What do you want from me?

Hurricane Girl

 

I JUST WANT ONE THING FROM YOU

 

“Which joke? I’m telling you your name was on the call list this morning. I said some nice words to the director about you. You’re now a student of this school. No need to thank me.”

And he goes back to eating his sandwich.

She was speechless. Thank him? What had he done? And why?

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“What do you mean?” Sora kept asking.

“Did you suddenly become stupid? What isn’t clear in my words? Maybe I should ask for thanks since you are so rebellious.”

He kept acting like nothing serious had happened but Sora kept shocked. Seeing that she was still looking at him he said.

“I already told you that I’m going to make sure you don’t ignore me. We are going to spend so a lot of time together from now. Welcome to my world.”

So it was that. It was just a game for him; a way for him to keep her in the palm of his hand, doing what he wants of her. It was humiliating for her. She wanted to attend that school because she deserved it, not because of a stupid guy’s fantasies.

She took her bag and hastened down the stairs. She was almost running in the corridor than she even bumped into a girl but she was so angry that she didn’t apologize. She was about to exit the school when a teacher called her back.

“Ms. Han Sora!”

No matter how much she was angry, she was at least polite. The teacher everyone was calling MISS K was looking at her with an unhappy face. She had always been a bit frightened by this woman and to what she had heard, she wasn’t the only one. Something scary was coming from that woman.  So she turned back and went to the teacher to whom she bowed.

“I was actually worrying about you. Wondering why a student would miss her first day at school but it seems like I didn’t have to. So you were in the school but didn’t come to class?”

“I… I’m sorry.” She didn’t understand the situation, but she stuttered a lie that could make her out of this mess. “I had my period this morning.”

Then she heard a laugh behind her, his laugh.

“You don’t seem to understand. Our school is one of the best. So we need to keep our ranks high. Since it’s your first day here, I’m just going to advice you. Dancers don’t have their period. Did you get it?”

As only answer she nodded. After the teacher’s departure, she couldn’t turn back, knowing he was standing there. But she could hear him laughing at her back. She turned back but managed to avoid him and got out at a run. He was still laughing. She cursed at him between her lips.

On the bus on her way home she took time to think. She could hardly breathe and her heart was beating. She had just been treated like a student but a teacher of this school. It was so unexpected. For so long she had dreamed of going to this school but she always considered it an unrealizable dream. Even a second she didn’t think she could have the chance to attend it. She couldn’t explain her feelings towards Kris at this moment. Forgetting his hidden reasons to have done this, he had realized her dream. She was so lost in her thoughts that she almost missed her bus stop.

After taking a shower she took her phone and called her friend to ask her if she could replace her again at the bar. By chance she needed to take care of some personal matters so she allowed Sora to replace her. She hung up with the hope that he would show up at the nightclub tonight.

It was already 2AM and Kris had still not shown up. Sora was starting to think he would not come when she saw him. At the other end of the room. She informed the girl who was working with her at the bar that she was going to the toilets and she approached him. He was talking with some irrelevant people she didn’t want to notice and she recklessly interfered between him and his friends.

“Can I talk to you a moment?”

“For sure.”

He took her by the shoulders and dragged her to an empty terrace.

“You ran away like a thief earlier this morning.” He couldn’t help teasing her with his usual playful smile.

Ignoring what he had just said, she decided to say what she had planned to.

“Why did you asked for my admission at school?”

He sighed and shrugged.

“Are you going to bother me with this for long? I did it. It’s the only thing that matters right?”

He seemed annoyed but she had learned enough from life to know that nothing was free.

“Attending this school is something really important to me. And as I don’t want to be indebted to you I want to know what you want from me. Just tell me and I’ll do anything you want.”

“You don’t seem to know me but I’m a generous guy. Take it as a Christmas gift.”

“Kris… What do you want from me?”

It was the first time she called him by his name. It erased any smile from his face and he became serious as her. Bringing his face close to hers, he answered.

“I just want one thing from you.”

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There goes the third chapter. I'm surprising myself by the speed at which I'm writing this story. I'm getting inspiration every single minute. I'm preparing some interesting chapters for you later. I hope you like my story and as I'm really enjoying writing it, I hope you'll tell what you think about it. Also my english might not be perfect but that's because I'm french, so be nice to me. See you at the next chapter which is coming very soon. Let me know if you want it kekeke

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189 #2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189 #3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189 #4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189 #5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie #6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
heemander #7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl #10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!
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