Queenkas?

Beauty is never the question...
No ones POV: The next day went as per normal. You waited for the time where those bullies will come and look for you. But strangely, none of them came! You were astonished. Never had they left you alone except for yesterday's begging. " This is weird. They should be here already. " you mumbled, looking around to find them. " Wait, why am i even looking for them? Just go Shin Yeong. Its already good that they are leaving you for once." you said, happy that you are now free from their grasp. However, you didnt realised that someone was approaching you, or should i say a group of amgry students. Before you know it, a big slap was across your face. You couldnt believe at what just happened and glared daggers at the students before realising that they were the queenkas of the school. " Haha....dare to stare is it? Hey! Who do you think you are sticking so close to our Sehun oppa? Cant see that you dont belong in our hierachy? You are just a plain, ugly and irritating nerd. A downright, ultimate nerd. Huh! You dont even belong here! So you better stay away from him or else...SMACK! " another slap just went up onto your face. Tears which has been threatening to fall started to roll down. Seeing that you were already crying, satisfying their needs, they turn their heels and walk away. You just stood there, absorbing everything that just happened. Sehun, out from nowhere quickly went to give you a big hug and tried to calm you down. Sehun POV: Damn those es! Who do they think they are making Shin Yeong suffer like this. Huh... Shin Yeong-ah, please hold on for a little while. His going to come and rescue you soon. Just hold on for a few more day... Oh god, please give her some strength. Hold on.
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XiaoluElla
Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^