Part Six: Claiming

On Shifting Sand
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After ending her conversation with Yunho, Eunji felt a surge of something inside of her. Something she almost didn't recognize until she discovered that it was an emotion she hadn't even realized she had lost: Hope. She was feeling hopeful once again, and it was because of Ken.

She found herself smiling, and others noticed it too, looking at her curiously as she passed them. She spotted Chorong with a devious look on her face, eying Eunji and speaking in covert tones with Hakyeon and a plain faced girl named Namjoo, but Eunji didn't even care. Let them talk, she knew what was really gooing on.

She found Ken right where she had left him, and simply sat to watch him for a short while, unwilling to disturb his education. The noise of many booted feet moving caught her attention asn she watched as four squads left up the stairway, all heavily armed with the ERF's best equipment. "Reacting to information you gave Yunho," she said to Ken's still form, a note of pride in her voice.

It wasn't until that evening that she woke Ken by calling his name from where she sat, and when his eyes popped open to reveal the blue luminescence from his connection to the interface, she let out a gasp of surprise. "Disconnect," she said quickly, and right away the blue faded. Then, to her surprise, a smile formed over those full, pretty lips, and he nodded his head in her direction.

"Hello, Eunji," he greeted, his voice coming smoother than it had before: not so computer sounding and much more natural. She felt a thrill run through her and clapped her hands in excitement.

"So it worked!"

He titled his head slightly to one side, then caught her meaning and nodded. "Yes, I suppose it did. I have to admit a flaw, however: I cannot digest food and therefore when I eat, it will be a waste. Are you sure that you do not wish to simply tell your compatriots what I am?"

She was already shaking her head. "No, even Yunho agrees with me. You're a friend of mine from when we were children. The food, that's regrettable, but there's nothing we can do about it. Just eat as little as you can without seeming strange, okay?

"Okay," he agreed. Then he pushed back the blanket coverings and stood to his feet in one smooth motion, suddenly towering over her and making her lean back to look up at him. He extended a hand downward to her and after a moment, she took it to allow him to pull her to her feet.

But he tugged her a bit too close, and she caught her breath as she looked up into that too close, too handsome face. His lips were just mere inches from hers and she felt her heart begin to race at their close proximity. "Um," she began, and then another smile flashed over his lips.

"Is that human enough?" he asked quietly before releasing her hand and stepping back. She heaved air in and swatted him lightly on the shoulder, reminding herself in her mind that no, he was not human, just a pretty tool, then turned to go find something to eat. 

Ken followed and she saw Namjoon watching them with a speculative look on her face, but the younger girl said nothing and Eunji ignored her. Ken took a bare minimum of food, just as Eunji had asked, and the two of them took a seat a bit apart from anyone else. "Remember," she said as he took his first bite of food, "Don't ever tell anyone what you are. If others speak to you, act like a human. Understood?"

"Yup," he answered through a full mouth, and she had to smile at his easy response. This could work after alll!

 

 

After helping to clean up from dinner, Eunji left Ken in the clutches of two girls who had seemed to take an interest in the stranger - plain faced Namjoo and an exceptionally pretty girl named Naeun. He seemed as if he could pull off the human feel, from what she had seen, and she had to admit that she probably shouldn't have had him watch Pretty Woman. He was a little too smooth now and she figured he would do fine with the girls fawning over him.

She made her way to the stairwell and climbed to the landing, where once again Hakyeon and Hyuk were on guard and playing with a deck of cards. Hakyeon eyed her with a calculating look as she unfolded the chair she had brought with her and set it up at their table, but she ignored him. "Can I play?" she asked brightly, her infe

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minyoungunnie #1
Chapter 9: I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT OHMYGOD
BUT I LOVED IT
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 9: That ending was really great, and the way Eunji and Ken worked together to achieve this victory was wonderful. He really was a cool machine and very helpful in everything, and her sacrifice was well worth it. Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable to read♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 7: Oh, man. The realization of love was sweet, and the times they had together were wonderful. It's too bad she hadn't been able to tell Taekwoon how she really felt. This was a really sad chapter!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 4: I had to be hard for her to break the news of Bomi's death to Hongbin, and I feel bad for him. It once again brings back the reminder that this is a war, and that comes with losing loved ones. It must be difficult to not become complacent, and I love how you're bringing that out here.
The scene with Taekwoon was sweet and it helps them both to cope with this and find comfort in one another. It was nice;). And I like that you didn't add , since it would have taken away from the story, in this case.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 3: This story is turning out really nicely! I love that the cube is an entity of its own, and it...he...cracks me up with his mannerisms and cluelessness. The ears made me laugh, too!
I feel bad for Eunji, though. It has to be hard to live in this new existence of fear and uncertainty. I hope it won't be too much to handle. At least she has Ken now!
contaminated
#6
Chapter 9: Oooh, if you ask me to be honest I will tell you that this story had me shooketh. I love how you wrote with realism. Oh my god why is realism so rare in scifi fics. But either way, I loved this. Everything, from the opening deaths to how you described the actions of Eunji and the other characters, was just spot on. I must say that the best part was the end; when Eunji sacrificed her life, and then the epilogue of course. Humans are tenacious individuals indeed.
Amalya
#7
Chapter 9: Honestly, I would say this was more of a bittersweet story. Of course it had sad elements and the sweet moments were hardly enough to counterbalance those, but the overarching message and the ending theme... those were very positive things. I'm a bit perturbed we never discovered who the informant was *grumble grumble* but I suppose it doesn't matter in the end. Not with the way that everything ended.

I definitely felt for Eunji and Taekwoon, but especially for Ken, ironically enough. Though just a tool, he came off as more of a child to me, learning and growing and eventually beginning to understand what would ultimately happen. Teaching him to be human was both a kindness and a curse. Poor thing. But, as sad as the ending was, more or less, I found it highly satisfying. It showcases the very best of humans right after the very worst in them. And the epilogue grants hope - ignorant of the true victory they had - but there is a future because of one person and her tool.

Excellent entry for the contest and congratulations on winning! It was a good read and not half as heart-rending as I was potentially expecting. haha Well done and also congrats for tackling new elements (sci-fi and female protagonist) with such success. :D
Amalya
#8
Chapter 2: Well. I certainly didn't expect that opener and you were correct in explaining that it wasn't going to be happy, but I am strangely delighted with this chapter though. Her... partner(?) is quite entertaining, and I know it's not trying to be, but the situation is just amusing. Minus the enemies and being trapped and now alone and all that. I also chuckled at her ERFian comment. You do well with adding bits of levity into more serious situations and it works wonders. Nicely done! Now on to more! :D
DGNA_Forever
#9
Congratulations on your win with this story in the War and Peace contest! I am so looking forward to reading it, when my own contest ends♡.
asdfghjkyubutt
#10
Chapter 9: This story had me kicking in the air for no absolute reason lol this is pure awesomeness. No one will be able to predict the end of this story if they don't read the entire series. Surely this story went to a direction I've never expected before but who cares about my preference it's still Sooooo Great™, I swear, definitely one of my favs! Anyways thank you so much for writing this story, you really did a great job on creating such an emotional roller-coaster within the action-war-scifi theme, I really appreciate it!! ♥