Did you miss me?

Hurricane Girl

 

DID YOU MISS ME?

 

Just one minute” she thought.

But it seemed like that one minute was too much…

Miss K dance lesson was just for girls. She had never been comfortable with girls. Even from her childhood, she has always been either friends with boys or friendless. At the moment she entered the dance room, all the eyes turned towards her. She remembered that an hour ago she was sitting in the garbage with everybody looking at her.

“Don’t you smell some garbage odor guys?” a tall girl in the middle of the others said and they all laughed until Miss K asked them to stop.

Sora wasn’t really the kind of girl to care about what people think of her. The only person she was caring about here was the teacher. And talking about Miss K, she was staring at her with that unfriendly look of hers.

“I thought you would never come. Let’s get it clear now: you didn’t come yesterday, today you’re late. It doesn’t works like that here.”

She was about to open to apologize but Miss K was staring at her foot. She was barefooted since she had thrown her shoes.

“Ms. Han where do you think you are? On a street dance battle?”

“I’m sorry. I’ll definitely get shoes for the next lesson.”

“Of course you’ll do. But for today you’ll just stand at the side and look at the others. You’ll learn that there are some rules here.”

The lesson started and for her first day Sora had to sit at the side to watch those beginner dancers not being able to do what they were asked to correctly. Not to be arrogant but she had been dancing from an early age. Dance was a talent for her. Looking at those rich kids you could tell that they were there just because dance was a way to became famous and to run away from hard studies. And they weren’t even doing it well. Being rich must be so good, she thought.

One of the girls fell to the ground in pain. She had hurt a muscle. All her friends gathered around her making annoying birdy-like noises.

“She fainted.” “She didn’t eat enough.” “She is too stressed.” “She made too much effort.”

Sora slightly laughed but they heard it and they turned towards her with unhappy gazes.

“What is it funny about someone fainting?” one of them asked.

“Fainted? She has just hurt a muscle because she didn’t stretch up before practicing.”

“You seem to know a lot.” Miss K said. “Let’s see what you’re worth.”

She was surprised but it was the only think she has been waiting for. As soon as she gets up, she started moving to the rhythm of music. Dancing gracefully but with charisma and confidence. She was tremendous, no one could deny it. Her show received different reactions. Some were clapping and shouting but others were throwing bad glances at her. She even saw the girl who insulted her earlier poking her friend who was clapping to tell her to stop. But she didn’t care. She was expecting for Miss K reaction.

“Well… not too bad.” She just said. But she could read a little satisfaction on her eyes.

To be given the opportunity to dance, it was the only thing she has been waiting for.

After her first lesson which had started with trouble but ended well, she climbed to the rooftop, with the hope that Kris would climb there too. She was impatient to recount him her first lesson. She wanted to tell someone how jealous the other girls looked when she danced. She had even saved up a sandwich for him. But she waited all the lunch time and he didn’t come.

On her way to history class, she met the guy from this morning, the new student. He was surrounded by a crowd of girls. Seeing her he smiled and left his “groupies” behind him to come to her.

As if one playboy wasn’t enough…” she thought.

“Hey. Thank you for this morning. This school is so huge I wouldn’t have found my way without you.”

“You’re welcome.”

“I’m a new student.”

“You’ve already said that this morning.”

Okay, she was rude. But she wasn’t in the mood to handle another playboy, her life was messed up enough with Kris alone.

She went her way but he followed her.

“I’m on my way to class as you can see.”

“It’s okay, I’ll you. By the way I’m Myungsoo.”

“Good for you.” She coldly answered.

“That’s the moment you’re supposed to tell me your name.”

She stopped and faced him. He was smiling. His smile was different from Kris’. It was a smooth and friendly smile. Kris one was playful and teasing. What’s wrong with the guys of this school? Where they just stupid or doing it on purpose?

“Listen. It was nice to meet you but you don’t owe me anything for my help this morning. So welcome here, have fun and let’s just say that we never talked. Okay? Good.”

She didn’t wait for his answer and went her way to history class at a run. It was surely clear enough for him. Leaving the history class, she was so relieved. She didn’t pay attention to what the teacher was saying. The reason was that she couldn’t think about anything else than Kris. She was the one supposed to ignore him. How could he not come? Then she remembered was he had said to her.

“I’ll ensure you don’t ignore me anymore.”

Was it his plan? Because he was winning over her, and she couldn’t let him win. Never.

She was sitting at the bus stop, waiting for her bus to come, listening to music with her used earphones when they suddenly broke off. She had been expecting it anyway. They were so old.

“Bye dear earphones.”

“Now you talk to your earphones! It’s so creepy.”

Needless to say that she had recognized his voice. His voice was kind of particular. So deep.

He sat next to her and rummaged in his bag then pulled out earphones. Without asking her he put one side in her ear and the other one in his. They silently listened to TVXQ – Before U  Go. But he unexpectedly pressed the pause button in the middle of the song to ask.

“Did you miss me?” with his usual playful smile.

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Finally I decided to use Myungsoo. Hope you'll be fine with it. Really expecting your reactions by comments so don't be shy and tell me what you think about it or i'll think that you don't like what I do. kekeke

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189
#2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie
#6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
heemander
#7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl
#10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!