Nineteen

Passing By
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HAYI'S POV

I closed the door and walked inside our apartment.

Winter break!

Gosh this is what I really wanted. Away from school works and such.

I took off my shoes and put them down. "Mom! I'm home!" I ran to the living room happily. " what the f-"

"-Hi Hayi." Dr. Jung greeted me as she stood up from the couch.

I looked at them, mom still enjoying the tv show they were watching. "H-Hi Dr. Jung?" I awkwardly greeted her back.

What is she doing here? I'm confused.

I saw her sat again beside mom. "I just had my off. And I'm tired driving to our house so I asked your mom if I can stay here until Jaewon arrives."

"Oh." I murmured and silently went to my room.

I never thought that they could be this close. Its been two weeks since the day when everything was resolved. And I'm so happy what we were like this right now. 

After doing some of my rituals, I get out of my room and joined them in the living room.

"He must be busy in the store right now." Dr. Jung said. "My poor little boy."

"He'll be fine. And besides he enjoyed having that job. Have you eaten?" I asked her as I look at her. Its amusing really to talk to her like this.

She smiled at me. "I'll wait for Jaewon."

I poke mom and she nodded.

"Jaewon's mom, let's eat dinner." Mom held Dr. Jung's hand and led her to the kitchen. "It will be really awkward if we eat by ourselves and you sitting there. Anyways I cooked a lot." 

"Ok. Ok. Hayi's mom." Dr. Jung playfully answered and they both chuckled.

They look like bestfriends. Its beautiful. Heartwarming. Free of problems. Happy.

I smiled at my thought and followed them.

"Hayi, leave Jaewon a message to come here. Tell him I'm waiting for him here." Dr. Jung told me as she offered me a seat first.

I nodded and took out my phone from my pocket.

"Oh! He texted me." I told them and opened the message. "Hey beautiful. Can you come down here in the store?"

Silence.

What?

I read the text again and I slowly looked at the two mothers giving me a teasing look.

"What?" I asked them hiding my embarrassment.

. Why did I read the message out loud. Ugh.

"Go. He must be waiting for you." Mom said as she giggled with Dr. Jung.

I just gave them a smile and hurried outside.

What does he want? Texting me to come down there.

Is he in trouble?

No no no no.

He must be bored and wanted a company and all.

Yes that's it.

I got on the elevator and pushed the ground floor.

I'm nervous all of a sudden. Oh my gosh.

Why am I sweating? It's not like something will happen right?

The door opened and I hurriedly got out of the building. I ran to the convenience store but I suddenly bumped into a guy.

Ouch.

I looked at him irritated. "Can't y- oh? Kim Hanbin?"

He looked at me surprised. "Lee Hayi...." he smiled.

"Wow. That was awkward." I laughed. "I really felt that were close but in reality we're not. Its kinda weird."

He just gave me a smile and patted me in my head. "Maybe we were close in the other world. You really look so happy right now." He looked down for a moment and looked back at me. "Well, that's good. Grab the opportunity to be happy. You've been waiting for this." He started to walk to the building but he stopped and looked back at me with a smile. "I'm really glad I remembered you."

He started to walk away without giving me a second glance. I looked at him until he disappeared from my view with a knot on my forehead.

Why does he sounds so creepy? But still, I feel comfortable with him amidst all these.

I dismissed all my thoughts and walked to the convenience store where Jaewon's working.

I entered and saw Suhyun sitting on a table with Bobby. 

"What are you two doing here?" I asked them as I approach them.

They looked at me and smiled. "We're having our date. Now have yours too." Suhyun answered and told me to go away.

This witch seriously. I jokingly hit her shoulders and went to the counter.

"What?" I asked Jaewon after he looked at me.

He looked at the ceiling and let out his tongue. He'sprobably thinking right now but why does he look so y and yumm-

What the heck? 

"Are you seducing me right now?" I asked him cluelessly.

I mean why does he have to show his tongue like girl, I mean boy, I know you're hot. But making those gestures is really dangerous.

Don't you know that my ovaries are in danger of exploding everyday because of you (effortlessly)? So what more if you act like that? Oh my gahd.

