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Being in Time
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“I’m sorry. She’s long gone from the orphanage,” the caretaker said. “Would you like to contact the-”

“No… never mind. I’ll go ahead.” The woman lowered her head, slumping her shoulders in disappointment as she left the reception area. She hit herself hard for expecting too much. “It’s been years. What was I thinking?” She hit herself again.

At the exit, she bumped into a tall woman with short hair.

“Sorry… I wasn’t looking.” She bowed in apology and walked straight outside.

“Who was that?” The tall woman scratched her head.

“One moment please,” the caretaker said on the phone as she entertained the woman who just arrived. “Hayoung-ah, you’re here early. It’s very unlikely of you to come in the morning. Aren’t you usually still sleeping at this time of the day?” the caretaker teased. “You here to take care of the kids?”

“Ahh, yes… you know me too well…” Hayoung blushed from the remark. “I’ll work until past midnight today and there’s a place I want to go later after that so I decided to go this morning.”

“Alright, night owl. You already know the drill,” the caretaker said before she returned to her call. “Feel free to start without me.”

“M’kay.”

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“Whiskey on the rocks, please,” the two women ordered in unison by the bar table. Finding the coincidence funny, they turned their swivel chairs facing each other and laughed it off.

“Alone?” the eye-smiling woman asked.

“Are you hitting on me?” The brunette found it amusing that she couldn’t contain the smile on her face.

“No.” The eye-smiling woman scoffed. “Gosh. You’re too full of yourself.”

“I was joking.” The brunette laughed heartily. “I’m alone by the way, and you’re not my type.”

“I’m alone too, and you’re not my type either,” the eye-smiling woman replied cheekily. “I just wanted to talk with someone. It’s been a week since I had a proper conversation.”

“And you’re hoping to find a proper conversation here?” The brunette was weirded out. “In a club? Really?”

“Because it’s nice talking with strangers.”

“You’re weird.”

“I know, and I bet you are too.” The eye-smiling woman smirked. “Because a weirdo understands a fellow weirdo.”

“Now where did you get that quote?” The brunette chuckled, finding the eye-smiling woman amusing. The latter just shrugged in reply with a smug smile on her lips.

“Whiskey on the rocks for the two of you.” The bartender left them with their drinks.

The two clinked their glasses and drank their whiskey in one go. They waited for each other, but both of them hesitated to speak. The brunette broke the silence and gave it a try.

“It’s about someone important to me,” she said, fiddling with the glass on her hands.

“What are the odds? It’s the same case for me.” The eye-smiling woman gently placed the glass she was holding on the table. “Go ahead.”

“My wife wants to end our marriage, and she wants to have full custody on our daughter.” The brunette bit her lip.

The eye-smiling woman knew what the other woman needed was a companion. She remained mum, lending an ear as the latter continued with her story.

“Earlier, my wife gave me the divorce papers again.” Her expression was becoming dark and serious. “She already found someone else since I have been away for so long, working my off just to feed my ing family that’s now about to abandon me.”

She gritted her teeth as anger rushed into her body. She facepalmed herself so hard it made a sound. After taking slow, deep breaths, her raging emotions eventually subsided. But the pang in her heart made an even more intense, distinct feeling that she couldn’t shake off.

“In the end, it’s not about the material things I give,” she said as a somber smile traced on her lips. “It’s about spending my time with the people I love. I should have spent time with my family instead…”

The brunette stared at the ceiling, trying to stop her tears from falling. Her expression was still brooding.

“I have nothing against my wife. It’s all my fault anyway. However, I was thinking of our four-year-old daughter. Imagining my life without her… I-I-” She clenched her chest. “I-I don’t think I can live anymore. She’s the greatest thing that happened in my life. I can’t lose her.”

Tears finally coursed through her cheeks at the thought of lifelessly moving on by herself. The moment she closed her eyes, she saw the images of her loving daughter smiling and waving at her—these precious memories forever imprinted in her mind.

The woman who was listening patted the back of the sobbing woman, humming a subtle yet comforting tune. She knew it was better not to speak as this was the solemn moment when reality hits a person at their most vulnerable state.

For a long time, she cried and cried until her eyes felt like they ran out of tears. Tiringly, she sat up straight and faced the eye-smiling woman. “Thank you. You’re right. It’s nice talking to strangers, and I think I now know why.”

The eye-smiling woman replied with a warm smile. She was happy the other woman was already flashing her smile.

“How about you? What’s your story?” the brunette asked.

