said I cannot disturb her or Taetae will put bugs on my Totoro teddy bear!!” The little girl whined as the adults nodded understandingly.

 

“Whatever you say, Fany.” Mrs. Hwang said and indicated her daughter to talk with the little girl who was busy eating her burger.

 

“May God bless my burger. Amen. Ammm!! It looks so delicious!!” The shikshin praised the food and about to take her first big bite which she failed to.

 

“Youngie!!”

 

The shikshin huffed and looked at her clumsy friend. “Miyoung! I’m about to eat this delicious burger!!! Don’t make me eat you!” She yelled playfully as little Miyoung giggled.

 

“Youngie~ finish up your food already! Miyoung wants to play!”

 

“Ok, ok. Let Youngie finish Youngie’s burger first~” Little Miyoung nodded and stared at her shikshin friend. Just when the shikshin was about to take a bite, a shorty stole a bite and munched cutely.

 

“Nom nom nom nom delicious!!”

 

The shikshin’s jaw dropped. She looked at her other friend and whined. “TAETAE!! WAE OH WAE?!”

 

“Heeeey, what’s going on here?” Mrs. Choi came nearer to the three friends. Little Miyoung was giggling nonstop, Little Tae was busy munching on her food while Little Youngie shot daggers to her unnie.

 

“UMMAAAA!! TAETAE ATE MY BURGER!”

 

“Aigoo. That’s enough of burger for you, Choi Sooyoung. Go and play with your friends. They have been waiting for you since your 3rd burger!” Mrs. Hwang snatched the burger from the shikshin and ate it for herself.

 

“Aunt Hwang is right. Go play.” Mrs. Choi nodded in approval.

 

“Eishhh! Arasso. Miyoung! Let’s go play.” Little Youngie pouted and forcibly dragged the giggling Miyoung to the swing.

 

“Taetae, what have I told you about looking at people’s butts? Young lady.” Mrs. Kim caught her daughter before she could even followed Miyoung and Youngie.

 

“Ummaaaaa~ Taetae wasn’t looking at butts!! Taetae saw a pretty face over there and Taetae wants to see her again!” Little Taetae whined.

 

“Wait what pretty face?”

 

“MEH!” Little Taetae grinned and immediately ran to the swing. She took the 3rd swing and played with it while her eyes were locked on a certain someone.

 

 

-

 

 

“Sica.....” Little Hyo called in frighten.

 

“Aw wae, Hyo??” The latter stopped and looked at her frie

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lightfuryeji
#1
Chapter 100: I was confused reading the chatroom. I thought my username is mentioned. Hahaha
stoodoverdaline #2
Chapter 70: I'M FINALLY BACK ASASAJDSGSFHAGCSDGMDHSKFH

I'm loving every cheesiness pouring over their private chats ;v; what a great chapter to comeback to OHMYGAH they're all so cute and not solo and cute and not solo and cute and--ok pardon me I'm just bitter about loneliness suddenly

yonghwa, man that's what you get for dating the maknae of eight gangsta unnies :') kinda felt sorry for you but on second thought nahhh you're lucky to have seobb I WILL HUNT YOU IF YOU HURT HER SO MAKE THAT NINE GANGSTA UNNIES

*clears throat*

my fingers were curling the most during soosica's part, I just--I can't--every time they exchanged a 'chu' my cheese ratio jumped nine hundred scales. most fluff goals is awarded to sunbun and ppany because =u= ahahahahaha I don't even know I just really can see myself doing this kind of fluff. most relatable fluff is none because me ish a lone potato.

*hugs my physics book* I still have ya.

......did that sound too desperate?

*wipes sweat* alright. I'm back now sooo! I'll try to comment a chapter each day :) see you in the next comment!
stoodoverdaline #3
Chapter 69: LMAOOOOOOOOOO TAENG YOU'RE SOOOOO LUCKY IT'S SICA AND NOT JOOHYUN. I don't even want to imagine what would happen if it was joohyun, she'd ban you from entering the dorm for at least a month and you'll have to sneak in ninja-style just to meet hyohyo. cue Titanic OST to emphasize how tragic your love story would be for that whole month.

