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So after victoria was done talking to her grandma she stood up and told them ill be going now. Then taemin said whats wrong. She said there is a urgent at my house. Then Niel followed her he grabbed her hand and they star running. He said here get on my motorcycle it'll be faster. Then victoria said umm no thanks ill use a taxi. Then Niel said wasn't it urgent. Then victoria said fine then ... Niel said grab on tight. Then the motor started and she grabbed his waist making Niel all happy then victoria show niel her house it wasnt as great as other rooftop. Then victoria grandma had a luggage she told victoria im going to the country here is 300 hundred dollars spend it wisely.Then victoria was like cant i go with you.Her grandma shook her head stay here you still have school. Victoria was crying badly her eyes were so red. Then her grandma left her. Niel came up and said you can live with me and taemin if you like our parents are out on a buisness trip plus if they are here in korea they have time to see us anyway. Then victoria said thanks so he drove her to his house then Taemin was like HEY victoria what are you doing here. Niel said from now on she'll be living with us Taemin was excited. Then niel show her the room that shes staying in tthen she organize the room and took out her belongings and put them like she had at home. she looked at her photo abum she saw her family and she started weeping  then she said no need to cry just be succesful FIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!! Then she fell asleep she woke up at 6:30 a.m. she went to a the supermarket to buy groceries .To make the brothers breakfast. At 7:15 a.m. she started heading out she left a note saying :

Im already at school the breakfast is for you guys i hope you enjoy it make sure to clean it up so when we get home i'll cook you guys dinner.!

Taemin started weeping. Niel told him whats wrong ? Taemin said we haven't eat a home cook meal like this since we were five and look at us now im 17 youre 18 and victoria is 17 and she could cook like this. Niel said i know shes really something i really want to know about her more. He sarted remember that she was crying when her grandma left. Then they were finished and they started headed to school then Niel took the not and fold it up and put in his wallet and just smile. So when they arrived they saw victoria and taemin ran up to her and back hug her and he told her the breakfast is DAEBAK yummy. Then eli said you cook for them. Then niel came up and said correct and she also live with us then eli was like aww thats no fair victoria never cooked for me then taemin said how about you come over and eat with us then victoria was all smiley. Then niel said cool. Then hyorin came and said what is everyone talking about then everyone said nothing then Taemin said victoria come here i need to show you something cute everyone didn't even notice they were gone. Then they went behind the school there was a small doghouse taemin said this puppy was abandoned on the streets so i took him in and i took care of him since. Victoria said why don't you take him home. Taemin said he won't even take him home. Taemin said he won't even go as 10 feet from his house, its probably because hes waitng for his mom. Then victoria told the puppy FIGHTING the puppy came up to victoria and kiss her. Then taemin was like aww your so cute in his mind. Then victoria was like but whats his name then taemin said i havent name the puppy yet but can i ask you a favor? Can I name the puppy after you? Victoria was like really after me of course it can. Then Taemin was like okay then let's head back to class. Then Victoria was like I don't wanna go back I wanna stay here all daylong Victoria said the puppy is so cute. Taemin was like you're cute to in is mind. Then Victoria said bye mini Victoria Taemin was just giggling to himself. Then they walk 5 steps and the puppy followed Victoria and Victoria was hugging it and put it back down. Then Taemin said oh we're gonna be late he grabbed her arm and they started running. They made it in time. Victoria was thinking it felt as if Niel was grabbing my hands. Then victoria thought to herself do I like Niel. Then she shook her head and said I like Eli not Niel . Then Victoria thought oh yeah dinner....

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NUR2501
#1
Chapter 13: Such a nice ending! Good job authornim ^-^
sujulovekyutoria
#2
Chapter 1: its really cool but can you use paragraphs please... (sorry for disturbing and i hope yiu are not offended...)
niss125 #3
Cheer up :-D
update please if u have time,,,