Destination Zero

Description

Organization One: the composed team in charge of eliminating personals and carrying out missions as well as making sure that orders and demands have been met.

Organization Two: the composed team in charge of cleaning up after Organization One.

Luhan who gets pulled into another phenomenal abyss is forced into action and danger. Kris and Victoria who are already part of the organization will have to mentor him through life and death, while divorcee Namjoo is also thrown into a sphere she's never known before when she is handed a gun and told to defend. Changmin will hunt the rest down when missing persons become much of a controversy and a danger to him losing his position. 

***Characters are mine, this is all from my imagination. I'm only borrowing images and names, no other intention.

***Sorry, I have put 3 Ways on a semi-hiatus for right now. I have not yet given up on it since it has a lot of potential from my point of view. I will get back to that story once I know exactly where I want to go with it. Please hang in there with me!

Foreword

Ok, I must add this. Why did I suddenly write this? I am currently on a writer's block for 3 Ways, and LeeSHaRQZ_Hsu asked me a while ago if I could write a sequel contiuing from 'Golden Mary' with Victoria and Luhan and add Kris to the picture. I took the idea into consideration and it doesn't sound too bad. Although I'm not writing a sequel to 'Golden Mary' I'm going to come up with another exciting mix full of action, because other than mystery and murder I think I'm getting into liking the action genre now. 

Anyway back to the topic. Why did I write this out of the blue? Ideas came to me when we watched a Bollywood movie in my Indian History class, Mangal Pandey. It was more interesting than I expected. It's a little historical, but it's a lot more interesting than that. It's about India's uprising and their fight for independence from the British rule and the East India Company. Apart from that are two good friends, Gordon, who's British, and Mangal, who's Indian. The gunpowder used for battle was greased with cow fat and we should know that cows are a sacred animal in Hinduism. The East India Company made the Indian soldiers use these gunpowder and when the truth was found out that cow fat was used to grease it, the Indians were enraged so thus, Mangal turns against Gordon, who promised without fact that the gunpowder was indeed not greased with cow fat (but this was not his fault). So two friends turn against each other, romance comes into the picture for Mangal and Gordon, but even so Mangal and his friends fight against the British, here coming the uprising. The fight begins, Gordon has no other option but to fight Mangal. My heart literally wrenched here as it was so painful to watch two good brothers and friends fight even though they weren't of the same color or origin. Mangal tries to kill himself, Gordon tries to save him when the British officials want to kill him. A little wedding ceremony is held by Mangal's lover when she visits him in jail and sweet Jesus Christ I really wanted to cry here if it weren't for the fact that I was in class ;A; 

Anyway, this movie was awesome, daebak! And I will certainly watch it again! But, it was from this movie where I got motivation and ideas to write this story up. I'm going interweave drama and friendship all into this story to make it the best and pain your hearts ^^ Wait for it!

***Added as of 10/18/12


"I didn't want this, let me back to the beginning..."

Characters:

Victoria: part of Organization One, well focused on her job, has a soft heart personally, will do what is needed, specializes on one-on-one combat. 

Kris: part of Organization One, strong mentality, smart generally, outgoing, considerate, specializes in guns and is a trained sniper.

Luhan: strong headed, very determined, stubborn, worked for a packaging company until he witnesses a murder one night which forces him into Orgnization One. 

Namjoo: works in the government as a general secretary but is handed a gun one day when her boss gets assasinated, Luhan's ex-wife, has a sturdy personality, innocent, and feminine. 

Changmin: police officer, righteous, strong willed, and very kind. 

***I will add other characters later. Note that this forewords may change in the future. I will also be using DBSK and Suju characters as people who will appear here and there throughout the story. 

Synopsis:

A now split up Luhan and Namjoo who hope to begin their new lives find their lives overturned when they're suddenly thrown into a world of chaos and violence. Adapting to his new environment is an agile Luhan, but discovers how twisted his fate is when Organization One is targeting a government coup after them. His two choices are to kill Namjoo, who is in this coup, or to die by the hands of his now comrades. Once Changmin joins the chase, Kris and Victoria find themselves entagled in a web of humanity seeking for survival. Their fates cross and new interactions bring along new interests further worsening their circumstances once emotions come into play. Will they get out of this organization alive? Will friendship and betrayal kill them all?

