Rose's Sacrifice

Belle Rose
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          ~My eyes were frozen open in terror.

I had no idea how the creature in front of me was going to react.

Was it going to attack us? Kill us? Eat us?

I was usually able to predict the actions of people around me, but a beast was an entirely different matter.

The fact I had been completely surprised by its appearance didn't help either, and even if I had wanted to run away, I was certain I'd have been completely unable to.

My father looked equally as disturbed, holding the rose as if it were somehow the most dangerous thing he'd ever possessed. He kept it an arm's length away, though he didn't dare drop it.

I assumed he probably felt that if we were going to face some sort of divine punishment for the taking of the flower, he should at least have the privilege of holding it before our lives were ripped away by the monster- I doubted it would be very difficult for the beast to do any ripping, since its feet were immense.

Standing on all fours it was as tall as I was, so I would have probably fainted to see how large it was while rearing on its back legs. It was obviously strong, the lines of its muscles clearly showing through the bulk of the white fur that covered its body.

The fur around its head had been braided and decorated with the glowing stones used by other Aryan's as ornamentation.

With claws like daggers and teeth that looked even sharper I had no doubt that it was the most frightening thing I'd ever seen. But what I found most alarming of all- even more so than the teeth- was the pure and intense hatred that gleamed in its glowing, blue eyes.


As the animal stepped into the light, I also realized that although it was the most terrifying thing I'd ever seen, it was also one of the most beautiful.

 At least, that was until the creature spoke, in a voice so rumbling and low that it shook the very core of me.

"Haven't you destroyed enough? That you would come here and kill what belongs to me?"

Even though the voice and words were harsh, they were spoken in such a clear and dignified manner that I was taken by surprise.

"Forgive me! It was not my intention to harm the flower good sir," my father managed to stumble out.

I wondered how, since words had clearly forsaken me.


"But harm it you did. Roses are rare enough, even in the wilds. To pick one is a terrible crime, one that you must and will pay for," The creature answered, clearly still angry.

 My father blanched, his usually ruddy complexion now nearly as pale as our assailant's fur.

"Who are you?" My father asked, his curiosity getting the better of him in the worst of circumstances.

I moaned at the poor timing, thinking it was far preferable to beg the beast for forgiveness and move on.


The glowing, blue eyes narrowed in mild amusement. He- for I was fairly certain the beast was male anyway- seemed to come to the same conclusion I had.


"I have been told all about you adventurer. You came to the wilds in search of gold and glory to bring back to your world of stone. Have you found what you sought here? Am I all you expected?"


"I meant no harm to you or your people!" My father stuttered back in a rather pathetic way of defending himself. The beast moved closer to him now, craning his enormous neck so that he could stare my father straight in his eyes.


The accusation that my father's goals had been less than admirable offended me. However, taking the rose was another matter altogether- an act of sentiment rather than profit.


I could not bear to stand and watch my father be bullied anymore, not on my account. It wasn't him, but me who wanted to see a rose, and so in my mind, it was only fair that I accept the abuse that the beast had begun to dole out on him.


"You assume too price was nothing more than seeing a smile on his daughter's face," I answered, more forcefully than was wise when faced with a terrifying beast I was sure.


"You I did not expect," the creature said with a hint of curiosity in his voice.

He moved now to examine me. Every step was powerful and assured, making every muscle in my body scream for me to run. But I had no doubt that no matter how far I ran, I wouldn't escape something so clearly strong and agile.

"And you thought you might like a pretty flower?" He mocked when he had finished- as if I was a child.

 

I lose my head when I get angry, all manner of intelligent and informed speech fails me entirely, and I have always been unable to make any sort of rational decisions under duress.

"My reasons for wanting it are none of your concern. Now my father has apologized, and we will ensure that we don't make the same error twice. He is not in a good condition and your appearance hasn't helped him any."


My mention of the way the beast looked seemed to anger him even more then he already was- abandoning the curious gazes he had thrown at us in exchange for the rage I'd first seen.


"If I am so frightening, then I wonder why you would dare speak to me so crassly, girl. The way in the wilds is balance. A life for a life. Your father has killed this rose, and so it falls to me to execute the same judgement on him," he snarled, almost looking happy at the prospect of ending my father's life- like it would bring him peace somehow.