I heard him chuckled and walked towards me. "Am I seducing you?" He asked me as he let out a smirk.

Oh my gahd. That is also illegal. He could kill me with that. How dare you?

I cleared my throat and crossed my arms. "Oh boy, try harder." 

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Rubybeauty1982
#1
Chapter 19: I am so sorry for the late reply. I hope you'll forgive me. Anyways, this was a awesome ending! I really liked how Jaewon and Hayi ended up together. Sigh, true love does exist! After two years of suffering, god finally gave her man back to her.

Your story was good. So good that I re-read it 3 times already! Lol. Call me delusional, but I love reading fanfic with Hayi in it. I'm her biggest fan and I ship her mostly with her label mates. It shouldn't be like that, but they are the only ones that really interact with her.

I do hope you continue to write more stories in the future. I'll subscribe to them and leave long comments as well. There are a few grammar errors, but no author is perfect. I, myself have plenty of type-o errors in my stories too. Practice makes perfect.

I did upvote your Hanhi story, but I didn't get a chance to read it yet. I will definitely leave a long comment! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for creating this story! I'm going to re-read one more time! :D
yeulisoo
#2
Chapter 20: oh I surprisingly enjoyed reading this. despite all if those typos and there are still some that's misplaced this is still a good one. keep on writing I believe you could write better as you write more. fighting!
Jenduekie #3
Tag it as completed thnx
Jenduekie #4
Chapter 19: WHYYYUU ajdjsjd i was so shocked after inreaf d author's note.. but good job thank u for this story
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 18: Wah! Another great update from you author! This chapter made sense and I loved how Hayi's mom rejected Jaewon's dad. No offense, but Jaewon's dad is a douche bag. I mean, really? Since he was the one delivering Hayi when her mom was giving birth to her, and he was checking her out at the same time? Awkward! And gross! I'm glad she rejected him. , at least she has good morals.

So, I'm assuming that in the next chapter Jaewon and Hayi will officially be together? Fingers crossed! It's been a tough journey for these two love birds, and I'm excited to read how Jaewon will confess to her. Will he say it with action? Or will he be old fashion and ask her out like a true gentlemen?

I'm kind of curious about Mino and Jennie. Are these two going to hook up? I mean, in the previous chapter (or the one before it), he seemed really shy around her. It was cute and refreshing to read.

I can't wait until you write your next story about Hanbin and Hayi. As you can tell, I'm a huge Hanhi shipper. In fact, I ship her with Hanbin, Jaewon, Bobby, Taeyong, and Jun (from Seventeen). Read some of my stories about Hayi and I hope my stories will motivate you to write a good one shot or a long story.

Will Jaewon proposed to Hayi? Oh, I can't wait for that to happen! Anyways, keep up the good work author. You're doing an amazing job so far. It pisses me off that you have a lot of subscribers, but they don't leave any comments for you. I mean, how hard is it to leave a comment? Lazy silent readers. Yes, you know who you are! Quit being a silent reader and comment for heavens sake! How the hell do you expect to motivate the author? (Sorry for my rants).

Anyways, I feel that this story is coming to an end. I hope you make the closure a good one author. Until then, I'll see you in the next chapter!
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 17: Sorry for the late comment! Damn! Now I understand why Jaewon mom hates Hayi. Holy balls! That is super crazy! I wonder what Hayi's reaction would be if she found out? I mean, would she be disgusted with her mom that Jaewon dad fell in love with her? Awkward! Oh man. I don't know what I would do in that situation. I mean, it's a very uncomfortable feeling. I would like to read Hayi's mom point of view. How awkward would it be if your own daughter was dating your husband son? I'm sorry, that's taboo for me. Gross! I understand they're not blood related, but it's still pretty damn gross.

Ah man, this story is very...um...surprising. This reminds me of the Chinese drama "Devil beside Me" starring Rainie Yang and Mike He. If you haven't watched this drama yet, you're missing out author. Mike He is so god damn hot!

Anyways, about this chapter, I'm happy that Jaewon regained his memory, but what worries me is how Hayi will accept this. Will she forgive his mom after what she put her though? And how will she take it knowing that Jaewon and her are going to be step brothers and step sisters soon? Will they move somewhere far away where no one knows them and start a happy life together? , that's what I would do. No offense, but that will bring shame to yourself and your family.

