Something Is Not Quite Right? (Part 1)

Belle Rose
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THIS IS A DOUBLE UPDATE, THIS IS THE FIRST PART OF THE SOMETHING IS NOT QUITE RIGHT? CHAPTER, READ THIS PART FIRST BEFORE YOU READ NUMBER 2! THANK YOU.

 

~As lovely as the deep blue dress was, it was hardly practical for running.

I knew Iris would have killed me if anything should have happened to it, but I could barely contain the hope that threatened to burst from my chest.

I needed to know if my father was alright, if he was safe. The thought that he was hurt, or, stone forbid, dead, had consumed me for these three months, and I needed it to end- if not for my father's sake than for mine.

I was pleased to find that I was not the only person running for the news however, since along with the Duke, both of my sisters were right behind us.

Granted their steps were a little more lady-like than mine, I could at least tell that they were feeling frantic.

We finally came upon a section of the manor that I had never visited before, and following a few, brief looks into the small rooms that lined the corridor, I realized that we were in an infirmary.

A slight feeling of dread washed over me like a rainstorm, since if we were in a hospital, that meant that whoever the survivor from the wilds was, he was not in a good condition.

Stopping at a larger room, I saw a figure in the small bed in the far corner. But when the guard who had fetched us approached him, the man struggled to sit up.

My heart sank as I came to the knowledge that it was not my father who had returned. It was, instead, one of the members of his protection team, and he looked as frail as one of my old rag dolls.

He was clearly injured, and although his wounds had been recently cleaned they hadn't been properly dressed yet, and there was a great deal of scarring all over the parts of him I could see- and undoubtedly on the parts of him that I couldn't too.

I couldn't help but stare at the scars, since they looked quite vicious like someone had slashed his abdomen with razor claws into three lines, and without any knowledge of what was out there in the wilds it was hard for me to determine what had made them.

They were jagged, and deep, and it was clear that more than one of the cuts had to be sewn together to stop the bleeding.

I was almost thankful that it wasn't my father, since I would have hated to see him in such a condition- and yet scarred and alive was better than dead, and I had yet to learn if he had suffered the worse fate. 

Despite the fact that the man looked unwell, the Duke did not waste any time in questioning the poor fellow, to which I was grateful.

I couldn't waste another sleepless night wondering where my father was, and the soldier could have answers.

The Duke didn't even bother with any pleasantries, like I hope you're feeling better, or your recovery should be swift, or other kind words.

Instead, he simply asked what had happened in a steady and demanding voice.

The guard had a hard time speaking still, whether it was due to shock or his injuries I wasn't sure, and it took him quite some time to formulate his response.

"We went into the wilds, as you instructed," he rasped, taking a few breaths before continuing.

"Master Heart charted our course, and we tried to find where the mysterious woman could have left the tunnels, but- there was no sign of her."

I clenched my eyes shut. I knew my father would have been disappointed, since without the ability to track the stone-bearer, there was no way to determine in which direction to head.

But without anyone to track, and with the ability to choose any direction he pleased, there was no doubt my father would seek to satisfy at least some of his personal curiosity.

(The soldier only confirmed my suspicion when he continued his tale.)

"After a night at camp, Master Heart decided to head into thicker forest, where the trees grew so tightly together that it was almost impossible to get through them. And- and as soon as we did it was like the forest changed- like it was alive!" He managed to stumble his words out as he looked around the room at everyone's questioning faces.

"I'm not crazy!" He asserted, though the Duke looked far from convinced. The man certainly didn't seem to be in his right mind, as he was now sobbing hysterically. But the Duke wasn't going to get anywhere with the soldier if the poor man thought everything he said would be only taken as the ramblings of an insane person.

"Your Grace?" I interrupted as politely as I co

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casual4
#1
Chapter 11: I wish I would have found this story sooner. It's extremely well written and interesting
ichigoYuu #2
Chapter 24: I'm ,surprisingly, not crying for this chapter lol
Ahhh it's over...
they are all happy! Hooray for happy endings :')
Taehyung is a great King, Jooheon is still a wolf king. Amazing.
Rose and Jooheon learning how to kiss aww
You are such a great writer. Thank you for this story and I hope we can read more of your stories soon! I can't wait for the new one~
Is it Cinderella? Is it the Little Mermaid? We will know~~~ soon xD
Rinacchi
#3
Chapter 24: This was, with no shame can I proclaim, the most beautiful story I have read in a really long time. It was so well written and descriptive, portraying su much in only one chapter at a go. It kept me captivated the whole time I read and now that it's finished, I simply cannot wait for the sequel. I just have a feeling it's gonna be frigging lit. Oh~, the excitement~!!
Well done. Can't wait for moar~~
ichigoYuu #4
Chapter 23: I was thinking that the Duke surrended to easilly...
Jooheon must live TTTTTT where is the stone table (idk if its called like that, I saw the Narnia movies on Spanish lol) when you need one?!
Be strong Rose!
jinkxace
#5
Chapter 23: nice one! :)
ichigoYuu #6
Chapter 20: jc those two. Holdong each other the greatest steem lmao who r u two kidding kids :eyes-emoji:
At this point everyone in Fiore and the wilds can see their love from 35725227 miles away like wth Rose, Jooheon, p l e a s e. It's hilarious but the story is a few chapters away from the end plspls

Now with the questions:
1. I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT HURTS :'U it's so well writen and it feels real (i've been reading some fantasy lately and yours just- it's super good srsly i have cried before haha...yeah thats embarassing to say but it's good I'm good :') )
2. If you have read my comments before I think it's pretty obvious which is my favorite pairing lol ievenstartedthiscommentwiththemso...
3. Rose! I liked her from the start but seeing her growing with each chapter made me like her even more. The way she talks is delightful haha
4. I'm not good at names but I think I could try :Uc first I'd like to know at least a little of her personality ~
HoneyFei20
#7
Chapter 15: Readers there has been a confusion with chapter 14 and 15. Yes. Taehyung did go back to Fiore in chapter 14 but he can comeback to the Aryan's whenever he wants to because he knows the pathway.
KirinJidai
#8
Chapter 19: Waaah, this is intense, please tell me it doesn't stop there D:
If it does: It mustn't! Continue this, I don't allow any other outcome! xD
If it doesn't: I'll be waiting!
(Just one question, could it be that chapter 14 and 15 are in the wrong order? bc it ends with Rose finding the white rose in 12, then it continues with the forest hunting "after Taehyung had left" and then in 15 Taehyung's still there...? I was just a bit confused, that's all xD)
ichigoYuu #9
Chapter 18: "I was simply dreaming of returning home"
cofhomeiswheretjeheartis
I like how everyone see that Rose and Jooheon are basically the same now(?)
Even her father knows how much the company of Jooheonie has influenced on her (even on her dreams lol)

It's ending isn't it?
I loved every single line of it. The way you write is lovely and I've seen myself pushing my reading of other stories to read your updates hehe
KirinJidai
#10
Chapter 2: OMG, I know I should wait until I've read everything, but I just have to comment on your writing RIGHT NOW.
It's rare for me to be this blown away by the way someone describes things, but your choice of words is so medieval and old fashioned, I can imagine it play out in my mind as if I was there with them! I wonder why you don't have more subscribers, this is a beautiful story (though I'm not very far with the plot, but who cares) and you deserve much more recognition!
Sorry, I was just so amazed with it I had to tell you right away, I'll probably comment again once I caught on with the latest chapter. Honey, you do a great job, don't ever stop writing, I love you ;^;