Chapter 6: Or maybe take the one who got hurt to the nurses office? bridal style!?


I laughed too hard at this. I'm guilty of half of the things you mentioned. Thanks for the help :)

Chapter 6: i like reading this^^

I think u can say "crashed their lips together" sometimes its good to overdo a few things. It's kind of the same as "he throwed himseft out the door". They dont litteraly crash their lips together, it's just a way to describe that the really want each other or something like that.

But I think all of the other things you say here are true! Ughh i hate when people make Chunji call Ljoe "Oppa" >.<

Chapter 6: Eugh. I've read a story 'with the string of saliva attached' kiss. I was unprepared and it kind of threw me off x.x

Chapter 6: This is perfect, omg.

Chapter 1: I just read a fics when the bridal style thingy came up, hahahaha I cracked so hard and suddenly I felt the urge to comment again to this story xDD

Chapter 6: Oh my god... Right after I read this for the first time I immediately saw/noticed pretty much all of these problems on other fanfics... I was really tempted to link them all to this guide in a comment, but I though that would be rude so I didn't. Either way, your guide is really funny and helpful :)

It's ur old reader and I have two small questions to ask
1)When I write bout school, should I put alot of thought to it like: school's name( I'm thinkin' of HSM high, what do u think? or maybe I should search bout korean school's name and make up one that abit like others in real life X~X)
2)Do u know in korean 9th grade student is freshman~(that's what search on google but should follow it?)

Chapter 6: The bridal style so freaking much. I laughed or cringed whenever I read it, according to the mood of the story

And your explanation about the kissing scene are so funny xD, I can't stop laughing!