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Beauty is never the question...
As you were walking towards your classroom, a bunch of girls marched towards you and dragged you into the ladies. They slapped, kicked and even scarred your face. " Yah! You dont get it do you? How many times must i tell you. First was Sehun oppa. Next was Luhan oppa. Agh! Ill tell you one last time ... Dont get yourswlf involved with them you understand?!" they kicked you for the last time and stormed out. You twisted in agony as the pain was unbearable. "Sehun-ah. Luhan-ah" you mumbled before losing conciousness. All you could remember was someone rushing in, calling out your name. When you finally woke up, you found yourself in the sick bay." ouh your awake!" Luhan said. You nodded at let him continue attending to your bruise on the face. Your eyes started to wonder about the place as you had never been in the sick bay before. Unknowingly, it fell onto Luhan eyes. He was staring at you for quite sometime. You couldnt get what his eyes were trying to say. Before you knew it, he softly place his lips on yours, before pulling away. " please take care of yourself, Shinyeong-ah. Dont let them hurt you anymore." he whispered into your ears making you shiver at his closeness. He pecked your lips again and headed out, giving you one last smile. You hands qyickly went to the area that he kissed, still absorbing what just happened. Sehuns POV: "Aish i don know! Does he like me or something? He just give me two kisses right there? He- agh! I don know!" you said in frustration. I laughed. I went onto your bed and startef ruffling your hair. " Yah i also don know but let me ask you. Do you feel your heart go crazy at his sight or voice? Does he makes you feel all tingly? Do feel something whenever his near you?" i asked. You pondered over it before answering with a nod. Good! "That means you like him" i said tongue in cheek." A-ah what? Are you serious?" " Yeah but its you who decide, take your time..." i said. " maybe you will somehow remember.." i mumbled the last part. You were to engrossed inthinking that you didnt even hear what i said. Aish, Shinyeong-ah...
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Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^