School starts

Love is exactly this

So Victoria was working really hard. She has lots of jobs here is some of the lists of her job.

* milk carrying * taking care of her grandma
* newspaper route ( it may be same as the foreword but it will make more sense keep reading :) )

Then Victoria came home to cook for her grandma. They were poor so they live in a rooftop. Finally Victoria earned enough money to go to a extravagant school. Victoria was so proud. The reason she wants to go so bad is her best-friend Eli is at that school. She liked him since when they were younger. But she thinks it could be one sided love. Next day Victoria went to the school she gave the vice president the $2 million dollars. She got her clothes , this school has their own uniforms girls wear tuxs and a skirt guys wear tux. When she was done changing she immediately called Eli. He was behind her came up to her and scared her.  She screamed so loud that everybody looked at her. Then she said a way to be looked down. Eli said no everybody here is nice except for one guy name Niel he's really rich . She ask Eli who is he or where is he. Eli said he's not here yet. Then Eli said you're gonna know when you see him. Then a limo came out of no where. Then some girls just started screaming they shoved Victoria making her drop all her books. Then she was like nice my . Then a someone helped her pick up her books she was like you can go where the mob is at no need to help me. Then when she was finished the guy started to speak saying I don't need to go there when it happens everyday at this school. Then Victoria felt like that is the  way she feel except for seeing someone everyday since its her first day here. Then he introduce himself saying I'm Lee Taemin. Then Victoria said I'm Victoria Song I'm new here. Then he was like I can tell since your not over there where those girls are. Then Victoria ask him why are those girls over there. Taemin said  because the prince has arrived. Victoria said PRINCE then he was like not a real prince but you know like the mean and rich guy. Then Victoria was like a guy name Niel right. He was like yeah how did you know. She said on my friend told me. Taemin was like was like who's that friend she was like oh Eli. Then she ask Taemin do you know him. He said yeah I know him. Taemin said me and Eli know everyone here so if you need just ask one of us. Then a mob of guys surrounded Victoria and Taemin. She was like what's happening Taemin confidently said they think you're pretty so their taking a picture of you. Then the bell rang everybody quickly ran to their class Taemin looked at Victoria schedule and said Victoria you are very lucky today we have the same class. So he grab her hand they and started running while they were running he said if you don't get to class on time they make you stay after school and clean so we have to run. Then they made it in time people were looking at them like they're going out one girl says ouhhhh then whole class said it also,Taemin was like no I'm just helping a newbie here. Victoria said newbie really. He was like nah forget it then she took a spot sitting next to the window some of the guys started to surrounded her making her uncomfortable. Then Taemin was thinking when Niel sees her he'll probably freak out. Meanwhile at Niels class a guy had a report to show Niel it was a picture of Victoria Niel was like wow who is she the guy said a new girl at this school. Then another guy came in and said its bet time, he was Niels rival. The guy said I will make a bet with Niel he said I bet Niel can't get that new Girl to go out with him. Niel said I bet I can. Then the guy said deal and he said try to ask her at lunch. So then Eli came in to Niels class they had the same class then Eli said to Niel what sup Niel was like sup then Eli said another bet Niel was like yeah! Eli said for what Niel said if I can get the new girl to go out with me. Eli was Uh Oh. Niel was like what Eli said oh nothing. Then Eli texted Taemin saying : ( Niel is gonna ask Victoria out so make her underestimate him ) Taemin reply : ( roger ) 3 hours pass it was time for lunch Niel was already at the cafeteria at the table with his rival then Taemin was with Victoria he was showing her around she understood him. Then Eli came and hug Victoria he was like so how's class she was like its okay I guess Niel was shock because Taemin and Eli was with her. But then he just looked at Victoria because she was so pretty. Then Taemin was like you know that guy right their he's the prince, Eli was like he's really evil. Victoria was like he don't look that mean. Then Eli said it's not the outside but the inside, okay. Victoria was like oh okay. Then they find a spot to sit. Then Taemin raise his hand to a number 2 then Eli started to lay on Victoria shoulders saying Wah I'm so tired. Niel was coming but then sat back down. The guy was like can't do it well pay up now. Then Niel was like shut up I can do it. Then a girl came it made Eli stop laying on Victoria shoulders. Then Taemin grab Victoria hand and said lets get something to eat she was like oh okay then the girl ask Eli who's that Eli said oh it's Victoria. Then the girl was like oh okay. Then the girl was like does she know...then the girl stop talking when Victoria and Taemin were back. Victoria was next to Taemin because the girl was by Eli. Then Eli said this is hyorin. hyorin said hi. Then Eli said this is Victoria. Then Victoria said hi. They greeted each other nicely. But the face on Taemin wasn't satisfied it seems that he doesn't like Sunny. Then Sunny said Victoria and Taemin looks like a couple, she just said it out of nowhere. Then Victoria spit her rice out of shocked hearing that. Taemin wiped and playfully said you think so hyorin. hyorin was like I'm for real. Then Eli was like stop it it's not funny. Then Sunny immediately got quiet. Then the bell rang it means lunch was over. When Taemin and Victoria headed out Victoria ask Taemin is Sunny always joking like that. Taemin was like not usually, then Taemin said maybe your new that's why. Then Victoria said what if she keeps on doing it.  Taemin was like nah. Then he grabbed her shoulders and he said lets go for we're late. Then behind them was Niel he was just watching the two, and he said how did he know her first. He looked pissed. Then the guy said looks like I'm gonna win and you're gonna lose. Niel was like I'm not going to lose I never lose so you just wait you hobo. Then Niel walked away. The guy said my name is not hobo but Hubo you got that but Niel was gone like the wind. Three hours later school was over. Taemin showed Victoria around the school a little more. Then Taemin greeted a bye to Victoria and Taemin said let's be good friends from now on. Victoria was like okay! Then they went their separate ways. Taemin got in a limo and Niel was like how did you know her. Taemin said I'm her friend you know. Then Niel said what about Eli Taemin said they're childhood friends. Then Niel was like how can I compete with that now. Taemin said if you like her ask her out but don't use her as a bet she is not a toy ! Niel was like you know I never lose to Hubo. Taemin said I know but make it your first time losing alright Victoria is a nice person so don't do anything bad or you'll regret it. Niel was like yeah-yeah! So then Victoria got home she saw a mail about the payment it was $1580! She was shocked but then she just called her grandma gut the grandma wasn't there. So she started to change then cooked her grandma arrived and Victoria was like grandma where did you went. The grandma said I went to the cemetery to bless your parents you came home late so I just went without you. Then Victoria said well next time take me with you. So they ate and went to sleep.

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NUR2501
#1
Chapter 13: Such a nice ending! Good job authornim ^-^
sujulovekyutoria
#2
Chapter 1: its really cool but can you use paragraphs please... (sorry for disturbing and i hope yiu are not offended...)
niss125 #3
Cheer up :-D
update please if u have time,,,