Proposal Burgers (NaJeong)

IOI Looks Like a Screaming Person (IOI Associated Acts Oneshot Collection)
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Seoul, Friday, January 11, 1992

Sejeong fiddled with Nayoung's fingers. 6 Celsius was unseasonably warm for January. Warm enough for them to drop their bags off at Nayoung's house and make the trek to sneak into the theater showing last year's best films. Sejeong didn't know why Death Song was on the list. "You really didn't think it was stupid?" 

Nayoung looked a little offended. But Nayoung always found a way to be offended. "No way! It was touching. The way they were willing to die for each other..." Nayoung trailed off, a dreamy expression on her face. They stopped at the crosswalk and waited for the traffic to slow down.

Sejeong mock retched. "You're gross. It's totally dumb. They definitely had other options. Throwing yourself overboard helps no one."

"Death Song is a masterpiece and you can't convince me otherwise." Nayoung huffed and stomped her foot like a petulant child. Sometimes Sejeong couldn't believe Nayoung was older than her.

The last of the cars cleared out and they continued walking. "Nayoung, how many times have I told you your taste in movies is terrible?" 

"That's Nayoung unnie to you." Nayoung tried to wink. It was terrible to the point of being a little charming. 

Sejeong squeezed Nayoung's hand. "Oh really?"

"Mmhm." Nayoung squeezed back and brought their hands up to kiss Sejeong's. 

Sejeong spluttered in surprise and tried to take her hand back. When Nayoung wouldn't let go, Sejeong whacked her in the stomach with her free hand instead. "You're so gross."

Nayoung doubled over, stopping dead and causing the elderly couple behind them to nearly collide with them. The couple walked past the two, shooting them judgmental looks. When Nayoung straightened up, the couple was a couple of paces ahead. Nayoung looked at Sejeong with feigned hurt. "My wife! She doesn't love me! I fear that my sadness will cause me to perish!"

"Shut up! People are looking at us weirdly." Sejeong grabbed Nayoung'

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cage-comet #1
This hurts, mann.. I read a bit of your discussion with mrml and I can understand that. I think it's more because idols have made their dreams their own "idols" and one of the most prevalent asian mentality is competition in all things marketable, smh..

I always reread angsty ioi stories (there's one series I've reread more than a dozen times the past week) and I just want to commend you for how true you describe reality. It's quite scary, as the darker greys of society are.
cage-comet #2
Chapter 19: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1221583/19'>convince the world (that ...</a></span>
this was heart-breaking, author.. thank you for sharing this with us!! <3
cage-comet #3
Chapter 4: This chapter always gets me everytime; it's a really captivating start for a series, author!! Hopeful you consider this someday <3
ginny41
#4
Chapter 20: Oh man, what did Nayoung even see? Minkyung's hormones are out of control...Now I kind of want to know whether or not Kyungwon is really connected to that drug cartel, or if she just has a thing for cute cops and decide to try her luck. I hope it's the latter, I don't think that dork would fare well in jail lol
pokemon4ever
#5
Chapter 19: ? did I spy the faintest hint of naminky?
Mnetruinedmylife
#6
Chapter 19: Now that was an amazing read. Kyungwon's struggle here feels so raw and real, you should definitely feel proud. The whole 'hammer and nail' metaphor was beautifully executed. You write emotions so well, I don't think youre rusty at all, they feel as poignant as ever. I love Nayoung's portrayal, the dynamic between 'leader' and 'friend' was a delight to read, just the right amount of stern but comforting. Minkyung however, i felt couldve been a little more comforting in the beginning, but I guess you did say that she didnt realise how badly Kyungwon would panic. Im kinda curious to see who else has 'violets in their lapels' (double yay for old lgbt traditions), im assuming its Minkyung, but it might not necessarily be. The greedy part of me wants to read more of this, especially Siyeon and Kyungwons convo, but i think its wrapped up ok, since this is mostly Kyungwon's journey. It was a great read, i miss your writing xD
a230069 #7
Chapter 18: this seems like a nice story! i’m really curious to find out what was on that phone...
Ryannereid94 #8
Chapter 16: Yay on the character studies! Also this chapter was awesome!