The Proposal review by Shiningstarstruck

Title: 4/5

For me, your tittle suit the story but it is better if the title was "The Proposal Day" or "That Proposal Day".

Foreword/Description: 7/10

You should make your description a bit longer and give a bit more information about the story but not so obvious. Your foreword was nice, neat and beautiful. I don't have any problem reading it.

Poster/Background/Trailer: 3/10

The poster was not that attractive. You should request a poster and background from a graphic shop. It will makes your story more attractive.

Storyline/Originality: 7/10

I like your imagination and the story line also great. At first I thought that Myungsoo would die or the girl cheated on him but not. It was the girl who would die. So far I didn't read any fiction like that so yours are the first. ^^ And I like angst story.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10

There's no grammar mistake and spelling mistake that I found. Congrats!

Entertainment: 3/5

It is entertaining and I had so much fun reading it. 

Writing Style: 7/10

Your writing style is great but not that attractive. 

Total: 41/60

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Keep up the good work.

-18 Oct 2012 ; 5.50 p.m-