(you seem elated imagining my sufferings...)

who me? what are you saying of course I'm not elated c:

(...riiiiiiiiight.)

anyways, my midterm exams started yesterday and will be going on 'till the next two weeks so if I temporarily disappeared from this comment section you'll know why ^^ I'll come back though! I've already written 'continue to comment TDU' in my to-do list with bolded, highlighted, underlined caps letters.
so see you later~ :D
stoodoverdaline #4
Chapter 67: poor joohyun, she has to endure this kind of happenings everyday. may God graces you with patience and sense of humor matching that of your unnies, so at least you can enjoy things they found hilarious--

(are you saying that I don't have a good sense of humor?)

--now now, I know a dangerous question when I see one so I'll just refuse to dignify that with a response other than this one to confirm my action.

so at the end of the day, the successful smooth talkers are yul and youngie, huh? :)))))

(I don't know, youngie just has to slip once and pick up line sica as a cucumber--)

(YUL YOU TOTALLY DON'T SUGGEST THAT)

(WHAT IF I DO WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO)

(*HAIR GRABS*)

(*HAIR GRABS*)

*blinks*

sooo... while we wait for those two to finish wrestling... did miyoung really give tae five cans of redbull?

(*nods*)

to reiterate sica: good gracious, miyoung.

anyways, I want to say that I actually had commented on chapter 68 a whiiiiiiile back, so next comment would be for chapter 69! :D
see you in the next comment, author~~~
stoodoverdaline #5
Chapter 66: LMAO IS THIS TAE'S BIRTHDAY OR IS THIS 'LET'S BULLY TAE BY SAYING I LOVE YOU TO HYO'-DAY???? these mischievous bunch :)))))))

though they're right taeyeon really does look like she's aging backwards how is it even possible... does she find the fountain of youth? me is envious beyond words, hmphhh =n=

although today isn't really taeyeon's birthday, still~ wish you much, much happiness, you dork <3 sometimes when I feel down or questioning life and my purpose to keep going towards tomorrow, I listen to 'I' and gain strength :) thank you for singing, thank you for being in my life!

(*hyo glowers slowly*)

what? teh paragraph up there is written in a purely platonic adoration, hyo.

(oh phew. a'right. carry on.)

*carries a bunch of tasks*

well would you see that, real life responsibilites! HAH. bye for now, everyone :3 *waves waves*
stoodoverdaline #6
Chapter 65: is Kissing Day really exist???

(what is it to you.)

well, I need the confirmation so I could sleep the day away, since--

(since you're a solo. *nods* I see.)

joohyun, could you not confirm my single life with such unsymphatetic expression?

(*is looking at you with obvious pity*)

I... okay I'm... I don't know whether to feel better or...

*blocks joohyun from my view*

SO.

the sarang nom nom is making a comeback! so cute. them all so cute. CRIES. why do you guys have to be so cute. EVEN YOU, JOOHYUN. you and your misfortunes to witness your unnies' gayness. NO WAIT THAT'S A FORTUNE. AND NO, JOOHYUN, YOU AREN'T ALLOWED TO BEG TO DIFFER--

*is blocked by joohyun for strangling her freedom of expression*

thank you for writing this chapte! :D
stoodoverdaline #7
Chapter 64: ............

*is suddenly conscious of mah own * D:

no but have you ever wondered once in your life if SNSD is the pioneer of members'--loving girl group? I mean, they even passed the torch to Joohyun (not Joohyun YOU, Joohyun, but the other Joohyun, the Bae one--THAT'S NOT TO SAY THAT YOU'RE NOT A BAE YOURSELF, just that--ARGH YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANT).

*scrolls back up a bit*

oh, Joohyun blocked most of them. serve you right y unnies!

*is then blocked by the five*

............

(I'm sorry. Unnies' egos are fragile things.)

I could see that, yeah.

