I'm really sorry to complaint about ur ff...
U have a talent to become a great author
But i think u need improvement...especially in ur grammar...
N...'bout some vocab u used...it's like u've been translated directly from ur language to english...by any chance are u malaysian???if yes ,,,same as me..because sometimes when i wrote in englirh...i also translated to it directly...hehe
Again i'm really sorry if i comment something bad!!!

Chapter 35: woah I like this ending kkkk… nice ending author-nim

Chapter 35: woah I like this ending kkkk… nice ending author-nim

Chapter 35: wait..before i complement your fanfic,,
let me say that i LOVE your Seohyun's fanboys video and SeoHan ar SeoKris Shipper's video..
i can't believe you're the one who made that..
my my i mean it..i LOVE those video

and now..
it's okay for the grammar errors..sometimes there's a grammar error in my comment too..
my Syizi93 unnie said that it's okay as long as you're willing to learn..

i like your fanfic..i like the idea..like the way you tell the story..sometimes it's sad..funny..and romantic too
i'm waiting for the next fanfic of yours..

by the way..nice too meet you here

Chapter 9: =.= my head hurts from all of the grammar errors

first fanfic I've read who make me fall in love with another seokris fanfic...good job author-nim, I have so much fun reading your story ^^

Yay!Finally done! :D
A happy ending! ^^

good story

yeah yeah happy ending! I like this story. I'll wait ur new story...