Cut 2 • Month One

Desperate • A Cut Writing Contest • Closed For Month One
 
cut 2 / month one
Cut 2 • Month One
 

Shownu beamed past the man with the gun in his hand, avoiding his gaze in the process. When he reached the other side of the broken worn-out  shop, he quickly rushed to the existing door and instantly made his way out.

Not even sparing Vislosa's people a look, he rushed his way through the tiny town past all the stalls selling items, the children paying around the muddy pond, right into the street where his house was located. Doing all of this while his famous old scrunched up black bag was hanging from his left shoulder. 

"Kid, when will you ever learn to stop stealing from shops?"

Shownu was caught off guard when he heard the voice of his neighbor watering the planets. He huffed at the women with piercings and tattoo's all over her body. "Stop telling me what to do, it's none of your business. I'm a grown man now, I can make my own decisions."

She sighed, placing her watering hose on the ground and heading to the side of her garden to off the pipe. After doing so, she turned around to face Shownu. Who seemed to be heading up the stair-case to his main door. "Well then, tell me Shownu. Did your parents really raise you to become a thief? If they didn't, then it seems as if you never listened to any of their advice. I'm sure they'll be more than distressed to see what their son has become today."

Shown stopped making his way up to his door then looked down at the women. "I don't care what they think."

A/N: Hello. I know this ones short, but isn't that good? I was aiming for boyxboy with this one, but you can make it boyxgirl too. And since I used a name of a character(Shownu, the girl was an oc), I will give you guys the freedom of changing the name ONLY. Not anything else, i will be checking. And you can do whatever, it doesn't even have to be romance, it can just be about a rebal child. K, bye! Have fun!

 
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I put up cut 1 for month two!

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ellethereal
#1
Chapter 2: Hey for cut 2 can i change the character to a male?
byeolreenxx
#2
Also, sorry for the amount of questions I ask but am I allowed to include rated scenes as in detailed ones or should I just be vague or no rated Ms?
SheirynFiya
#3
Hi! Just curious, does "cut" means the entries so or the prompt tht we have to use...? Sorry im new to these things so im having trouble trying to understand the concept. And we're allowed to do member x oc right? (Boy x girl) :)
byeolreenxx
#4
Chapter 3: Hi what does 'marked by Hansol menas?'
ellethereal
#5
Chapter 6: Hi, your contest is pretty interesting, it reminds me of my school's summary writing with a first sentence cut xD But I can't change any words at all? Bc I'm quite particular about how my sentences are phrased and stuff... and i find some parts of your given cut kind of weird, like for eg. the part "He shut his eyes close. A small sigh escaping his voice." I find it abit weirdly phrased, even though maybe this is your style of writing. I would have phrased it differently, like "He shut his eyes tight, a small sigh escaping his lips." Maybe it would be better to let us change the phrasing / sentence structure because each of us have our own writing style. Well it's just a suggestion, if you don't want it that way then it's fine.^^ Also, I think maybe a sentence/ paragraph cut is better, because idk, for me it'll be better because most of the other part of the story will be our own idea/interpretation of the prompt cut, rather than having a huge cut in our story that is not even ours. I'd like to participate, but I don't think I'll make it for the deadline this monthxD
5AngelsBAP
#6
Chapter 1: I may NOT like Vilx or X Mon, but I may write a fic based on your story, but I'll look it up cause I'm working on DaeUp "The Walls Around Us" and I have no time, but I found the plots interesting :D