ℓ'm foolishly In ℒove with a ℳannequin❣ review by Shiningstarstruck

Title: 4/5

Title of the story sure fit to the story but also kinda obvious.

Foreword/Description: 8/10

I like your description very much. It was neat and easy to read. It doesn't messy at all. But you should do more though to make it more attractive.

Poster/Background/Trailer: 5/10

Your poster is quite plan and simple. You should request a poster from a graphic shop. Your background is okay. It simple but fit with the theme of the story.

Storyline/Originality: 7/10

Your storyline is great. I can't predict what would happen next. I love how you arrange the plot. Interesting to read. I never read something like that before but I think the storyline is a bit common. I love how you end the story though it a bit hanging.

Grammar/Spelling: 7/10

I only spot one spelling mistake that is she lectured me for the nth time. It should be like this she lectured me for the ninth time.

Your grammar is okay but there was some mistakes. You forgot to put "ed" at some word. Past tense rule.

Entertainment: 3/5

It sure does entertain me. I enjoy reading it. I had so much fun.

Writing Style: 8/10

Your writing style is good, great and nice. It really nice to read. 

Total: 42/60

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Keep up the good work! :D

-18.Oct.2012 ; 05.34 p.m-