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Exodus
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Reviews will be posted here! You are allowed to ask for reviews twice as long as you apply by July 14th. In the meantime, enjoy some pretty fan art.
Status: Accepted = nothing wrong with the application and will be considered to feature in story, Pending = either I am reviewing or I asked you to change a detail, Chosen = Congrats!
Plotlines Count:
Gumiho [01]
Fairy [01]
Total: [02]
The Fairy
@pengylee7
Im Chaeyeon
Status: Pending
Hiya, thanks for returning to the story!
Basics are good and like I said before, the personality fits the fairy plotline really well! Her background helps explain who she is as a person and has a good flow.
Im not sure I have anything to point out about your app, especially since it's already been through feedback the first time this story came around. I love the balanced aspect of her, usually fairies are selfish just because but I love the multidimensional part of her, her ties to her clan and family. It makes her feel like a more relatable character.
And also I love Chen's background in this app. Oof throwback to Lotto era, yaas. But I have a few questions about this character, I'm not too quite sure how Chen ended up being kidnapped and then to EXACT? Was he sold to EX'ACT by the people that paid to have him kidnapped?
Also is his father in his life or is his mom just keeping him away? That wasn't very clear.
Could you also elaborate on why he e
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