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Hurricane Girl

 

“I just want one thing from you.”

Kris’s face was so close to hers that she could feel his breath on her face.

“What do you think you’re doing?” She asked trying to keep calm even if her heart was beating fast.

His playful smile had come back on his face as he was getting closer to her. Seeing that she didn’t react the way he wanted her to, he moved back.

“What I need is simple.”

Crossing his arms on his chest he smiled.

“Just be my friend.”

“Are you kidding me? I’m being serious right now.”

“I’m serious too.”

She was starting to get annoyed but he seemed to be serious.

“What do you mean by being your friend?”

“Even at elementary school they know what “friend” means”

That guy was driving her crazy. She never knows when he is serious because he is always playing.

“What does that involve?”

“You’ll see.”

He was about to leave when she grabbed his shirt at the back.

“By chance, you aren’t asking me to be your GIRL-friend, right?”

“You don’t seem to know me but you’re not really the type of girls I usually date. But if it’s what you want…”

“I was just making sure you don’t have dirty thoughts on head!”

“Aren’t you letting me go now?”

She was still grabbing his shirt.  She released him.

“See you tomorrow at school chingu-yah”!

 

That night in her bed she had difficulties to fall asleep once again because of Kris. When she left home for work that night she was prepared for the worst things he would ask her to do for him. Kris’s reputation was telling everything about the kind of guy he was. She had never seen him with the same girl at school like at the nightclub. At first when his face got close to hers she even thought that he would kiss her. But he ended up asking her to be her friend. Really! Of all she had imagined him asking to her, she never thought about that. Anyway, she fell asleep that night with the think that he would have asked for something worse than that. But did she even know what “being friend” involved?

The next morning, Sora woke up in hurry, thinking about the contract and the dance shoes she had threw in a trash can. Getting ready in a hurry, she arrived at school when there were still any students. She asked the concierge if he had seen a contract and a pair of shoes in a trash can the day before. He looked at her like she was crazy. Who on earth would throw a contract in a trash can? He seemed to think. She was aware of how much it would sound stupid but she didn’t need to be scolded now, she needed to find it first.

 “I’m not the one who took care of the rubbish yesterday. But you’ll better hurry and find this contract now…”

She heard a truck behind her and she turned to see the garbage truck starting to pick up the rubbish.

“Ajusshi STOOOP!” she screamed running at the truck. “Please stop I need to find something really important in these rubbish first.”

“Which important think? We need to do our work miss so you’d better get away.”

Without thinking, she knelt down and started searching her contract between the food scraps and the used papers. But she didn’t find anything. After searching like a fool for a few minutes, the scavengers yelled at her.

“You are wasting our time miss. Please we need to go now.”

She raised her head to find that a few students were standing there looking at her; they were all disgusted at her sight. Some of them were even taking pictures of her laughing. You might think she was full of shame at that moment but another feeling was so strong that she wasn’t feeling the shame: the despair. All her hopes were disappearing in her head as they came yesterday. After the garbage truck left, she stayed sitting on the ground a moment. With a dull stare in her eyes. She didn’t even have the strength to cry. The students were still coming. She could hear the noise around her. They were laughing, wondering if she had any shame. They could laugh or take pictures, she didn’t care anymore. She would never be a part of this school anyway.

When she definitely found the strength to get up, the other students were already in class. She was bent removing the dirt from her jogging when foot stopped in front of her.

“I don’t even want to know with whom you fought.”

She knew that voice. But she wasn’t in a state of mind at which she could handle his jokes.

“But I’m curious to know who won the battle. It seems like you got beaten.”

She did like she didn’t notice he was there, took her bag and turned away from him.

“What’s going on?” he asked grabbing her by the arm and forcing her to face him.

“Don’t talk to me anymore.” She yelled at him furious.

“I don’t have to tell you since I don’t have to be your “friend” anymore.”

“What does that mean? What happened?”

She wished she would never be weak in front of anyone but at that moment she wasn’t able to hold her tears.

“I lost my contract.” She confessed.

For a reason she ignored herself, she would have expected him to be at least compassionate but he burst out laugh at her face. Releasing her arm he started laughing so hard that tears started flowing from his eyes. Hit him? Yell at him? Leave him there? She was so shocked at his reaction that she didn’t know how to react. He stood up in front of her with his hands on hips.

“You really look like the unlucky main character of a drama!” he said while rummaging in his bag.

“Is it THIS contract that you lost?”

He was handing her contract to her. Her eyes widened.

“Where did you…”

“Do you think I would leave a contract I was responsible for, being thrown in the garbage? My father would have killed me.”

She was speechless. She was just able to stare at him.

“You retrieved it from the trash can yesterday?”

“Yes and you owe me a lot. I had to put my hand in a trash can. Do you realize? MY HOLY HAND!”

What does she have to do with this guy? He was responsible of her greatest troubles but at the same time he was able to be her greatest savior.

“You don’t even know how much I’m indebted to you right know!”

“Of course you owe me a lot. Treat me for a pizza someday. Oh and I wasn’t able to retrieve your shoes. Someone threw coffee on it, they were irrecoverable.”

“It’s not the most important now.”

“Oh when you’ll step in Miss K’s class you will realize how much it’s important.”

Talking about Miss K, they heard a throat clearing near them and Miss K was standing there.

“Are you both going to stay here when the class is starting in 30 minutes? And Ms. Han, I hope you aren’t expecting me to accept you in my class like this?”

Indeed she was dirty. Kris handed her contract and they separated as Sora had to hurry to take a shower before going to class. When she came out of the changing rooms, she was running so fast that she bumped into a guy. She stopped a moment to apologize but he grabbed her by the arm.

What do they all have with grabbing my arm?

“Could you please tell me when I would find the director’s office?” the guy asked. “I’m a new student.”

She had to hurry, but she just couldn’t let him lost like that so she took a minute to tell him where he had to go. And it had nothing to do with the fact that he was perfectly handsome. She was just a kind person. Then she bowed to him and ran to her class. Looking at her watch, she saw that she was one minute late.

Just one minute” she thought.

But it seemed like that one minute was too much…

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I hope you waited for it so here is the fourth chapter. I'm introducing a new main character here too. The new student. I'm still thinking about which idol I could make him be. At first I didn't want to involve another idol in this story but it seems like I will have to. I'm thinking about L (Myungsoo) of Infinite but you can still give me ideas. Don't forget to subscribe and leave comments if you like the story too. It's always nice to read them.

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189
#2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie
#6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
heemander
#7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl
#10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!