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Description

Welcome to Polished Reviews!

This Shop is focused on helping you; the writer, to make a better story.

If you have doubts, need a second opinion or a grammar spelling check you're in the right alley.

Reviews will be given as soon as possible.

Chat Feature

Polished Reviews considered a chat feature might be nice to personally discuss feedback.

If the writer has any questions or wishes to console or discuss anything about her feedback and the story, one only has to say so in the form.

one only has to say so in the form.

The chat feature will be held in Chatango and the date and time could be discussed.

A password and username are given to those who wish to use this feature.

This way the writers won't have to make a separate account on the site itself.

House Rules

► Fill the FORM

►Subscribe to the shop

► Credit in your story foreword with the banner

►Cancel or adjustments can be done through PM, please within a 2-day notice

please within a 2-day notice

►Don’t be rude, I’m a reviewer, not a sugar coating aunt

►Comment after the request and after the feedback

► Password is Orion

►Payment is not necessary but not unwanted

►Fill the form correctly, especially the concerns otherwise you will receive general feedback

especially the concerns otherwise you will receive general feedback

About the Reviewer

Hello, I'm BlackPolish, both owner and currently the only reviewer of this shop.

English is unfortunately not my native language, however, I have betaed several stories here on Asianfanfics.

Mostly were volunteered and I edited on character development and story progression for a friend's book.

Aside from that, I also majored a year in a media course that covered Storytelling.

As a new fanfiction writer, it came to me that most writers did not have a personal beta.

Through Polished Reviews, I wish to give the thoroughness and quality feedback equal to a personal beta.

Which explains the Chat feature. I hope writers will find it useful to have an interactive option to discuss the feedback that has been given to them.

I hope writers will find it useful to have an interactive option to discuss the feedback that has been given to them.

Thank you for your time.

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_Hera_ #1 Mar 2, 2017 22:12:12

Hi! ^^ Requested. Looking forward to the review. )

Saraaaxxi #2 Mar 2, 2017 13:04:30

I've requested for a review

KnowRain #3 Feb 26, 2017 11:22:05

Chapter 6: thank you for your time, i've credited your shop in my story ^_^

krissica15 #4 Feb 24, 2017 16:36:33

I've requested for a review :)

overdosagexo #5 Feb 22, 2017 14:44:27

Chapter 5: Hi, I'm here to pick up my review!

I'm glad that I could touch you with the story, even if it isn't one of your favourite groups! That's one of my goals whenever I write: to be able to move people's hearts. It's quite a hard feat to accomplish but I hope I do improve as I go on and am more able to do so :)

As for the realism part, I do agree that they should have been able to move on gradually xD but when I was writing it, that didn't really occur to me because I was too caught up in the 'feels', I guess. Regardless, I will learn to improve on the realistic aspect in my future works!

I used lapslock because I felt that it set the right tone (?) for the story. Initially, I did try out both lapslock and normal capitalization to see which one worked better, and I chose lapslock because, for lack of better expression, it was aesthetic and fit the story mood xD That's really all there is to it.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story! I will take your advice into account ^_^ I have also credited the shop with the banner in the foreword of my story (my apologies for the delay in my picking up)!

JaegasmK #6 Feb 20, 2017 04:24:24

I've requested for a review^^

heysaymomo #7 Feb 15, 2017 21:32:57

Chapter 4: Thank you so much for the review, I'm quite happy with it since I expected the opposite! How you described my characters and plot is very much how I want readers to see my story and it helped knowing I wasn't messing up on that detail :) I'll learn from your advice and surely request again if needed, thank you!

Jeniiin #8 Feb 11, 2017 20:30:28

I've requested a review:) thanks for your time~

ELF_Jewel #9 Feb 11, 2017 06:56:25

I have requested for the review from your shop. Thank you for your time! :)

KnowRain #10 Feb 9, 2017 10:48:52

I have requested for a review! Thank you for your time