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kyuraa #1
Chapter 40: phewww, finally finished reading all the chapter
took me a long time to chapter 40
your storyline was a little confusing when i read chapter 1
and i'm getting the hang of it after reading chapter 2
actually the storyline was not what i expected at first
especially with the detail about the organization one and the way they doing their job
but it's all good, the story is and so does the character..
nice :D
Tinywings
#2
Chapter 2: Oh gosh am I really doing this?? Yes yes, I am~

Chapter two was a lot better to follow for me! I really liked it! Compared to the first chapter, this one was written more smoothly and more easily to follow. Very good! :D More nad more story development and I really, really like how this is all going. Lovely! You're always brilliant when it comes to these kind of action stories, sigh. Poor Luhan and Namjoo who don't even have the time to elaborate what is happening to them. So many things happening in such a short time, and quite some heavy events too, that they should receive compliments for not already breaking down completely, losing sanity and all. Forever loving seeing some super junior members pop up, and yixing's role is so endearing keke. such a lovely friend. kris makes me laugh for no good reason lol. he just does.

And this was my comment for chapter 2. *takes a deep breath* what have i gotten myself into... just joking, because actually i quite like it. i just apologize for writing so much nonsense and spamming your story lol. actually, no, i'm not apologizing. you'll certainly deserve this spam when i reach the end, because my heart will most likely break apart and all, so yeah, this is your punishment.

damn. why do i always go off topic?
Tinywings
#3
Chapter 1: And here I am, making a big entrance lol lol

I just realized I did not subscribe to this story, because I always just simply bookmark it keke. Oh gosh I was trying so hard not to read the comments below and then I suddenly saw the first sentence of the previous comment below and I'm like 'damn, why did i read it'. but well yeah, i'll just forget it whuahaha.

First chapter was decent. I think the only point I did not like is that the descriptives in the beginning made me lose it a little. I thought I understood where this was going and then it suddenly the scene changed without me knowing it lol. Also some difficult sentences I had to reread because I did not understand them (or maybe it's because i'm sleepy right now and couldn't resist reading something before sleeping lol). HOWEVER, very well thought plot. Still a lot of things I don't understand but that's the way to keep the attention glued to the story :p A lot of things happened in this story, so I really had to keep my mind on the story because otherwise I really did not understand it. BUT very good first chapter. Succesfully triggered my curiosity. Do keep in mind not to put too much in a chapter, because that way people can get confused easily.

Well, commented on the first chapter because that's always a must lol (for me, at least). First chapters are first impressions that need to be told keke. I'll be off reading the next chapter now lol - what's sleep? xD
Avihux #4
Namjoo died so soon~~;o; poor Kris~
I new it!!! so someone shooted Vic T0T, thank u for not killing her, i'm happy she could finally find happiness, even thought i'm kind of sad for her ending, para lized was ok, but why mute? ;u;
Jejeje anyway is your story and i loved it!! ^^
Sorry for bothering u, but could u make one story with Vic and Changmin, i love them, and i loev ur stories, so is perfect xD, think about please~
Thanh u and see u in Blaze~
eternalspring
#5
Chapter 40: AAAAAAA I'M CRIES T.T
they are finally reunion after the long~~~~ separated / sob
aaahh baekhyun keep his promise to give kris namjoo apartement... and on the end the starcross lover being kris - namjoo T.T
victoria and changmin !! aaaaaahhh changmin keep his promise to come to saved her~~~~
just get them married unnie hahaha even if just my delusional....
haaaaaa this story make me a lot emotion.... really really really a beautiful story XD
and now I just focus to 3 ways and blaze kekekeke chanjoo and haetoria haha
keep writing another beautiful story unnie~ fighting !! :D
lizxxi
#6
Chapter 40: Wow this was such an amazing story!!
Wish Vic wasn't disabled...but I'm so happy that she has her own happy ending!
I feel so bad for kris cus he really loves namjoo but they couldn't be together....(sob)
I'm really looking forward to ur next fic blaze!! Haetoria❤
lizxxi
#7
Chapter 39: Vic is prob hurting so much inside but she's such a great actress I front if changmin
Pls tell me that neither of changtoria died and they have a happy ending!!! Plsssss
Avihux #8
Chapter 39: asgasfa why???!! I've been waiting for Changtoria reunion and is so sad ;__; , and i can't believe this fic is gonna be over soon, i love it~ i'm gonna miss ur updates <3
Krisjoo wedding was so cute and beautiful ;n;
I don't think Vic shooted Changmin, she can't hate him no matter how hard she tries, don't know why but i think someone else shooted Vic (i hope i'm wrong, dint kill her plis ;~;) OTL, i want them together and happy.
Thanks for updating~
eternalspring
#9
Chapter 39: Of course vic can't shoot him... it's because she's to love to changmin...
aaaaaahhh is vic shoot herself ?? victoria can't die T.T
ah~~~~ baekjoo moment :(((
namjoo already told baekhyun to looking for kris T.T
is she feel she's will die unnie ?? andwaeeeeeeee :((((