Part Seven: Realizing I Love You

On Shifting Sand
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The next several days flew by: Ken integrated well, even if he was a bit too friendly with everyone for Eunji's tastes, and Yunho used the information provided to set up strikes for the ERF. In just four days they had taken down more points of interest and scout ships than they had in the entire war, and Eunji felt her hopes swell.

Maybe there was a chance for life after this, she thought, sitting and cleaning her rifle. She cast sideways glances at Taekwoon as he did the same, sitting next to her with their knees almost touching. He caught her look and gave her a small smile, but for him, that was like he had given a grin to light up the room. She felt warmth bloom inside of her and ducked her head back to her work.

Ken sat nearby, watching the two of them at work, his face smooth and emotionless as he observed. Eunji wondered what was going on inside that mind; was he calculating their chances of survival? Or was there something more... human? She knew he had been experimenting with some of the girls, and though she had first thought that they had been taking advantage of his naivety, she came to realize that it had been his own advances. It was only after he told her what movies he had been watching when the humans slept that she realized what a mistake she had made.

Ken's eyes flickered up to meet her's and she flushed in embarrassment, remembering that he had stood and watched her and Taekwoon that first night. And he had also thrown it in her face, telling her that it was ebcause of them that he had looked up those sort of movies. Now that was a terrible thought.

The human lips in the alien face lifted in a small smile, which only widened as she flushed more, and she realized that his amusement was at her expense. Oh, he was learning all too well. "Um." She mumbled, setting her rifle to the side and scrambling to her feet. "I need some water. Want some?" she added to Taekwoon, though she kept her back to him so he wouldn't see her blush. How would she explain it to him without having him get jealous of her 'friendship' with Ken?

She made her way to the large water cooler, one of many that the ERF used. They had to go to the river and then boil the water to remove the impurities, but it worked and they always had water in the jugs. Thank goodness she wasn't one of the poor souls who were on water duty: she would probably go crazy! 

As  she finished her cup and wiped it clean, she heard footsteps behind her and turned with a smile, expecting to see Taekwoon. Her smile dropped as she realized it was instead Ken, and she shook her head as she lifted a finger to point at him.

"You are such a troublemaker," she admonished, but once again he smiled that secretive smile at her. She felt the blush begin again and she reached up to give him a slap on the shoulder.

He caught her hand before it made contact, then with a strength that belied his slender form, pulled her flush up to him. "You could help me to learn more... human... things," he said quietly, his voice halfway between teasing and - the only word that came to her mind - seductive. A chill ran down her spine at the thought of what he meant, and she pulled away from him to glare up at him.

"No. As your operator, I order you to knock it off. Mind your own business, give Yunho your intelligence, and protect me." She didn't even pity the confused look on h

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minyoungunnie #1
Chapter 9: I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT OHMYGOD
BUT I LOVED IT
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 9: That ending was really great, and the way Eunji and Ken worked together to achieve this victory was wonderful. He really was a cool machine and very helpful in everything, and her sacrifice was well worth it. Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable to read♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 7: Oh, man. The realization of love was sweet, and the times they had together were wonderful. It's too bad she hadn't been able to tell Taekwoon how she really felt. This was a really sad chapter!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 4: I had to be hard for her to break the news of Bomi's death to Hongbin, and I feel bad for him. It once again brings back the reminder that this is a war, and that comes with losing loved ones. It must be difficult to not become complacent, and I love how you're bringing that out here.
The scene with Taekwoon was sweet and it helps them both to cope with this and find comfort in one another. It was nice;). And I like that you didn't add , since it would have taken away from the story, in this case.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 3: This story is turning out really nicely! I love that the cube is an entity of its own, and it...he...cracks me up with his mannerisms and cluelessness. The ears made me laugh, too!
I feel bad for Eunji, though. It has to be hard to live in this new existence of fear and uncertainty. I hope it won't be too much to handle. At least she has Ken now!
contaminated
#6
Chapter 9: Oooh, if you ask me to be honest I will tell you that this story had me shooketh. I love how you wrote with realism. Oh my god why is realism so rare in scifi fics. But either way, I loved this. Everything, from the opening deaths to how you described the actions of Eunji and the other characters, was just spot on. I must say that the best part was the end; when Eunji sacrificed her life, and then the epilogue of course. Humans are tenacious individuals indeed.
Amalya
#7
Chapter 9: Honestly, I would say this was more of a bittersweet story. Of course it had sad elements and the sweet moments were hardly enough to counterbalance those, but the overarching message and the ending theme... those were very positive things. I'm a bit perturbed we never discovered who the informant was *grumble grumble* but I suppose it doesn't matter in the end. Not with the way that everything ended.

I definitely felt for Eunji and Taekwoon, but especially for Ken, ironically enough. Though just a tool, he came off as more of a child to me, learning and growing and eventually beginning to understand what would ultimately happen. Teaching him to be human was both a kindness and a curse. Poor thing. But, as sad as the ending was, more or less, I found it highly satisfying. It showcases the very best of humans right after the very worst in them. And the epilogue grants hope - ignorant of the true victory they had - but there is a future because of one person and her tool.

Excellent entry for the contest and congratulations on winning! It was a good read and not half as heart-rending as I was potentially expecting. haha Well done and also congrats for tackling new elements (sci-fi and female protagonist) with such success. :D
Amalya
#8
Chapter 2: Well. I certainly didn't expect that opener and you were correct in explaining that it wasn't going to be happy, but I am strangely delighted with this chapter though. Her... partner(?) is quite entertaining, and I know it's not trying to be, but the situation is just amusing. Minus the enemies and being trapped and now alone and all that. I also chuckled at her ERFian comment. You do well with adding bits of levity into more serious situations and it works wonders. Nicely done! Now on to more! :D
DGNA_Forever
#9
Congratulations on your win with this story in the War and Peace contest! I am so looking forward to reading it, when my own contest ends♡.
asdfghjkyubutt
#10
Chapter 9: This story had me kicking in the air for no absolute reason lol this is pure awesomeness. No one will be able to predict the end of this story if they don't read the entire series. Surely this story went to a direction I've never expected before but who cares about my preference it's still Sooooo Great™, I swear, definitely one of my favs! Anyways thank you so much for writing this story, you really did a great job on creating such an emotional roller-coaster within the action-war-scifi theme, I really appreciate it!! ♥