Chapter 8: I hope you will accept my friendly advices:
It would be really good if you could work on the grammar (not easy I know...English is not my first language)...I understand what you mean but it would be easier for the readers.
Also the conversations are next to each other so it's confussing that who says what. So in my opinion it would be better to separate them (maybe with an enter..?)
I like the story but if you want to make it more exciting than don't just write down that "He do this. He do that."
If that part is important than go more into the details but if it isn't then I think you could leave those out~

I hope you won't take it as a negative response coz I just wanted to give some advices!! ^^
Fighting! :) And keep writing~ =3

Chapter 7: New reader here. I love it!!! <3

Chapter 7: supa great story you got there! Update soon~

I like this storie,
please keep writing, neh? ^^

Chapter 6: update soon~

Chapter 5: NOOOOOOO!! WHY BAEKHYUNN? >.<
LOL. anyway, where's Kwangmin? :3

O.M.G! A Youngmin fanfic! I'm so going to subscribe to this xD

Chapter 2: i love your story
update soon~

Chapter 2: New Update!. :))
Hahahaha. I Love Luhan, too. I thought you Love Tao and not Luhan. You must be kidding me, Unnie. Pft. XD
Just a request, Can you make every chapter a little longer? It's not a command though. Just a Request. ♥

Chapter 1: I'm a Filipino too. Hope you update soon!