I jumped in front of him, with my arms outstretched as far as they were able. It didn't do much to stop the creature's progress, only serving to make him feel more amused, or maybe angrier- perh

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casual4
#1
Chapter 11: I wish I would have found this story sooner. It's extremely well written and interesting
ichigoYuu #2
Chapter 24: I'm ,surprisingly, not crying for this chapter lol
Ahhh it's over...
they are all happy! Hooray for happy endings :')
Taehyung is a great King, Jooheon is still a wolf king. Amazing.
Rose and Jooheon learning how to kiss aww
You are such a great writer. Thank you for this story and I hope we can read more of your stories soon! I can't wait for the new one~
Is it Cinderella? Is it the Little Mermaid? We will know~~~ soon xD
Rinacchi
#3
Chapter 24: This was, with no shame can I proclaim, the most beautiful story I have read in a really long time. It was so well written and descriptive, portraying su much in only one chapter at a go. It kept me captivated the whole time I read and now that it's finished, I simply cannot wait for the sequel. I just have a feeling it's gonna be frigging lit. Oh~, the excitement~!!
Well done. Can't wait for moar~~
ichigoYuu #4
Chapter 23: I was thinking that the Duke surrended to easilly...
Jooheon must live TTTTTT where is the stone table (idk if its called like that, I saw the Narnia movies on Spanish lol) when you need one?!
Be strong Rose!
jinkxace
#5
Chapter 23: nice one! :)
ichigoYuu #6
Chapter 20: jc those two. Holdong each other the greatest steem lmao who r u two kidding kids :eyes-emoji:
At this point everyone in Fiore and the wilds can see their love from 35725227 miles away like wth Rose, Jooheon, p l e a s e. It's hilarious but the story is a few chapters away from the end plspls

Now with the questions:
1. I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT HURTS :'U it's so well writen and it feels real (i've been reading some fantasy lately and yours just- it's super good srsly i have cried before haha...yeah thats embarassing to say but it's good I'm good :') )
2. If you have read my comments before I think it's pretty obvious which is my favorite pairing lol ievenstartedthiscommentwiththemso...
3. Rose! I liked her from the start but seeing her growing with each chapter made me like her even more. The way she talks is delightful haha
4. I'm not good at names but I think I could try :Uc first I'd like to know at least a little of her personality ~
HoneyFei20
#7
Chapter 15: Readers there has been a confusion with chapter 14 and 15. Yes. Taehyung did go back to Fiore in chapter 14 but he can comeback to the Aryan's whenever he wants to because he knows the pathway.
KirinJidai
#8
Chapter 19: Waaah, this is intense, please tell me it doesn't stop there D:
If it does: It mustn't! Continue this, I don't allow any other outcome! xD
If it doesn't: I'll be waiting!
(Just one question, could it be that chapter 14 and 15 are in the wrong order? bc it ends with Rose finding the white rose in 12, then it continues with the forest hunting "after Taehyung had left" and then in 15 Taehyung's still there...? I was just a bit confused, that's all xD)
ichigoYuu #9
Chapter 18: "I was simply dreaming of returning home"
cofhomeiswheretjeheartis
I like how everyone see that Rose and Jooheon are basically the same now(?)
Even her father knows how much the company of Jooheonie has influenced on her (even on her dreams lol)

It's ending isn't it?
I loved every single line of it. The way you write is lovely and I've seen myself pushing my reading of other stories to read your updates hehe
KirinJidai
#10
Chapter 2: OMG, I know I should wait until I've read everything, but I just have to comment on your writing RIGHT NOW.
It's rare for me to be this blown away by the way someone describes things, but your choice of words is so medieval and old fashioned, I can imagine it play out in my mind as if I was there with them! I wonder why you don't have more subscribers, this is a beautiful story (though I'm not very far with the plot, but who cares) and you deserve much more recognition!
Sorry, I was just so amazed with it I had to tell you right away, I'll probably comment again once I caught on with the latest chapter. Honey, you do a great job, don't ever stop writing, I love you ;^;