But well,

you do have a nice --

*is blocked by Joohyun*

--wow, great weather outside, what a nice world we live in. look, that clouds resemble a fish eye, don't you th--

*is blocked by xolovestephi*

--holy Hell damn.

I better shut up now before youngie and hyo block me too. *swallows* alright, see you in the next comment ^^;

*is blocked by forever_young24 and watashiwahyo*

WHUT

WHAT DID I DO WRONG

UNFAIR

*sulks off to real life D:*
stoodoverdaline #8
Chapter 63: first of all, /poop emoji/.

second of all, /poop emoji/.

(IT WAS REALLY BAD OKAY)

oh, I didn't say anything about it being bad or not :>

(I HATE YOU.)

love you too, hyo. /poop emoji/ HA. on the other hand, I quite understand when your bowel's activity is causing your life to be thrown off balance, for I have experienced it several times before. though, I'm not on the dramatic side, and so never caused a national-scale of panic to spread around my friends when my stomach is acting up--

(it WAS NOT a national scale panic--)

--taetae's reaction said otherwise, hyo. you can't fight me on this. look at tae's face and tell me she's not about to call the President and urge for a national troops to be sent for a searching.

(...I hate you.)

love you too. /poop emoji/. :>

(no pork bellies for you.)

I'm quite alright with that, for I myself don't consume anything containing pork, so--

(NO LOVE FOR YOU.)

--hyo, is that really necessary?

(unnie, the commenter is right, that was totally unnecessary. apologize.)

I'm... I'm okay, Joohyun... I'm just... reminded of my loneliness, I guess... and...

(SORRY. I don't know you're that depressing! D:)

it's /poop emoji/ okay /poop emoji/ hyo /poop emoji/. :'>

(...............)

(NO UNNIE DONT DO IT AGAIN)

alright, before you curse me with anything worse than love, I'll excuse myself for I have assignments to do.
laters, everyone!
/poop emoji/ :D
stoodoverdaline #9
Chapter 62: I'm very, very, thoroughly surprised that the cake in YoonYul's room wasn't befallen by some sort of... erm... 'accident'. Like, being eaten by Yoong, for example.

Actually no, I'm more surprised by the fact that you guys didn't try hard enough to hide the cake in a place completely unknown to Youngie--

(YAH. Don't you know that Youngie knows every corner of our dorm???)

Well, there's always the neighbor's house--

(AND HOW DO WE MAKE SURE THAT NO 'ACCIDENTS' WILL BEFALL THE CAKE OVER THERE?)

Well, it's not like you put the non-decoy cake in a completely safe place, either--

(*Yoong glares*)

--or maybe I should just shut up. Yeah, maybe I will do that.

Um.

Sunny, is your credit card healthy?

(Uncle asked me why I haven't grown taller with all the cakes I bought with my credit card.)

...............

(YOU WOULDN'T KNOW HOW I FELT--)

OH WHAT, I think my lecturer calls my name, time to go, buhbye!!!

*runs away*
stoodoverdaline #10
Chapter 61: T____________T

taetae, you wounded me. you wounded me because you made this loneliness in me even more obvious than before.

Jk.

WHY IS HYOTAE'S MISUNDERSTANDING SO CUTE.

not even an ounce of drama. well, other than taetae's earlier monologue, but sick person tends to think negatively of the world. I do, at least. BUT YOU TWO ARE SO CUTE. the only person I've ever given post it memos was my tablemate and it was to request her to ask some questions to our Bio teacher, because I temporarily lost my voice that day. sigh.

*squishes taetae* AND YAH. DON'T EVER THINK OF HYO LEAVING YOU. and don't be sad because then hyo will be sad too. do you want hyo to be sad?? EXACTLY. so don't.

*squishes hyo* AND YOU.

MAKE ME A CUP OF COFFEE, PLEASE. I need teh caffeine to keep me awake ;v; sigh. *releases hyotae* STAY CUTE.

(also, sica, I really, really want to hug you because you're such a sweet frenemies to taetae.)

*is getting a glare from youngie*

(...right, I need to go back to my assignment so, on second thought, no hugs.)

(see you in the next comment!)