Sudden twist...

Beauty is never the question...
Its been a few weeks now since you and Luhan were back together. Everybody in the school now starts to acknowledge as 'Luhan's girl'. You cant help me blushed whenever someones says so. Youve started to hand around exo more often too. All the 13 of you always went out for outings. All of you were always together in school. Everyone thought that both you and Luhan are going to be the happiest couple of all. That nothing can seperate the both of you apart. Thats what most of exo thought. Except for someone. Exo and you were at Suho house for the evening. Everyone else was enjoying the show except for Sehun. " Sehun? Are you alright?" Luhan asked. He nodde but there was a certain hesistation in it. Strange... Luhan thought. The next day all of Exo and you were going to the beach. The road will all jam packed with cars. The thirteen of you were talking excitedly and loudly while crossing the road. Sehun started shouting. " LUHAN HYUNG, SHINYEONG DON CROSS THE ROA-" before he could finish the sentence, a loud crash could be heard. Blood was flowing everywhere. All of exo including Sehun and Luhan was shock stricken. NO NO NO!!!! THIS SHOULDNT BE HAPPENING! NO SHINYEONG WAKE UP! JONGIN CALL THE AMBULANCE NOW!!!!" Luhan screamed. Sehun was still standing rooted to the ground. He continues shakinh his head. " NO! I SHOULD HAVE PREVENTED IT. I COULD SEE IT COMING BUT I- ! I COULD HAVE PREVENTED IT! " Sehun started screaming, hands clutching his hair. " Sehun, what are you talking about? What do you mean?" Kyungsoo said. Sehun continued shaking. " Someones is out to get Shinyeong. Someones out to get Dhinyeong." Sehun keeo muttering those words . All of the exo members were puzzled. Tge ambulance came. Luhan went into the same ambulance as Shinyeong was. " Please wake up Shinyeong ah! Don leave me! " Luhan wailed. You open your eyes and grab his hands with all you strenght left. " Luhan- ah. I love you. Even after i die i will still live you. Remember, after im gone, find someone better then me even shes not that pretty. Like you said ' Beauty is never the question' . I look after you from there but dont forget me. I-i lov-love you, m-my Bambi..." " No! Please no! " But Luhan knows its no use screaming out. You were gone even before you managed to reach the hospital. " Shinyeong. Why must you leave me again. Why? Ill never forget you Shinyeong-ah. Never. And i will try my best to move on. Beauty is never the question..'
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Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^