Do you trust me?

Hurricane Girl

 

“You are still eating those inedible sandwiches?”

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets. She didn’t expect him to come especially with that new girl around.

They stared at each other silently for a long moment…

 

“You were greedily eating them last time.” She finally said.

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.” He shrugged his hands on his pockets.

He was embarrassed by her stare on him. It was the first time he meets her alone since Friday night’s incident and he wasn’t proud of what he had done.

He sat on the bench next to her.

She kept staring at him, amazed.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”

“We should go out to eat next time.”

“Yeah you should go.” She turned away and started eating her sandwich.

“How I am supposed to start to talk about that night?”

“How was your dance class?”

“Like a dance class.” She said while sighing.

“I didn’t think you will come today. In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.” She started to pack her stuff to leave.

What he feared the most was happening just in front of him. She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.

“You’re not going to ask me about Friday?” she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“I was actually waiting for you to talk about it first. I ing want you to explain what happened. But which right do I have to ask?” she thought.

 “I know I owe you some explanations.”

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?” She said without hesitation before straightening.

She was only pronouncing his name when she was being serious. He turned to her and softly snatched her bag from her hands. He took a deep breath.

“Listen, I’m sorry about Friday.”

“Sorry for what?”

She maintained his gaze with fierce eyes.

“For pushing you to a wall. I know I don’t have any excuse for that. Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.”

“Just forget about it. I’m not made of paper.” She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.

He took her chin in the palm of his right hand and obliged her to face him.

“Hurting you matters for me.” He confessed with sincere eyes. “Because you’re my friend.”

Sora’s heart was pounding and she couldn’t escape his gaze. Even if she could, she had no envy to escape. At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth. Her lips quietly opened and she whispered.

“Then what happened to you Friday which made you act like you did?”

He released her chin and Sora almost sighed in disbelief. He was now looking away with his hands on his thighs.

“A lot of things happened in my life these past days and I have so many things I want to say…”

He seemed so serious and Sora could detect a little sadness through his words too.

“… but I can’t.”

She wanted to know what made him worry so much.

“Whatever. I already told you, you owe me anything.”

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”

He took her hand and her eyes widened. He got closer to her and his eyes penetrated hers again.

“How I am supposed to keep calm when he doesn’t stop looking at me with those eyes!”

“I need you to trust me.”

She could feel his breath on her skin.

“Trust you?”

“I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time. Do you trust me?”

Sora’s heart was racing. “Why is he so serious?”

Before she could say anything, she heard a voice behind them.

“What are you two doing here? Don’t you know it’s dangerous?”

They both turned towards the voice and saw Mr. Jeong standing there with a furious look in his eyes.

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”

Sora hurried and gathered her belongings before going down with Kris following her.

“I think we need to find a new place to meet from now.” Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile. “What about meeting tomorrow after school?”

“Huuh…”

“I’ll take you after school.”

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.

“Where will we go?” she screamed.

“You’ll see!”

 

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward. She arrived at her first dance class and everybody started asking questions about this or that. So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone. She found a bench under a tree and sat there with a book. She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading. She was reflecting.

“Girls in this school are so curious. They want to know everything about your life and they act like you were longtime friends. When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch. I hated the girls from my school in England. They were so materialistic. I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids. All that mattered for people there was having fun and partying. I may look like the opposite of it, but I’m an old-fashioned girl. I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket. This is me. I’ve always been like that.”

She sighed. When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her. She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time. She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long. She had grown up as a unique child and she could only see her father a few times in a year. She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago. Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.

“Hey pretty lady!” one of them said squatting in from of her.

She furrowed her eyebrows. They didn’t seem like the guys you want to get involved in something with.

“How come I’ve never seen such a beautiful girl like you around?” he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.

“You seem like a new student. Come with me I’ll show you around.”

The guy grabbed her arm and pulled her. Her book fell down.

“Leave me alone please.”

“What are you talking about? It’s going to be fun come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough. She had never been. Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.

“You’re hurting my arm!” she complained.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school. There was anybody around.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”

She looked over her shoulder to see her belongings getting more and more distant.

“She said to leave her alone. Don’t you understand?” a masculine voice said.

She looked ahead and her eyes widened.

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189
#2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie
#6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
heemander
#7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl
#10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!