The eye-smiling woman was taken aback from the sudden shift of atten

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prkchrng1991
#1
Chapter 26: hello! i just finished reading this story, and it's so good :(((((( would you be uploading more of your stories in the future? would really love to read more from you.



btw, (speaking as a reader lol) would like to emphasize (lmao) that you have written this so beautifully, and the story itself is equally beautiful. just love how you added seemingly random scenes that isnt as plot-heavy but what made them seem more human to me. i really loved the part when eunji and naeun first held hands, damn i felt that????? hahaha. also when they shared their ice cream. thats so.. idk i just love that. haha. thank u for this 2eun content lmao ❤ again thank u for sharing this amazing story to us!! really hoping to read more from you in the future (:
1016ckg #2
Chapter 25: i love this story!!
amy_sh
#3
Chapter 17: Reread again cause i miss apink so bad. But it makes me want more you write past stories about this. Especially sojin - hayoung relationships and eunrong. The story i pictured about sojin - hayoung maybe looks like teenager first love. But it's okay. This is just my hope :)
Thanks again for writing bit :D
Panda0619
#4
Chapter 26: Thank you for a great story.. I loved, in particular, the philosophical bits..
ChobomPanda
#5
Chapter 26: Oh damn. I finished it in one go. What a rollercoaster feelings I put myself into. Thank you for this masterpiece, it's really good. The foreshadowing, clues, connections etc. I love how you used the classic triple ships in Apink but at the same time didn't forget to add twist with it. Same with the plot. Such a plot wise story. Well I already expected it the moment I saw the chapter titles. "Being in time" ... Wise move there author.

And ofcourse thank you for the afterword. Explainations and such question and answer portion that clearly shows on how you really worked hard on this story. Too bad I didn't experience the excitement of waiting for an update since I'm a little bit late to find this. Hehehe. Anyway congratulations for this story. You really did a great job here. Thank you <3 really worth rereading over and over again.
Ms_Interesado
#6
Chapter 25: Damnnnnn, what a good story. Will definitely reread this in the future. A solid 100/10.
ckaz99
#7
Chapter 26: GODDAMN THIS IS AMAZING WTF. Absolutely marvellous! I knew this was going to be a whole new world the moment I laid my eyes on the front page foreword, because I have never ever come across this clever method for chapter titles. What the actual masterpiece.

I appreciate the final chapter on your insights immensely. I love author commentary, and especially so in a story made with such detail, passion and hard work as yours. I'm most blown away by all the symbolism, foreshadowing and depth of meaning that I regrettably would have glazed over and taken for granted had you not been so kind to have elaborated on those things.

Reading your thoughts ended it on a very high note for me and I don't find it selfish of you at all. If anything, I think it makes the reader really realise the great amount of effort put into the writing; like I already thought it was magnificent, but learning about the symbolism made my jaw drop even further. I mean, the half-empty & empty bottles!? I forgot about Eunji's clue!! And there's even a well-crafted timeline!? :O

Knowing about these makes the story stand out in its own right. It's like I'm back in my highschool English class studying a classic text and uncovering the motifs, or analysing a film and questioning why a scene is shot the way it is; finding greater meaning in little things.

Also all the couples are just so cute. You made me fall in love with all of them and their characters.
- I loved the opposite socioeconomic status with Hajoo. Namjoo is so lovable and Hayoung as a CEO might just be the greatest thing out of everything.
- 2eun as a perfect match of mystery. I cackled at the freelance artist excuse they both used.
- My Chobom is adorableee. I can only squeal and make unintelligible sounds as words decide to fail me. I love their portrayal here uwu.
Watching the group slowly get connected was very exciting. It really feels like six completely different individuals who happened to get tied together, their fates crossed.

UGH YOUR MIND and gosh I wrote an essay of a comment keke~ Thank you for writing this story, really thank you.
AegyoPRASH
#8
Chapter 25: This fic is just magnificent, I’m speechless, what took me so long to find you author. Thank you for this amazing story
Pandayum
#9
Chapter 26: I just binge-read everything while procrastinating on writing my own sh*t, and holy cow that was some experience alright.
The details, clues, references hidden within the words completely blew my mind- and to dedicate an extra page to elaborate on more details and answer peoples' questions... you are the coolest author ever.
Midnight_Stars
#10
Chapter 8: Back after a whole month, Oh God help me XD
Was so busy LMAO life is so hectic.

I know I said I won't comment till the end but was once more triggered. Minah X Eunji interactions is a whole mood, I absolutely loved it❤ We also got some HaNa in this chapter lol

As a gamer myself and a huge Tekken fan, I was quiet entertained by the references lol! My favourite character is Ling Xiaoyu, no one would dare play with me if I choose her haha.

Anyways, hope you're having a good day ^^