Number 3

10 Things to avoid in kpop fanfiction!

Problem: Colored text
Which also includes
lightly colored text + differentely colored text

 

Example:

#1
  - Whoaaa this color is really anoying ot look at! my eyes hurt!



#2

He observed the calm expression on his roommate's sleeping face. How he wished he would be able to look at him affectionately like this even while the other was awake. Unfortunately, will moments like these be his only chance, that's why he treasure these moments the most.how are you suposed to be able to read in this color? I can't even se what I'm writing.

 #3

  - Why?

  - Because I felt like it

  - That's not a good reason!

  - Yes it is!

  - Would you two please stop arguing?
 

Why is this a problem?

I'll start by saying the most important argument, it's god damn annoying to read. And if you read my three examples above you might get my point. Using colored text in your fanfiction is not only disturbing to read but also makes the whole story seem childlish and unserious.

If you read a normal book, you'll notice that they are all in black and white, black ink on white paper. No colors to distract you and maybe give some of the sentences a whole new meaning.

 

Seing fanfiction written with colored letters can also make it feel like you're reading old conversations on chat programs like MSN for example. Which is not the feeling your aiming for when writing fanfiction. 

 

Also the too light colored text is not an option either, you'll have to squint to be able to read and since you're not suposed to use color at all. 



And trying to be smart by using differently colored text for each person is not an option either. To just make a color chart at the beginning and force the reader to memorize which color belongs to who is nothing but laziness.



Colored text isn't only common in stories but I wanted to bring it up anyway, since it's an easy problem to avoid.

How do I avoid this?
Just, don't do it. Fine, you can have your tiny a/n at the end in some color if you want to. Also then the reader knows when to stop reading if he or she isn't interested in reading the authors note.

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Kreeper
#1
Chapter 6: Or maybe take the one who got hurt to the nurses office? bridal style!?


I laughed too hard at this. I'm guilty of half of the things you mentioned. Thanks for the help :)
Kyutebaekyeol
#2
Chapter 6: i like reading this^^
KimikoLuvTeenTop
#3
I think u can say "crashed their lips together" sometimes its good to overdo a few things. It's kind of the same as "he throwed himseft out the door". They dont litteraly crash their lips together, it's just a way to describe that the really want each other or something like that.

But I think all of the other things you say here are true! Ughh i hate when people make Chunji call Ljoe "Oppa" >.<
SaturnXK #4
Chapter 6: Eugh. I've read a story 'with the string of saliva attached' kiss. I was unprepared and it kind of threw me off x.x
heichou_
#5
Chapter 6: This is perfect, omg.
Harmonia
#6
Chapter 1: I just read a fics when the bridal style thingy came up, hahahaha I cracked so hard and suddenly I felt the urge to comment again to this story xDD
d-1knight-of-justice #7
Chapter 6: Oh my god... Right after I read this for the first time I immediately saw/noticed pretty much all of these problems on other fanfics... I was really tempted to link them all to this guide in a comment, but I though that would be rude so I didn't. Either way, your guide is really funny and helpful :)
akihabara48 #8
It's ur old reader and I have two small questions to ask
1)When I write bout school, should I put alot of thought to it like: school's name( I'm thinkin' of HSM high, what do u think? or maybe I should search bout korean school's name and make up one that abit like others in real life X~X)
2)Do u know in korean 9th grade student is freshman~(that's what search on google but should follow it?)
Harmonia
#9
Chapter 6: The bridal style so freaking much. I laughed or cringed whenever I read it, according to the mood of the story

And your explanation about the kissing scene are so funny xD, I can't stop laughing!