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Passing By
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"What's wrong? Have you seen a ghost? You're like so out of it since you came. Is something bothering our precious Hayi?" Chanhyuk crossed his legs and stared at me for a couple of seconds and started strumming his guitar again.

We're here in the university field and I still can't get that witch out of my head. She's creeping me out.

I took a deep breathe and gave them a worried look. "It would be better if I just saw a ghost. Maybe I would just kick its balls but that witch has none."

Suhyun stopped humming and stared at me blankly. "What? Who did you see?"

"The witch."

They both covered their mouths as if they knew whom I was talking about.

"You saw Dr. Jung?" They both exclaimed in disbelief.

I shivered a lil bit as I heard that name. I nodded at them and they looked at me worriedly. 

"Where? How? Why?" Suhyun whispered.

"At my apartment building. And I don't know why. I haven't done anything wrong since that day."

They creased their forehead and rolled their eyes.

"What is her problem again?" Chanhyuk said in an irritated manner. "She's a total paranoid mother. I pity Jaewon."


Four years ago.

"Hayi, have you seen our new classmate? He's a hot transferee and I like him. He's from US by the way. Cool right?" Suhyun greeted me as I entered the classroom

I did not mind her and just went straight to my desk. I'm tired studying. I wasn't even able to get enough sleep last night. School .

"His name is Bobby Kim. But his korean name is Jiwon. Oh my gosh he's so charismatic and I want him." Suhyun continued as she followed me. 

It's break time right now and yes I was late.

I rested my head on my desk and closed my eyes. "Control your hormones. I don't wanna see you pregnant."

She laughed and hit my back.

"OUCH! WHAT THE ?!" I screamed as the pain refused to leave me. What the hell.

She grinned then put her face closer to my ears and whispered. "I could use contraceptives tho."

I slapped her after I got goosebumps with her words. This girl is ugh!

"Have you seen Jaewon's mom? She's totally scary. She's at the principal's office right now."

I instantly looked at one of my classmates as I heard my boyfriend's name. But why would his mother come tho?

What would be the reason?

I shook away my thoughts and had a chat with Suhyun

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Rubybeauty1982 #1
Chapter 19: I am so sorry for the late reply. I hope you'll forgive me. Anyways, this was a awesome ending! I really liked how Jaewon and Hayi ended up together. Sigh, true love does exist! After two years of suffering, god finally gave her man back to her.

Your story was good. So good that I re-read it 3 times already! Lol. Call me delusional, but I love reading fanfic with Hayi in it. I'm her biggest fan and I ship her mostly with her label mates. It shouldn't be like that, but they are the only ones that really interact with her.

I do hope you continue to write more stories in the future. I'll subscribe to them and leave long comments as well. There are a few grammar errors, but no author is perfect. I, myself have plenty of type-o errors in my stories too. Practice makes perfect.

I did upvote your Hanhi story, but I didn't get a chance to read it yet. I will definitely leave a long comment! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for creating this story! I'm going to re-read one more time! :D
yeulisoo #2
Chapter 20: oh I surprisingly enjoyed reading this. despite all if those typos and there are still some that's misplaced this is still a good one. keep on writing I believe you could write better as you write more. fighting!
Jenduekie #3
Tag it as completed thnx
Jenduekie #4
Chapter 19: WHYYYUU ajdjsjd i was so shocked after inreaf d author's note.. but good job thank u for this story
Rubybeauty1982 #5
Chapter 18: Wah! Another great update from you author! This chapter made sense and I loved how Hayi's mom rejected Jaewon's dad. No offense, but Jaewon's dad is a douche bag. I mean, really? Since he was the one delivering Hayi when her mom was giving birth to her, and he was checking her out at the same time? Awkward! And gross! I'm glad she rejected him. , at least she has good morals.

So, I'm assuming that in the next chapter Jaewon and Hayi will officially be together? Fingers crossed! It's been a tough journey for these two love birds, and I'm excited to read how Jaewon will confess to her. Will he say it with action? Or will he be old fashion and ask her out like a true gentlemen?

I'm kind of curious about Mino and Jennie. Are these two going to hook up? I mean, in the previous chapter (or the one before it), he seemed really shy around her. It was cute and refreshing to read.

I can't wait until you write your next story about Hanbin and Hayi. As you can tell, I'm a huge Hanhi shipper. In fact, I ship her with Hanbin, Jaewon, Bobby, Taeyong, and Jun (from Seventeen). Read some of my stories about Hayi and I hope my stories will motivate you to write a good one shot or a long story.

Will Jaewon proposed to Hayi? Oh, I can't wait for that to happen! Anyways, keep up the good work author. You're doing an amazing job so far. It pisses me off that you have a lot of subscribers, but they don't leave any comments for you. I mean, how hard is it to leave a comment? Lazy silent readers. Yes, you know who you are! Quit being a silent reader and comment for heavens sake! How the hell do you expect to motivate the author? (Sorry for my rants).

