Part Five: Change of the Tide

On Shifting Sand
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Eunji jolted awake, her eyes adjusting to the darkness from where she slept facedown, her chest pressed to Taekwoon's, her head having been nestled against his shoulder, and his arm wrapped loosely around her in his slumber. She looked down into his sleeping face and resisted the urge to kiss him until he woke, especially since they still had yet to call this arrangement between them anything more than that. 

Pulling back slowly and carefully, she eased out from under his arm and turned to search for her shirt when she saw him. A shadowed form stood in the darkness of the underground warehouse less than five feet away, and she gave a muffled cry of surprise as she snatched up the closest piece of clothing to cover herself with. 

"Who's there?" she hissed, irritation making her tone sharp. Honestly she should have known who it was - everyone else knew to keep to their own business and leave everyone else to theirs. 

A momentarily glint of silver showed in the darkness, then the answer, "Ken."

Eunji rolled her eyes and let the article of clothing drop, not having any need for privacy from a machine. Her searching hands found her own clothing and she stood to quietly dress. Despite her own reasoning that he was just a machine, though, she felt uncomfortable with him watching her dress, so after a moment she shot him a glare and said, "Do you mind?"

His shadowed form only tipped the head to one side, making no other movement. "Mind? I... do not understand this pattern of speech..."

"Oh my god," she mumbled, motioning sharply with her hand. "Turn the around, would you? Let me dress in private."

His confusion was palpable in the air between them, but he did as she ordered, turning his back to face away. When she was fully dressed, she looked down at Taekwoon to find him thankfully still asleep, then stood from pulling her boots on and passed Ken. "Follow," she said, and he obeyed.

Once out of earshot and in what she deemed relative privacy, she turned to him and crossed her arms over her chest. "What was that all about? Standing there watching us sleep. How long were you there?"

She could see his eyes, and those only becasue they gave off a soft blue glow in the dark of night. Those deceptively human orbs didn't waver as he looked at her, but from the slight change in their shape sh could guess that his brow crinkled. In confusion, given his tone as he said, "You are my operator, I was standing by for instructions. Was I not supposed to be?"

She heaved a sigh and ran a hand through her messy dark locks, her irritation melting away. He was a tool, he couldn't know better. "I left you with Commander Yunho. Why didn't he give you a place to stay for the night?"

"He told me thank you and to go 'get some rest'. I assumed that was a dismissal and so I went to find you. You are my operator. You were otherwise indisposed when I found you so I simply waited for instructions. Was that wrong?"

Oh god. That meant he had seen more than just them sleeping? A flush rose over her cheeks, not only from embarrassment but also furstration. Had she known he would be this much of a pain then she wouldn't have picked him up! "Yes, Ken! Yes, that was wrong." she snapped. "If you're dismissed and told to go get rest, you go to a clear area, lay down, and sleep. Is it that hard to understand?"

He didn't deserve her anger, surely, but he didn't show any outward sign of upset. "I am sorry, I understand now. So I lay down like a human and shut down?"

"Yes." Dammit. "Come on, I'll find you a spot. Mimic what humans look like in their sleep." When she left him, tucked in a corner away from anyone else, he was laying in a rigid line with his eyes tightly shut. Oh well, it would work.

She returned to her own bedroll, knowing that she would owe Taekwoon an explanation in the morning as to why she hadn't stayed. Then again, she wasn't his girlfriend, she didn't owe him anything. Right?

Too bad no one told him that. Morning came and he was sullen and quiet, and whe

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minyoungunnie #1
Chapter 9: I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT OHMYGOD
BUT I LOVED IT
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 9: That ending was really great, and the way Eunji and Ken worked together to achieve this victory was wonderful. He really was a cool machine and very helpful in everything, and her sacrifice was well worth it. Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable to read♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 7: Oh, man. The realization of love was sweet, and the times they had together were wonderful. It's too bad she hadn't been able to tell Taekwoon how she really felt. This was a really sad chapter!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 4: I had to be hard for her to break the news of Bomi's death to Hongbin, and I feel bad for him. It once again brings back the reminder that this is a war, and that comes with losing loved ones. It must be difficult to not become complacent, and I love how you're bringing that out here.
The scene with Taekwoon was sweet and it helps them both to cope with this and find comfort in one another. It was nice;). And I like that you didn't add , since it would have taken away from the story, in this case.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 3: This story is turning out really nicely! I love that the cube is an entity of its own, and it...he...cracks me up with his mannerisms and cluelessness. The ears made me laugh, too!
I feel bad for Eunji, though. It has to be hard to live in this new existence of fear and uncertainty. I hope it won't be too much to handle. At least she has Ken now!
contaminated
#6
Chapter 9: Oooh, if you ask me to be honest I will tell you that this story had me shooketh. I love how you wrote with realism. Oh my god why is realism so rare in scifi fics. But either way, I loved this. Everything, from the opening deaths to how you described the actions of Eunji and the other characters, was just spot on. I must say that the best part was the end; when Eunji sacrificed her life, and then the epilogue of course. Humans are tenacious individuals indeed.
Amalya
#7
Chapter 9: Honestly, I would say this was more of a bittersweet story. Of course it had sad elements and the sweet moments were hardly enough to counterbalance those, but the overarching message and the ending theme... those were very positive things. I'm a bit perturbed we never discovered who the informant was *grumble grumble* but I suppose it doesn't matter in the end. Not with the way that everything ended.

I definitely felt for Eunji and Taekwoon, but especially for Ken, ironically enough. Though just a tool, he came off as more of a child to me, learning and growing and eventually beginning to understand what would ultimately happen. Teaching him to be human was both a kindness and a curse. Poor thing. But, as sad as the ending was, more or less, I found it highly satisfying. It showcases the very best of humans right after the very worst in them. And the epilogue grants hope - ignorant of the true victory they had - but there is a future because of one person and her tool.

Excellent entry for the contest and congratulations on winning! It was a good read and not half as heart-rending as I was potentially expecting. haha Well done and also congrats for tackling new elements (sci-fi and female protagonist) with such success. :D
Amalya
#8
Chapter 2: Well. I certainly didn't expect that opener and you were correct in explaining that it wasn't going to be happy, but I am strangely delighted with this chapter though. Her... partner(?) is quite entertaining, and I know it's not trying to be, but the situation is just amusing. Minus the enemies and being trapped and now alone and all that. I also chuckled at her ERFian comment. You do well with adding bits of levity into more serious situations and it works wonders. Nicely done! Now on to more! :D
DGNA_Forever
#9
Congratulations on your win with this story in the War and Peace contest! I am so looking forward to reading it, when my own contest ends♡.
asdfghjkyubutt
#10
Chapter 9: This story had me kicking in the air for no absolute reason lol this is pure awesomeness. No one will be able to predict the end of this story if they don't read the entire series. Surely this story went to a direction I've never expected before but who cares about my preference it's still Sooooo Great™, I swear, definitely one of my favs! Anyways thank you so much for writing this story, you really did a great job on creating such an emotional roller-coaster within the action-war-scifi theme, I really appreciate it!! ♥