Which joke?

Hurricane Girl

 

« I’ll ensure you don’t ignore me anymore”

 

These words were playing in her head like a tape put on repeat mode. By chance, their conversation had been interrupted by Sora’s phone which had started to ring. It was her friend who was asking her to replace her at the nightclub’s bar once again. And for once, she was happy to receive a phone call. Without wasting any time she had taken her stuff and ran away like a rocket, leaving Kris with a smile on his face. He had a long way to go if he wanted to impress her.

She left the work at the bar at 3AM. No need to say that she was worn out and especially because she had to be at school early in the morning to clean the practice rooms before the students start arriving. On her way home she was already thinking about her warm bed but once she got under her blankets she couldn’t help thinking about Kris. Why on earth did he have to come in her head? Finally, she fell asleep only at 6AM. But as professional as she was, she went to work anyway. After greeting the teachers, she went to her locker to pick up the stuff she needed to work. But instead of finding her gloves and cloths, she found ballet slippers and a record of admission to school with a scholarship offer. For a surprise, it was a surprise. She couldn’t believe what she was seeing. But she came back to earth and realized that there was no reason for her to be chosen to integrate the school. Someone had found out how much she wanted to integrate this school and decided to make fun of her.

She grabbed the shoes and the contract and threw them into the nearest trash can. She couldn’t believe someone could be that mean. Finally she found her cleaning stuff at the concierge’s room and did what she went there to do: cleaning.

12:00 lunch time. As usual Sora went to the rooftop to eat her meal, away from the noise, away from the others. She found her bubble, her own universe; where she could let her feelings come out. As she was feeling anger and despair, tears started falling from her eyes.

“Stop crying. You aren’t allowed to cry for this.” She said to herself but tears just couldn’t stop flowing.

She cried a few minutes then she noticed her sandwich was drenched by her tears.

“Paboya. You just succeeded in wasting a sandwich.” She yelled at herself.

But she wasn’t as alone as she thought.

“Do you always talk to yourself like that?”

She turned even if she already recognized that teasing and scornful voice. She couldn’t stop thinking about it last night.

She was embarrassed as her eyes were still wet but there was no way she would show it to him. He was already scornful enough. She heavily sighed, whispering “aish” between her lips. But Kris did like he didn’t notice and sat beside her, taking a mouthful of her sandwich.

“Make yourself at home!” she yelled with a shocked expression turning towards him.

“That’s exactly what I’m doing as you can see.”

She really wanted to hit him, but she couldn’t. He was one of the students and she would immediately be fired.

“You didn’t come to dance’s class this morning. You’re such a naughty girl. The teacher was upset.”

“What are you talking about? I’m not a student of this school.”

“Are you going to eat this?” showing her sandwich. But he snatched it from her hands even before she had the time to answer.

“Didn’t you find your shoes and your admission contract in your locker this morning?” he added the mouth full.

She couldn’t believe he was a son of a rich family. He was really lacking manners and the way he eats was disgusting.

“How do you know about that? So you are the one who did that joke to me? You must be so bored to do such stupid things”

Why did it not surprise her? He was totally the kind of guy to do such miserable things. But strangely, she had hoped that it didn’t come from him. But he was faithful to himself and his reputation.

“Which joke? I’m telling you your name was on the call list this morning. I said some nice words to the director about you. You’re now a student of this school. No need to thank me.”

And he goes back to eating his sandwich.

She was speechless. Thank him? What had he done? And why?

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For those who have read the story before I edit this chapter, I had a problem with my internet connexion and I didn't update the end of the chapter, I ad the missing part at the end of the chapter here.

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189
#2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie
#6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
heemander
#7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl
#10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!