Fourteen

Passing By
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HAYI'S POV

"Oh , it seems like the witch moved faster than me." Chanhyuk whispered as he looked at Jaewon closing his fists.

He seemed so pissed. Did Doctor Jung say something outrageous again?

If so, she's really unbelievable.

I rolled my eyes. "Tsss. Who would believe your witch mother though?" I stated as I lose my self-control. "Ofcourse its you. You're her son. And you must believe her whether she told you a lie or not. And as expected, you are such a good child."

My hands began to tremble. I am so pissed.

I felt Suhyun held them. "Hayi...."

I took a heavy breathe.

"So what are you trying to say? That my mom is a liar?" Jaewon asked me back. Glaring at us tears already rolling down his cheeks.

Why would he believe his mother that fast? I get it, she's still his mother.

But what the hell? Did he think that his mother is that relevant enough? He's ing fooled. Big time.

"What do you think am I saying? Ofcourse. Your mom is one hell of a big ing liar. Face the truth. Tsss. Kim Hanbin was right. Your family can control anyone with money. Rich dudes seriously." I told him.

He sighed brushing his hair with his hands. He looked frustrated.

And so am I.

"You are the liar here. You ing seduced me and what? Break my heart just like that? And then flirt with Mino?!" He shouted.

What the ?!

I slapped him real hard. "What?! Say that again?" I gritted my teeth. "Say that again you !" Tears started to well up my eyes. 

How could he?

"Do you think of me being like that? Seriously Jaewon you're ing judging me since last night and it ing hurts. I AM NOT A FUXKING GIRL FOR GOD'S SAKE!"

I looked at Mino shock evident on his face.

"What the ?! Hayi? Flirting with me?! Are you insane? She's not my type! Waaaaaah. Really. Your mother is really pushing me to my limits seriously." Mino screamed in anger. "She doesn't only want to break your connection with Hayi, but also with us."

"And you ing believe her just like that. Waaaaaaaa. Jung Jaewon. You're unbelievable. And saying that Hayi seduced you? Oh my goodness." Chanhyuk said as he his polo shirt.

What the ? Thankfully he has shirt underneath.

"So you're framing my mom right now?" Jaewon told us hands on his hips. Giving us his glare.

We rolled our eyes on him. 

He's totally fooled. Oh my gosh. I want to slap him again real hard.

"You know what, Hana? I really wanted to  hit your head so hard that your memories would come back. And you'll really hit yourself after realizing that you are being so stupid right now." Suhyun said gritting her teeth. "And for your information, Hayi did not seduce you. You fell for her yourself. Yes she lied. She lied once. But that was because of your mother. She never liked Hayi. And I don't know why. Maybe because she wanted you to marry a rich girl from a big company and expand your assets. Typical rich mothers would do. Hayi loved you. Uh no, scratch that. She still loves you. You er."

Everything went silent.

.

Is this the end of all this?

We all looked at each other silently.

Shocked.

Mad.

Frustrated.

Relieved.

"I-I'm..."

Before Jaewon could finish his sentemce, he fell to the ground.

.

"Jaewon! Jung Jaewon!" I ran to him and held his head. I slapped his cheeks hard so that he would wake up. "YAAAAAA! JUNG JAEWON! WAKE UP. OH MY GOD. JUNG JAEWON. YOU STUPID FOOL! WAKE UP......." 

The boys held him up and brought him to the clinic. Suhyun and I followed them there.

"Aysssss! This is our fault." I sobbed as I looked at Jaewon lying on the bed.

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Rubybeauty1982
#1
Chapter 19: I am so sorry for the late reply. I hope you'll forgive me. Anyways, this was a awesome ending! I really liked how Jaewon and Hayi ended up together. Sigh, true love does exist! After two years of suffering, god finally gave her man back to her.

Your story was good. So good that I re-read it 3 times already! Lol. Call me delusional, but I love reading fanfic with Hayi in it. I'm her biggest fan and I ship her mostly with her label mates. It shouldn't be like that, but they are the only ones that really interact with her.

I do hope you continue to write more stories in the future. I'll subscribe to them and leave long comments as well. There are a few grammar errors, but no author is perfect. I, myself have plenty of type-o errors in my stories too. Practice makes perfect.

I did upvote your Hanhi story, but I didn't get a chance to read it yet. I will definitely leave a long comment! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for creating this story! I'm going to re-read one more time! :D
yeulisoo
#2
Chapter 20: oh I surprisingly enjoyed reading this. despite all if those typos and there are still some that's misplaced this is still a good one. keep on writing I believe you could write better as you write more. fighting!
Jenduekie #3
Tag it as completed thnx
Jenduekie #4
Chapter 19: WHYYYUU ajdjsjd i was so shocked after inreaf d author's note.. but good job thank u for this story
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 18: Wah! Another great update from you author! This chapter made sense and I loved how Hayi's mom rejected Jaewon's dad. No offense, but Jaewon's dad is a douche bag. I mean, really? Since he was the one delivering Hayi when her mom was giving birth to her, and he was checking her out at the same time? Awkward! And gross! I'm glad she rejected him. , at least she has good morals.

So, I'm assuming that in the next chapter Jaewon and Hayi will officially be together? Fingers crossed! It's been a tough journey for these two love birds, and I'm excited to read how Jaewon will confess to her. Will he say it with action? Or will he be old fashion and ask her out like a true gentlemen?

I'm kind of curious about Mino and Jennie. Are these two going to hook up? I mean, in the previous chapter (or the one before it), he seemed really shy around her. It was cute and refreshing to read.

I can't wait until you write your next story about Hanbin and Hayi. As you can tell, I'm a huge Hanhi shipper. In fact, I ship her with Hanbin, Jaewon, Bobby, Taeyong, and Jun (from Seventeen). Read some of my stories about Hayi and I hope my stories will motivate you to write a good one shot or a long story.

