Part Four: A Great Tool

On Shifting Sand
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The return to base was uneventful: Eunji had asked Ken if he could tap into the movements of the other squads and track them so that she coudl avoid running into any aliens, and it seemed that he could. His eyes took on a strange blue glow when he was connected to the main interface, but after the initial surprise, Eunji didn't mind the abnormality as it kept them out of trouble.

The ERF base was tucked into the basement floor of what was once a retail inventory warehouse; rows and rows of toys and movies and other inconsequential things were stacked in their boxes on the shelves that adorned the ground floor. All clothing and other usable things had long since been taken. The basement had been raided, too, but once the ERF moved in, they had removed most of the metal shelves and put them in the ground floor, where they simply joined the maze of shadows and cobwebs.

The door to the stairwell was hidden at the back, through the maze, so as to confuse anyone who was not meant to be there. Eunji wound her way through, Ken following silently at the heels; only when they reached the door did she look at him and realize that he was still connected, his glowing eyes looking back at her from the gloom around them.

". Disconnect," she ordered, and immediately his eyes stopped their glow and returned to their dark color. "Don't connect unless I tell you to, alright?"

"Under- yeah." He caught himself mid-word and she nodded in satisfaction. 

Opening the door, she made her way down one small flight of stairs to a large landing, where two sentries sat on camp chairs and played a hand of cards. "Hi Eunji," the thinner of the two greeted, smiling up at her with a toothy smile that gave away his young age. 

"Hey Hyuk," she responded, reaching out to ruffle his hair and drawing a grunt of consternation from him as he tried to put the unruly locks back into place.

The other sentry, a dusky-skinned man named Hakyeon, looked over Eunji's shoulder with a guarded expression on his small face. "Who's this?" he asked quietly, one hand dropping from his cards as if to reach toward his weapon.

It wasn't easy to trust anyone, Eunji knew that, but she shrugged off his concern and waved a hand at Ken. "This is Ken, he was a childhood friend," she lied, unwilling to share her find with just anyone. Ken's eyes looked at her when she said it, but luckily he hadn't yet mastered human emotion and he didn't show any outward sign of his confusion as she continued. "I found him during my shift."

Hakyeon's round eyes narrowed, as if he could tell that she wasn't being forthcoming, but as he opened his mouth to ask more questions, Hyuk interrupted. "Where are the others? Wonshik and Bomi?"

Eunji's face dropped - she didn't have to act in that. "They didn't make it," she said softly, and both sentires nodded sharply in understanding. It was part of the risk of being a rebel, they all kknew that, but it didn't stop the loss from stinging. "I need to report," she added, and before Hakyeon could question her more, she moved past them with Ken in tow.

He caught up to her when they reached the door at the bottom of the second flight of stairs, catching her wrist to stop her. "I am your friend?" he asked, and since she had been expecting him to ask about her loss, the qustion took her by surprise.

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minyoungunnie #1
Chapter 9: I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT OHMYGOD
BUT I LOVED IT
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 9: That ending was really great, and the way Eunji and Ken worked together to achieve this victory was wonderful. He really was a cool machine and very helpful in everything, and her sacrifice was well worth it. Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable to read♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 7: Oh, man. The realization of love was sweet, and the times they had together were wonderful. It's too bad she hadn't been able to tell Taekwoon how she really felt. This was a really sad chapter!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 4: I had to be hard for her to break the news of Bomi's death to Hongbin, and I feel bad for him. It once again brings back the reminder that this is a war, and that comes with losing loved ones. It must be difficult to not become complacent, and I love how you're bringing that out here.
The scene with Taekwoon was sweet and it helps them both to cope with this and find comfort in one another. It was nice;). And I like that you didn't add , since it would have taken away from the story, in this case.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 3: This story is turning out really nicely! I love that the cube is an entity of its own, and it...he...cracks me up with his mannerisms and cluelessness. The ears made me laugh, too!
I feel bad for Eunji, though. It has to be hard to live in this new existence of fear and uncertainty. I hope it won't be too much to handle. At least she has Ken now!
contaminated
#6
Chapter 9: Oooh, if you ask me to be honest I will tell you that this story had me shooketh. I love how you wrote with realism. Oh my god why is realism so rare in scifi fics. But either way, I loved this. Everything, from the opening deaths to how you described the actions of Eunji and the other characters, was just spot on. I must say that the best part was the end; when Eunji sacrificed her life, and then the epilogue of course. Humans are tenacious individuals indeed.
Amalya
#7
Chapter 9: Honestly, I would say this was more of a bittersweet story. Of course it had sad elements and the sweet moments were hardly enough to counterbalance those, but the overarching message and the ending theme... those were very positive things. I'm a bit perturbed we never discovered who the informant was *grumble grumble* but I suppose it doesn't matter in the end. Not with the way that everything ended.

I definitely felt for Eunji and Taekwoon, but especially for Ken, ironically enough. Though just a tool, he came off as more of a child to me, learning and growing and eventually beginning to understand what would ultimately happen. Teaching him to be human was both a kindness and a curse. Poor thing. But, as sad as the ending was, more or less, I found it highly satisfying. It showcases the very best of humans right after the very worst in them. And the epilogue grants hope - ignorant of the true victory they had - but there is a future because of one person and her tool.

Excellent entry for the contest and congratulations on winning! It was a good read and not half as heart-rending as I was potentially expecting. haha Well done and also congrats for tackling new elements (sci-fi and female protagonist) with such success. :D
Amalya
#8
Chapter 2: Well. I certainly didn't expect that opener and you were correct in explaining that it wasn't going to be happy, but I am strangely delighted with this chapter though. Her... partner(?) is quite entertaining, and I know it's not trying to be, but the situation is just amusing. Minus the enemies and being trapped and now alone and all that. I also chuckled at her ERFian comment. You do well with adding bits of levity into more serious situations and it works wonders. Nicely done! Now on to more! :D
DGNA_Forever
#9
Congratulations on your win with this story in the War and Peace contest! I am so looking forward to reading it, when my own contest ends♡.
asdfghjkyubutt
#10
Chapter 9: This story had me kicking in the air for no absolute reason lol this is pure awesomeness. No one will be able to predict the end of this story if they don't read the entire series. Surely this story went to a direction I've never expected before but who cares about my preference it's still Sooooo Great™, I swear, definitely one of my favs! Anyways thank you so much for writing this story, you really did a great job on creating such an emotional roller-coaster within the action-war-scifi theme, I really appreciate it!! ♥