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THE TALES OF EXODUS ➳ (NEED APPS!)
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Exodus

 

Author's note

 

Reviews will be posted here! You are allowed to ask for reviews twice as long as you apply by July 14th. In the meantime, enjoy some pretty fan art. 

 

Status: Accepted = nothing wrong with the application and will  be considered to feature in  story, Pending = either I  am reviewing or I asked you to change a detail, Chosen = Congrats!

 

 

Plotlines Count: 

 

Gumiho [01] 

 

Fairy [01]

 

Total: [02] 

 

The Fairy

@pengylee7

 

Im Chaeyeon

 

Status: Pending 

 

Hiya, thanks for returning to the story! 

 

Basics are good and like I said before, the personality fits the fairy plotline really well! Her background helps explain who she is as a person and has a good flow. 

 

Im not sure I have anything to point out about your app, especially since it's already been through feedback the first time this story came around. I love the balanced aspect of her, usually fairies are selfish just because but I love the multidimensional part of her, her ties to her clan and family. It makes her feel like a more relatable character. 

 

And also I love Chen's background in this app. Oof throwback to Lotto era, yaas. But I have a few questions about this character, I'm not too quite sure how Chen ended up being kidnapped and then to EXACT? Was he sold to EX'ACT by the people that paid to have him kidnapped? 

 

Also is his father in his life or is his mom just keeping him away? That wasn't very clear. 

 

Could you also elaborate on why he e

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[talesofexodus] the two reviews are up! I'm still waiting for applicants tbh
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spontaneity #1
Chapter 21: THE TEASER IS HERE!!!
okay first off, i'm terrified of alice lmaoo
but it was also so satisfying ti read her putting the blixes in place omg

i'm so intrigued by seona's story?!?!
who's the one that she keeps thinking of
what happened to her that caused this type of reaction
atm, she sounds like a wildcard
the experiments she has to go through tho holy k

aside from the fact that byulgi is my character, this was my fave part solely because there was something positive to read about lol
minpyo and byulgi's friendship was so fluffy in comparison to everything else happening in the chapter :')
even mroeso in contrast to hyesul and seyeon's relationship
man i already can't stand reading the name jin hyeseul lmaooo
what's seyeon planning though bc i dont believe seyeon really sees eye to eye with hyeseul

also really interesed in the tian nad the whole djinn thing!!!!
like what type of wishes has she grant, if there were repercussions
how does she choose a masster, etc etc
so much questions for this plotline, im really looking forward to reading more about her

thanks for the teaser!!! i loved it!!
this is getting me even more hyped for the story to start too omg, impatiently waiting rn lmao
Kupuritama #2
Chapter 21: Damn! I'm away on a four day long weekend trip and come back to this beautiful teaser. ;; U ;;
It is interesting how you chose to feature each of the currently chosen characters and gives a view of how different the collection of them are based upon some of their history/personality/decisions that had led up the the current time.

I'll keep yelling about this but I am so, so, glad you decided to come back and continue this story! I look forward to any upcoming applicants and seeing how this cast can be further expanded~!
prettybirdsfly #3
Chapter 21: OH HELL YEAH!
that was brilliant, so excited to see more. i’m like kind of enjoying how broody/hopeless tian feels (does that make me a bad person?),,, oh well ;)
Noahscape #4
Chapter 1: A quick question. Are love interests optional or mandatory?
Noahscape #5
Chapter 6: Oooh... I may very well have my eye on a certain plotline... Because ideas and this is super interesting and I wanna apply.
spontaneity #6
Chapter 18: CONGRATS ON GETTING YOUR FIRST FT JOB!
looking forward to the teasers and very curious about the changes of the love interests
either way, i'm ready for the story to be back and on the roll lol
have fun writing the teasers!
Kupuritama #7
Chapter 18: Ayyy congrats on getting a job! I know you had mentioned previously you were on the job hunt, glad to hear you're officially employed now. :')
I would have done spread the word among my friends but lmao- I think I'm one of the only ones who still even logs onto the site. But!! I am very much looking forward to this reboot and the new teaser you mentioned as well.

I'm actually quite excited about the love interest change. I remember Baek having been the noted preferred love interest for myself and prettybirdsfly's character as well. I always enjoy seeing how authors handle the direction of relationships- both platonic and romantic, in their works. It is, after all, a very real thing for multiple individuals to share interest in one another in real life. (That and I just. Really loved the djinn app in general LMAO.)
Suau147 #8
Chapter 18: it's been a very long time but I'm glad you decided to do this again :) I'm gonna try my luck this time, maybe this time I can make a better app:)
pengylee7 #9
question! do you want me to reapply through the apply button (i actually haven't used that before) or keep it where it is from last time?
prettybirdsfly #10
whoops, i completely missed the rebooting of this. imma just resubmit my djinn profile
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