Anyways, I feel that this story is coming to an end. I hope you make the closure a good one author. Until then, I'll see you in the next chapter!
Rubybeauty1982 #6
Chapter 17: Sorry for the late comment! Damn! Now I understand why Jaewon mom hates Hayi. Holy balls! That is super crazy! I wonder what Hayi's reaction would be if she found out? I mean, would she be disgusted with her mom that Jaewon dad fell in love with her? Awkward! Oh man. I don't know what I would do in that situation. I mean, it's a very uncomfortable feeling. I would like to read Hayi's mom point of view. How awkward would it be if your own daughter was dating your husband son? I'm sorry, that's taboo for me. Gross! I understand they're not blood related, but it's still pretty damn gross.

Ah man, this story is very...um...surprising. This reminds me of the Chinese drama "Devil beside Me" starring Rainie Yang and Mike He. If you haven't watched this drama yet, you're missing out author. Mike He is so god damn hot!

Anyways, about this chapter, I'm happy that Jaewon regained his memory, but what worries me is how Hayi will accept this. Will she forgive his mom after what she put her though? And how will she take it knowing that Jaewon and her are going to be step brothers and step sisters soon? Will they move somewhere far away where no one knows them and start a happy life together? , that's what I would do. No offense, but that will bring shame to yourself and your family.

Well, I'm not sure how this story is going to turn out, but I'm curious to know if this will affect their so-called-relationship. And I want to read more about Hanbin's point of view. I mean, what does he think of Hayi? And what does he think of Jennie? Please update soon author!!!! I want to read a little bit more of Hanhi before you make it Onehi officially! :D
Jenduekie #7
Chapter 17: Carabao??really now?? Hahhaha
Rubybeauty1982 #8
Chapter 15: It's about time Jaewon regained his memory. I do hope his evil mother tells him the truth about why she wanted Hayi to break up with him. If not, he's gonna have to force it out from Hayi herself. Maybe a kiss will help her open up to him again? Who knows? I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter since you said there is going to be a lot of skin ship!

Jennie is a good girl after all. That's good. Why does it seem like she likes Hanbin? Did they have a history together? Is that the reason why she is half single? I find it funny that Mino is drawn to Jennie. I wonder what's going to happen if he confesses his love to her? Will she reject him? Sigh, Mino and Hanbin are so hot. , I would take them both! Lol.

Bobby's character in here is too funny. I love him! I do hope he'll play a role in here to Jaewon back together with Hayi. I'm happy that Suhyun and him are back together. I was really shocked that she had a crush on him in real life. I thought Hayi had better chemistry with Bobby. Sigh....

I'm glad that Hayi still loves Jaewon, but will she continue to push him away? Or will she allow him to enter into her life once again? And will they do it behind Jaewon's mom back? I hope so!

Keep up the good work author! I'm loving this story more and more. I hope the next chapter will be super extra long! :D
nygdlonehi #9
Chapter 14: I'm sorry I wasn't really leaving comments for the past chapter but the previous chapter just triggered all my pent up frustrations about Jaewon not remembering a thing about Hayi. Thank god he finally knows the truth. I'm sorry for this in advance but really it pisses me off (lol) reading other guys paired w Hayi. Well except for some, like Mino.

I just can't wait for them to have more sweet moments or just them being close. I just want them to get back together faaaaast

And GAHDDDDDDD Another obstacle in the form of Jennie Kim. Seriouslyyyyy I need a chapter without all these problems reminding them about their existing problems. Just a full fluffy/cheesy one.

I'm sorry for being so demanding and all. Anyway, fighting!
Rubybeauty1982 #10
Chapter 14: Seriously, Jaewon is stupid to believe his mom. (Shaking my head). I can’t believe he assumed that Hayi is nothing but a . He needs to investigate what really happened before he starts believing anyone in general.

I laughed so hard when Mino said, “Hayi’s not my type!” I can just imagine his facial expression when Jaewon accused them of having something together. It did not surprise me that Mino wanted to punch him in the face.

Jaewon fainted. Does that mean he’s going to regain his memory soon? I do hope he’s getting some flash back of his memory soon. I mean, if this is going to be a OneHi story, I hope he makes a move on Hayi soon. If not, I’m still rooting for Hanhi…lol.

I’m happy that Bobby and Suhyun are back together. How are they going to help Hayi and Jaewon? I’m glad they have friends that will do anything for them. Friends like that are hard to find now and days.

Will Hanbin be in the next chapter? If so, will this keep Jaewon guard up? And will he apologize to Hayi for calling her a ? I sure hope so. Will there be another kiss scene in the next chapter? Perhaps that will be a way of him saying, “I’m sorry.”

It looks like Jennie Kim is in the story now. Interesting. I wonder how her character will play in this role? Will she play the evil girl? Or the sweet girl? Or did his evil mom put her up to this? Speaking of his evil mother, when will she die? Lol. (Gosh, I’m so mean). I do hope Jaewon finds out the truth about what his mother did to Hanbin and Hayi. I mean, it would break his heart knowing that his own mother is trying to ruin his life. Let’s hope he doesn’t try to kill himself! That would be horrible!

More Hanhi in the next chapter please before you officially break them up. Lol. I hope you’re able to update this story soon. I’m loving it! Keep up the good job author! Until then, I’ll see you in the next chapter with another long comment!
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