I'm glad that I could touch you with the story, even if it isn't one of your favourite groups! That's one of my goals whenever I write: to be able to move people's hearts. It's quite a hard feat to accomplish but I hope I do improve as I go on and am more able to do so :)
As for the realism part, I do agree that they should have been able to move on gradually xD but when I was writing it, that didn't really occur to me because I was too caught up in the 'feels', I guess. Regardless, I will learn to improve on the realistic aspect in my future works!
I used lapslock because I felt that it set the right tone (?) for the story. Initially, I did try out both lapslock and normal capitalization to see which one worked better, and I chose lapslock because, for lack of better expression, it was aesthetic and fit the story mood xD That's really all there is to it.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story! I will take your advice into account ^_^ I have also credited the shop with the banner in the foreword of my story (my apologies for the delay in my picking up)!
Chapter 4: Thank you so much for the review, I'm quite happy with it since I expected the opposite! How you described my characters and plot is very much how I want readers to see my story and it helped knowing I wasn't messing up on that detail :) I'll learn from your advice and surely request again if needed, thank you!
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