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The Library Girl (Hiatus until i graduated thats until april next yr)
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~Chapter V~

“Wow, Unnie this looks good!” you said as you sat on the chair beside Hyorin. “Dig in” she said. You’re eating in silence until Hyorin ask you something “So, who’s that guy?” you choke when you heard the question and look at her embarrassed. “He’s name is Jo Young Min.” you answered while looking on your plate. “Young Min in Class C?” Baek Hyun asks me and I answer “Yes”.

-Baek Hyun’s POV-

I heard the door open “I’m home” ________ said while going inside. I’m going downstairs when I heard Hyorin Unnie ask you “I heard someone outside. Did someone with you?” I saw her head pop out in kitchen. “Uhm, Yes” _______ said and I look at her with questioning look but ________ didn’t see it because she’s slipping her shoes out and put it aside, so you didn’t see me. “Really??? Is that a boy???” my unnie said as _________ nod and go upstairs. I secretly clenched my fist. “Who’s that guy???” I thought to myself.

 

“Oh-oh, you have a rival” Hyorin said to me. “Shut-up!” I shoot glares to her. “Why can’t you just confess to her? You’re with her since her parent died but you don’t make a move.” She said and I realize it’s true, “Yeah, Like it’s easy” I answered with a matter-of-fact tone “Because you don’t try” “I’m afraid” I’m really afraid that if I confess to her, she’ll reject me. “So you just sit there and watch here being snatch by that guy?” “Of course not.” “Then make a move” she said going to the kitchen to finish what her doing. As she finishes cooking and settling the table, she asks me to call _________ for dinner.

 

________ go downstairs “Wow, Unnie this looks good!” she said as she sat on the chair beside Hyorin unnie. “Dig in” Hyorin unnie said. We’re eating in silence until Hyorin ask you something “So, who’s that guy?” she looks at ___________. I saw _________ choke when she heard the question. “He’s name is Jo Young Min.” she answered while looking on her plate. “Young Min in Class C?” I ask her and she answer “Yes”. Aish,

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gandangjane07
mianhe.. im really busy in my study because im goibg to graduate april next yr.. after i graduated i will finish this story.. promise :)

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LoLLiMinniE
#1
Chapter 8: I hope you will accept my friendly advices:
It would be really good if you could work on the grammar (not easy I know...English is not my first language)...I understand what you mean but it would be easier for the readers.
Also the conversations are next to each other so it's confussing that who says what. So in my opinion it would be better to separate them (maybe with an enter..?)
I like the story but if you want to make it more exciting than don't just write down that "He do this. He do that."
If that part is important than go more into the details but if it isn't then I think you could leave those out~

I hope you won't take it as a negative response coz I just wanted to give some advices!! ^^
Fighting! :) And keep writing~ =3
Igotsmiles1
#2
Chapter 7: New reader here. I love it!!! <3
melaih
#3
Chapter 7: supa great story you got there! Update soon~
Lisa_lp10 #4
I like this storie,
please keep writing, neh? ^^
melaih
#5
Chapter 6: update soon~
xo-Crown
#6
Chapter 5: NOOOOOOO!! WHY BAEKHYUNN? >.<
LOL. anyway, where's Kwangmin? :3
xo-Crown
#7
O.M.G! A Youngmin fanfic! I'm so going to subscribe to this xD
love_kris
#8
Chapter 2: i love your story
update soon~
luhans
#9
Chapter 2: New Update!. :))
Hahahaha. I Love Luhan, too. I thought you Love Tao and not Luhan. You must be kidding me, Unnie. Pft. XD
Just a request, Can you make every chapter a little longer? It's not a command though. Just a Request. ♥
melaih
#10
Chapter 1: I'm a Filipino too. Hope you update soon!