Okay a note..

GOTOP (God of the outer Planets)

Don't over annalize the way I am writeing this story I want you guys to feel like you hanging in time and space. That is why details are missing almost all the facts are there if you read carefully.. I want you confused that's what I am going for.

Because I want you to think.

Later I will fix this chapter to be an actual chapter.

If you have an issue...

really...

THIS

 

IS

 

 

SPARTA

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Aikatherine #1
Chapter 5: woah. What a note. Okay, shall not do what im not suppose to do again ^^ Please update really soon~.
CandyPop #2
Chapter 5: LMAO HAHHA alrighty! Shall not over analyze
MichaMicha13 #3
Chapter 5: LOLOLOL the "This is SPARTA!!" Just made me die... Oh how I love you <3
Renzei27 #4
Chapter 5: Lol gahhhh! This is sparta!? Lol

Ok i wont over analyze again!!!

Just keep updating...i wanna put together the puzzle!

Update!
Ryeo_bfflau75 #5
Chapter 4: Omggg. Kai D; poor Kai...omg omg is he okay.... TT TT just imagining him in that state just...horrifies me. Well I'm glad he's okay now c: gonna take a clean shower and be all better now right kkamjong~~ ^^ hehe 
Aaaaaah~~ so much love between the EXO members kekeke >u< BaekYeol and KaiSoo and Kray~~ <33 ... Hold up so why was kris angry and he smacked Lay aaaww and Lay's lover what what happened to her omg did she die or something? Umm I think I'll read that over again. 
GET YOUR KRAYON.
Just kidding c: can't wait for the next update~~ 
YES^^ three girls introduced! :D Aha cool! 
*reads over again* OHHH. OHH. LAY IS JUST COMPARING HOW HE FEELS ABOUT HIS LOVER TO KYUNGSOO's LOVE FOR KAI... Right?... Haha.... And kris is apparently mad at him? Hold up hold up. Something is going on between these two O_O hmmm 

Btw that gif of Kai is freakin y. 

And sorry for long comment, unnie.. c: hehe....
Aikatherine #6
Chapter 4: Try not to rush. I'm pretty confuse with the chapter but nonetheless it has a suspense which keeps everyone going.
Renzei27 #7
Chapter 4: I am so confused reading this chapter...did i miss something? You had some typos and misspelled words...i hope your not rushing to update...take your time to gather everything together...

Kris came out of no where slapping lay, and all of a sudden kai is healed? ...

Did lay or kris other half die?

Update!!!
CandyPop #8
Chapter 4: My poor EXO! :'( all feeling terrible! Find you other halfs soon and feel better! Be happy and well! Dx *P.S TOTALLY NOT RUSHING THE STORY! TAKE YOUR TIME!*
dearjustanothergirl #9
Chapter 4: Lay's other half may die? The girl?
JjangJoo #10
Chapter 4: Kai.... Aww.. poor baby,.
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