I'm really sorry to complaint about ur ff...
U have a talent to become a great author
But i think u need improvement...especially in ur grammar...
N...'bout some vocab u used...it's like u've been translated directly from ur language to english...by any chance are u malaysian???if yes ,,,same as me..because sometimes when i wrote in englirh...i also translated to it directly...hehe
Again i'm really sorry if i comment something bad!!!
Chapter 35: wait..before i complement your fanfic,,
let me say that i LOVE your Seohyun's fanboys video and SeoHan ar SeoKris Shipper's video..
i can't believe you're the one who made that..
my my i mean it..i LOVE those video
and now..
it's okay for the grammar errors..sometimes there's a grammar error in my comment too..
my Syizi93 unnie said that it's okay as long as you're willing to learn..
i like your fanfic..i like the idea..like the way you tell the story..sometimes it's sad..funny..and romantic too
i'm waiting for the next fanfic of yours..
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