HELP!!!

I don't care if they see

Okay, so I know that all of you like the story, but I am starting to not lol. Like, I don't like where I have taken it. Does anyone have any ideas on how I can make it better? Like, I don't want to stop this one because I do want to finish it, but I don't want it to end yet. I just, think I need something. Action maybe. I am not sure. Please comment or message me. PLEASE! anything on your mind about it. You could give me an idea for a scene and that may fix what I have done to it lol

 

 

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OH, and i hope i solved any confusion of what was wrong with GD. 

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pollbaby #1
Chapter 9: I'm completly stuck at this story! it's amazing! had to say this before i keep on reading!
AlishaVIP
#2
Chapter 8: are you still alive? O.o
xiaochuan
#3
PLS UPDATE SOON WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU coughscoughscoughs oopsss, sorryy ._.v
kawiifan
#4
Chapter 12: I love keep it going :)
SHINee_Babyy
#5
Chapter 12: Where do you get all the pictures from? Especially the one for the foreword :D
Keep up the good work
Hwaiting :)
TOPgirl #6
hahaha "my body is ready" love it so far
LovesAsianDrama #7
WHEW FAST AND CUTE, I LIKE THAT NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE ^_^