Well, I'm not sure how this story is going to turn out, but I'm curious to know if this will affect their so-called-relationship. And I want to read more about Hanbin's point of view. I mean, what does he think of Hayi? And what does he think of Jennie? Please update soon author!!!! I want to read a little bit more of Hanhi before you make it Onehi officially! :D
Jenduekie #7
Chapter 17: Carabao??really now?? Hahhaha
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 15: It's about time Jaewon regained his memory. I do hope his evil mother tells him the truth about why she wanted Hayi to break up with him. If not, he's gonna have to force it out from Hayi herself. Maybe a kiss will help her open up to him again? Who knows? I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter since you said there is going to be a lot of skin ship!

Jennie is a good girl after all. That's good. Why does it seem like she likes Hanbin? Did they have a history together? Is that the reason why she is half single? I find it funny that Mino is drawn to Jennie. I wonder what's going to happen if he confesses his love to her? Will she reject him? Sigh, Mino and Hanbin are so hot. , I would take them both! Lol.

Bobby's character in here is too funny. I love him! I do hope he'll play a role in here to Jaewon back together with Hayi. I'm happy that Suhyun and him are back together. I was really shocked that she had a crush on him in real life. I thought Hayi had better chemistry with Bobby. Sigh....

I'm glad that Hayi still loves Jaewon, but will she continue to push him away? Or will she allow him to enter into her life once again? And will they do it behind Jaewon's mom back? I hope so!

Keep up the good work author! I'm loving this story more and more. I hope the next chapter will be super extra long! :D
nygdlonehi
#9
Chapter 14: I'm sorry I wasn't really leaving comments for the past chapter but the previous chapter just triggered all my pent up frustrations about Jaewon not remembering a thing about Hayi. Thank god he finally knows the truth. I'm sorry for this in advance but really it pisses me off (lol) reading other guys paired w Hayi. Well except for some, like Mino.

I just can't wait for them to have more sweet moments or just them being close. I just want them to get back together faaaaast

And GAHDDDDDDD Another obstacle in the form of Jennie Kim. Seriouslyyyyy I need a chapter without all these problems reminding them about their existing problems. Just a full fluffy/cheesy one.

I'm sorry for being so demanding and all. Anyway, fighting!
Rubybeauty1982
#10
Chapter 14: Seriously, Jaewon is stupid to believe his mom. (Shaking my head). I can’t believe he assumed that Hayi is nothing but a . He needs to investigate what really happened before he starts believing anyone in general.

I laughed so hard when Mino said, “Hayi’s not my type!” I can just imagine his facial expression when Jaewon accused them of having something together. It did not surprise me that Mino wanted to punch him in the face.

Jaewon fainted. Does that mean he’s going to regain his memory soon? I do hope he’s getting some flash back of his memory soon. I mean, if this is going to be a OneHi story, I hope he makes a move on Hayi soon. If not, I’m still rooting for Hanhi…lol.

I’m happy that Bobby and Suhyun are back together. How are they going to help Hayi and Jaewon? I’m glad they have friends that will do anything for them. Friends like that are hard to find now and days.

Will Hanbin be in the next chapter? If so, will this keep Jaewon guard up? And will he apologize to Hayi for calling her a ? I sure hope so. Will there be another kiss scene in the next chapter? Perhaps that will be a way of him saying, “I’m sorry.”

It looks like Jennie Kim is in the story now. Interesting. I wonder how her character will play in this role? Will she play the evil girl? Or the sweet girl? Or did his evil mom put her up to this? Speaking of his evil mother, when will she die? Lol. (Gosh, I’m so mean). I do hope Jaewon finds out the truth about what his mother did to Hanbin and Hayi. I mean, it would break his heart knowing that his own mother is trying to ruin his life. Let’s hope he doesn’t try to kill himself! That would be horrible!

More Hanhi in the next chapter please before you officially break them up. Lol. I hope you’re able to update this story soon. I’m loving it! Keep up the good job author! Until then, I’ll see you in the next chapter with another long comment!