Will Jaewon proposed to Hayi? Oh, I can't wait for that to happen! Anyways, keep up the good work author. You're doing an amazing job so far. It pisses me off that you have a lot of subscribers, but they don't leave any comments for you. I mean, how hard is it to leave a comment? Lazy silent readers. Yes, you know who you are! Quit being a silent reader and comment for heavens sake! How the hell do you expect to motivate the author? (Sorry for my rants).

Anyways, I feel that this story is coming to an end. I hope you make the closure a good one author. Until then, I'll see you in the next chapter!
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 17: Sorry for the late comment! Damn! Now I understand why Jaewon mom hates Hayi. Holy balls! That is super crazy! I wonder what Hayi's reaction would be if she found out? I mean, would she be disgusted with her mom that Jaewon dad fell in love with her? Awkward! Oh man. I don't know what I would do in that situation. I mean, it's a very uncomfortable feeling. I would like to read Hayi's mom point of view. How awkward would it be if your own daughter was dating your husband son? I'm sorry, that's taboo for me. Gross! I understand they're not blood related, but it's still pretty damn gross.

Ah man, this story is very...um...surprising. This reminds me of the Chinese drama "Devil beside Me" starring Rainie Yang and Mike He. If you haven't watched this drama yet, you're missing out author. Mike He is so god damn hot!

Anyways, about this chapter, I'm happy that Jaewon regained his memory, but what worries me is how Hayi will accept this. Will she forgive his mom after what she put her though? And how will she take it knowing that Jaewon and her are going to be step brothers and step sisters soon? Will they move somewhere far away where no one knows them and start a happy life together? , that's what I would do. No offense, but that will bring shame to yourself and your family.

Well, I'm not sure how this story is going to turn out, but I'm curious to know if this will affect their so-called-relationship. And I want to read more about Hanbin's point of view. I mean, what does he think of Hayi? And what does he think of Jennie? Please update soon author!!!! I want to read a little bit more of Hanhi before you make it Onehi officially! :D
Jenduekie #7
Chapter 17: Carabao??really now?? Hahhaha
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 15: It's about time Jaewon regained his memory. I do hope his evil mother tells him the truth about why she wanted Hayi to break up with him. If not, he's gonna have to force it out from Hayi herself. Maybe a kiss will help her open up to him again? Who knows? I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter since you said there is going to be a lot of skin ship!

Jennie is a good girl after all. That's good. Why does it seem like she likes Hanbin? Did they have a history together? Is that the reason why she is half single? I find it funny that Mino is drawn to Jennie. I wonder what's going to happen if he confesses his love to her? Will she reject him? Sigh, Mino and Hanbin are so hot. , I would take them both! Lol.

Bobby's character in here is too funny. I love him! I do hope he'll play a role in here to Jaewon back together with Hayi. I'm happy that Suhyun and him are back together. I was really shocked that she had a crush on him in real life. I thought Hayi had better chemistry with Bobby. Sigh....

I'm glad that Hayi still loves Jaewon, but will she continue to push him away? Or will she allow him to enter into her life once again? And will they do it behind Jaewon's mom back? I hope so!

Keep up the good work author! I'm loving this story more and more. I hope the next chapter will be super extra long! :D
nygdlonehi
#9
Chapter 14: I'm sorry I wasn't really leaving comments for the past chapter but the previous chapter just triggered all my pent up frustrations about Jaewon not remembering a thing about Hayi. Thank god he finally knows the truth. I'm sorry for this in advance but really it pisses me off (lol) reading other guys paired w Hayi. Well except for some, like Mino.

I just can't wait for them to have more sweet moments or just them being close. I just want them to get back together faaaaast

And GAHDDDDDDD Another obstacle in the form of Jennie Kim. Seriouslyyyyy I need a chapter without all these problems reminding them about their existing problems. Just a full fluffy/cheesy one.

I'm sorry for being so demanding and all. Anyway, fighting!
Rubybeauty1982
#10
Chapter 14: Seriously, Jaewon is stupid to believe his mom. (Shaking my head). I can’t believe he assumed that Hayi is nothing but a . He needs to investigate what really happened before he starts believing anyone in general.

I laughed so hard when Mino said, “Hayi’s not my type!” I can just imagine his facial expression when Jaewon accused them of having something together. It did not surprise me that Mino wanted to punch him in the face.

Jaewon fainted. Does that mean he’s going to regain his memory soon? I do hope he’s getting some flash back of his memory soon. I mean, if this is going to be a OneHi story, I hope he makes a move on Hayi soon. If not, I’m still rooting for Hanhi…lol.

I’m happy that Bobby and Suhyun are back together. How are they going to help Hayi and Jaewon? I’m glad they have friends that will do anything for them. Friends like that are hard to find now and days.

Will Hanbin be in the next chapter? If so, will this keep Jaewon guard up? And will he apologize to Hayi for calling her a ? I sure hope so. Will there be another kiss scene in the next chapter? Perhaps that will be a way of him saying, “I’m sorry.”

It looks like Jennie Kim is in the story now. Interesting. I wonder how her character will play in this role? Will she play the evil girl? Or the sweet girl? Or did his evil mom put her up to this? Speaking of his evil mother, when will she die? Lol. (Gosh, I’m so mean). I do hope Jaewon finds out the truth about what his mother did to Hanbin and Hayi. I mean, it would break his heart knowing that his own mother is trying to ruin his life. Let’s hope he doesn’t try to kill himself! That would be horrible!

More Hanhi in the next chapter please before you officially break them up. Lol. I hope you’re able to update this story soon. I’m loving it! Keep up the good job author! Until then, I’ll see you in the next chapter with another long comment!