Eighteen

Passing By
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HAYI'S POV

"Holy carabao." I whispered to myself as a woman started to walk towards me with a smile plastered on her face.

I looked at Jaewon smiling at me.

What is this? 

I looked around the store but there's no one here except us.

What the hell? I tried to resist the fear building up inside me but my feet said no. I unconsciously walked back little by little.

Oh my God. Please help me.

I felt the door opened behind me. I looked at Jaewon with apologetic smile and rushed to the door.

"Ouch!" I looked at the woman I bumped into. "MOM!"

She looked at me surprised but smiled afterwards. "Hey! I was about to buy you a tteokbokki."

Oh my gosh. Of all places, why here?!

"Let's go." I told her and took her hand.

I was about to walk out but she did not move. "Mom. Let's go." I looked back at her.

Oh .

She was now face to face with Jaewon's mom.

I released her hand and looked at them. They're not gonna do a scene here right?

People will come in any second.

"Mrs. Jung." My mom said as she looked at the witch. 

I looked at Dr. Jung looking at my mom with 'disgust' but after a moment tears came rolling down her eyes.

Ummmm. What was that?

Mom did not slap or punch her right? She just said her name right? Then why did she cry? Its my first time seeing her in a vulnerable state. She used to be that powerful, 'you can't do anything about what I say' aura.

And now, she just looks like a woman. Broken.

"I am so sorry for everything." My mom continued as she looked straight into Dr. Jung's eyes.

Did they know each other?

How? Why?

Dr. Jung continued to sob silently while wiping her tears. What is happening?

I looked at Jaewon silently watching our mothers. He looked at me for a second but looked back at them afterwards.

I walked towards him. "What is happening?"

"You'll see." He answered without even giving me a look. I rolled my eyes at him and looked again at the two.

"No. I am sorry." Dr. Jung held my mom's hands. "I tried to ruin your life when you didn't do anything wrong." 

Mom was shocked with her words. And so am I.

Is she really the Dr. Jung I know?

She turned 180°. Oh my gosh. Is she being real right now or she's just acting because Jaewon's here?

Ugh. Why do problems never stop to appear? My life's already a mess.

"It's not your fault. So don't apologize. I just looked for someone to blame when he died." Dr. Jung continued while still sobbing.

It doean't look like an act though. Her tears have no end.

I looked at my mom fighting her tears to fall. Mom.

"I blamed you for everything even though you never accepted him." Dr. Jung's sobs louder.

"I knew from the very start that you advised him to never leave us. But I still blamed you for his death." Dr. Jung wiped her tears and looked at mom again. "I am so sorry for all the stupidity I've done."

What are they talking about? I mean, who?

I looked at Jaewon crossed arms still looking at the two mothers. Why does he look like someone watching a weekend drama?

And why are they like this?

I never felt so clueless like this before. Like guys, mind telling me?

"No no. I should have rejected him in a good way. I shouldn't have just told him to gt lost." Mom sobbed as she hugged Dr. Jung.

Wait. Are they talking about a guy?

Did they fight over a guy?

What the hell?

Ugh. I hate solving cases. I hate brainworks.

I walked towards them. "What're all these?" I asked no one particularly.

They both looked

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Rubybeauty1982
#1
Chapter 19: I am so sorry for the late reply. I hope you'll forgive me. Anyways, this was a awesome ending! I really liked how Jaewon and Hayi ended up together. Sigh, true love does exist! After two years of suffering, god finally gave her man back to her.

Your story was good. So good that I re-read it 3 times already! Lol. Call me delusional, but I love reading fanfic with Hayi in it. I'm her biggest fan and I ship her mostly with her label mates. It shouldn't be like that, but they are the only ones that really interact with her.

I do hope you continue to write more stories in the future. I'll subscribe to them and leave long comments as well. There are a few grammar errors, but no author is perfect. I, myself have plenty of type-o errors in my stories too. Practice makes perfect.

I did upvote your Hanhi story, but I didn't get a chance to read it yet. I will definitely leave a long comment! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for creating this story! I'm going to re-read one more time! :D
yeulisoo
#2
Chapter 20: oh I surprisingly enjoyed reading this. despite all if those typos and there are still some that's misplaced this is still a good one. keep on writing I believe you could write better as you write more. fighting!
Jenduekie #3
Tag it as completed thnx
Jenduekie #4
Chapter 19: WHYYYUU ajdjsjd i was so shocked after inreaf d author's note.. but good job thank u for this story
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 18: Wah! Another great update from you author! This chapter made sense and I loved how Hayi's mom rejected Jaewon's dad. No offense, but Jaewon's dad is a douche bag. I mean, really? Since he was the one delivering Hayi when her mom was giving birth to her, and he was checking her out at the same time? Awkward! And gross! I'm glad she rejected him. , at least she has good morals.

So, I'm assuming that in the next chapter Jaewon and Hayi will officially be together? Fingers crossed! It's been a tough journey for these two love birds, and I'm excited to read how Jaewon will confess to her. Will he say it with action? Or will he be old fashion and ask her out like a true gentlemen?

I'm kind of curious about Mino and Jennie. Are these two going to hook up? I mean, in the previous chapter (or the one before it), he seemed really shy around her. It was cute and refreshing to read.

I can't wait until you write your next story about Hanbin and Hayi. As you can tell, I'm a huge Hanhi shipper. In fact, I ship her with Hanbin, Jaewon, Bobby, Taeyong, and Jun (from Seventeen). Read some of my stories about Hayi and I hope my stories will motivate you to write a good one shot or a long story.

