Short, Sweet, and Simple

Let's Write the Night Away

Titles

Now, the title, is something that should help catch the attention of a reader, and ironically enough, I named this chapter simple. However, make sure it's a good way of attracting readers, make sure it's not something that's in caps with more than one exclamation mark, alright. Or maybe even two exclamation mark, if you really want to be that bold, but don't exceed 3.

I'm sure you've heard alot of people say before, make the title something short, sweet and simple, as well as on topic. In my personal opinion, the ideal title should be around 5 or less words.

So, not something like;

'OH MY GOD, ______'s THE FATHER OF MY BABY?!'

or

'MY SCARY HOT GANGSTER BOYFRIEND'

...I really had to make those up on top of my head. I'm aleady bad at titling things, and well, this just killed everything.

As I was saying;

Use something short, sweet, and simple. Remember having it on the topic/theme of your story. Don't name a story 'Zamboni' and then have nothing to do with a zamboni at all. Along with that, a title should leave the reader curious enough to click it, or atleast read the description to see if they like it. So if you see something like;

MY BOYFRIEND, THE NERD, IS SECRETLY A HOT GANGSTER!!!!!!!111

Well, I hope you know what's wrong with that title. The title just gave away the whole story. Okay, the main character discovered their boyfriend is a hot gangster. Alright then. There's nothing really left for the reader to ponder about; you just told them straight up. Only a reader bored enough to read the story that have already been posted so many times on AFF would bother to click.

I'm sure something like; November Rain, would catch your attention. Because well, it caught mine (Yes, I am using the featured story for the example. Because well, it was the first thing I saw and I can't think of my own).

It made me think a bit as to what significance rain had in the story.  It must play a huge part in the story as the author even specify when the rain had fallen (I sort of feel like an English teacher). If I had seen something like this on a shelf of a book store of a library, I would most certainly pick it up and read the summary of it.

So try something different with your story title, instead of despribing the whole thing in your title, leave something for your readers to ponder about.

Also, there's a few more things you should keep in mind when titling your story.

  • Try not to put symbols, it makes your story look awfully unprofessional
  • Capitalizing is important. Not like, EVERY WORD. However, the beginning of every word, except for; the, a, and of, words like those (Exception being if they're the first word) 
  • No puncuation should be needed. So, try to re-frain from using exclamation/question marks.
  • Don't add faces/emoticons onto your titles. Like, really bro?

 

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travellingIdeas
#1
Chapter 13: same goes for me, i mispelled things. i once made a mistake where i spelled 'craving' but what i meant was 'carving' it was two different word and latter, until few chapters i realized my mistake and i was suprised none of my readers told me that.
and on the other fic i made another mistake (again) when i wrote a false description (in the desc, i wrote the one who's dead is the main character's older brother. but in the story it was the main character's younger bro) and again, suprisingly no one seemed to notice it (or just not even caring to tell me, or just plain ignorant. mehh, cynical me got better of me)
travellingIdeas
#2
Chapter 15: i admit, i have senteces like 'some
stuff like that' and 'and stuff' on my story. i will
be workin on it. thank you for being
such an eye opener!
-caas-
#3
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop/gallery/list/contest/roleplay :
Read the rules, complete this form , put it in the comments box for this link and you will be on the list.

Author's name:
Author's link:
Co-authors:
Created:
Status:
Banner's link:
Shop's Title:
Shop's link:
Shop genre:
Description:
Author's Note:
Info you want to add:
Services/Packs/posters/trailers exp:

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namzUd #4
Chapter 11: I loved your tips.I just startes my first fanfic and I knew it didn't look right bt I didn't know how to make it better since ppl hardly comment.This helped a ton! Thank you so much!! Looks like I have quite a bit of editing to do...
fartberries
#5
These tips are amazing! Probably one of the most helpful advice shop that I've come across. Please come back and offer us more of your wonderful writing advices!
eusiah
#6
Chapter 6: Omg the zelo regular example omfglol xD

These tips are really helpful :)
MoonSungRa
#7
You're amazing!! I really love the way you write! You are so talented!! <3 I'd like to read one of your ff but I see that you have none! If you do have ones please tell I can find them, because you're the most talented ff writer I've ever seen. Usually I don't I don't read those kind of fanfics, but the yongguk one sounds great! :D Also all your tips are amazing! Actually I'm not an ff author/writer, but I enjoyed reading those advices! <3
MoonSungRa
#8
Chapter 1: Here you made a mistake! 2. N'oublie* pas le titre! ^^
Kawaii_Player
#9
Chapter 5: Thanking for the tips. :D