Will Jaewon proposed to Hayi? Oh, I can't wait for that to happen! Anyways, keep up the good work author. You're doing an amazing job so far. It pisses me off that you have a lot of subscribers, but they don't leave any comments for you. I mean, how hard is it to leave a comment? Lazy silent readers. Yes, you know who you are! Quit being a silent reader and comment for heavens sake! How the hell do you expect to motivate the author? (Sorry for my rants).

Anyways, I feel that this story is coming to an end. I hope you make the closure a good one author. Until then, I'll see you in the next chapter!
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 17: Sorry for the late comment! Damn! Now I understand why Jaewon mom hates Hayi. Holy balls! That is super crazy! I wonder what Hayi's reaction would be if she found out? I mean, would she be disgusted with her mom that Jaewon dad fell in love with her? Awkward! Oh man. I don't know what I would do in that situation. I mean, it's a very uncomfortable feeling. I would like to read Hayi's mom point of view. How awkward would it be if your own daughter was dating your husband son? I'm sorry, that's taboo for me. Gross! I understand they're not blood related, but it's still pretty damn gross.

Ah man, this story is very...um...surprising. This reminds me of the Chinese drama "Devil beside Me" starring Rainie Yang and Mike He. If you haven't watched this drama yet, you're missing out author. Mike He is so god damn hot!

Anyways, about this chapter, I'm happy that Jaewon regained his memory, but what worries me is how Hayi will accept this. Will she forgive his mom after what she put her though? And how will she take it knowing that Jaewon and her are going to be step brothers and step sisters soon? Will they move somewhere far away where no one knows them and start a happy life together? , that's what I would do. No offense, but that will bring shame to yourself and your family.

Well, I'm not sure how this story is going to turn out, but I'm curious to know if this will affect their so-called-relationship. And I want to read more about Hanbin's point of view. I mean, what does he think of Hayi? And what does he think of Jennie? Please update soon author!!!! I want to read a little bit more of Hanhi before you make it Onehi officially! :D
Jenduekie #7
Chapter 17: Carabao??really now?? Hahhaha
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 15: It's about time Jaewon regained his memory. I do hope his evil mother tells him the truth about why she wanted Hayi to break up with him. If not, he's gonna have to force it out from Hayi herself. Maybe a kiss will help her open up to him again? Who knows? I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter since you said there is going to be a lot of skin ship!

Jennie is a good girl after all. That's good. Why does it seem like she likes Hanbin? Did they have a history together? Is that the reason why she is half single? I find it funny that Mino is drawn to Jennie. I wonder what's going to happen if he confesses his love to her? Will she reject him? Sigh, Mino and Hanbin are so hot. , I would take them both! Lol.

Bobby's character in here is too funny. I love him! I do hope he'll play a role in here to Jaewon back together with Hayi. I'm happy that Suhyun and him are back together. I was really shocked that she had a crush on him in real life. I thought Hayi had better chemistry with Bobby. Sigh....

I'm glad that Hayi still loves Jaewon, but will she continue to push him away? Or will she allow him to enter into her life once again? And will they do it behind Jaewon's mom back? I hope so!

Keep up the good work author! I'm loving this story more and more. I hope the next chapter will be super extra long! :D
nygdlonehi
#9
Chapter 14: I'm sorry I wasn't really leaving comments for the past chapter but the previous chapter just triggered all my pent up frustrations about Jaewon not remembering a thing about Hayi. Thank god he finally knows the truth. I'm sorry for this in advance but really it pisses me off (lol) reading other guys paired w Hayi. Well except for some, like Mino.

I just can't wait for them to have more sweet moments or just them being close. I just want them to get back together faaaaast

And GAHDDDDDDD Another obstacle in the form of Jennie Kim. Seriouslyyyyy I need a chapter without all these problems reminding them about their existing problems. Just a full fluffy/cheesy one.

I'm sorry for being so demanding and all. Anyway, fighting!
Rubybeauty1982
#10
Chapter 14: Seriously, Jaewon is stupid to believe his mom. (Shaking my head). I can’t believe he assumed that Hayi is nothing but a . He needs to investigate what really happened before he starts believing anyone in general.

I laughed so hard when Mino said, “Hayi’s not my type!” I can just imagine his facial expression when Jaewon accused them of having something together. It did not surprise me that Mino wanted to punch him in the face.

Jaewon fainted. Does that mean he’s going to regain his memory soon? I do hope he’s getting some flash back of his memory soon. I mean, if this is going to be a OneHi story, I hope he makes a move on Hayi soon. If not, I’m still rooting for Hanhi…lol.

I’m happy that Bobby and Suhyun are back together. How are they going to help Hayi and Jaewon? I’m glad they have friends that will do anything for them. Friends like that are hard to find now and days.

Will Hanbin be in the next chapter? If so, will this keep Jaewon guard up? And will he apologize to Hayi for calling her a ? I sure hope so. Will there be another kiss scene in the next chapter? Perhaps that will be a way of him saying, “I’m sorry.”

It looks like Jennie Kim is in the story now. Interesting. I wonder how her character will play in this role? Will she play the evil girl? Or the sweet girl? Or did his evil mom put her up to this? Speaking of his evil mother, when will she die? Lol. (Gosh, I’m so mean). I do hope Jaewon finds out the truth about what his mother did to Hanbin and Hayi. I mean, it would break his heart knowing that his own mother is trying to ruin his life. Let’s hope he doesn’t try to kill himself! That would be horrible!

More Hanhi in the next chapter please before you officially break them up. Lol. I hope you’re able to update this story soon. I’m loving it! Keep up the good job author! Until then, I’ll see you in the next chapter with another long comment!