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Frozen [On Hold]
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Good evening my lovely readers, im so so so so sorry that this isn't the update you were looking for. And i can assure you, i am very upset with myself too. But im currently having a writer's block and my first term results were terrible, so i have to concentrate more on my studies for the second term. Im so utterly sorry. Please dont kill me!! ::>.<::

So i had this assignment to write an essay set in a futuristic and dystopian world, and somehow i ended up writing about Markson. (Don't ask me how, i really don't know xD) So i suddenly though of my lovely readers here, thus i decided to post it here. It's called Apple of My Eye. So here is a snippet of what i wrote.

     "If looks could kill, he would have already been dead. Literally." Mark muttered as he glared at his target, a million-dollar business owner, who who sat surrounded by many girls in a VIP booth at U29, Underburrow29, the bar for all the rich and powerful people where one can only enter with an invite. The land, Ground Zero as people now call it, is almost uninhabitable anymore, since the ozone layer has been destroyed so terribly that the land has been burnt down and all that was left were charred remains of whatever that had been there.. In fact since year 2057, everything has been shifted and built underground.

I hope you guys can read it, and provide constructive feedbacks on how i should improve my essay. Thank you so much!! Love you all for being so nice and friendly and

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Diamondphantom1 #1
Chapter 10: Update~
Firewish #2
Chapter 10: AW I WANNA GIVE MARK A HUG AND TELL HIM THAT EVERYTHING IS GONNA BE OK >.< good thing he has Jinyoung
Nachtice #3
Chapter 10: Poor Mark. Take care of him Jinyoung, help Mark come to grips with things.
HanJacks #4
Chapter 10: Finally . You updated .
Nachtice #5
Chapter 9: Careful Jinyoung!
Nice to see this story updated authornim!
misslovers #6
Chapter 9: let me bow to u* (bow)
THAT WAS AWESOMEEEEEE N U AUTHOR NIM...U JUST UPDATE AFTER SO LONG T-T
BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER
I glad u update anyway *give flying kiss*
dr_okbeast
#7
This is so good. But it was a bit too y, lol, my erted pedo mind. Haha. I really like this. It's totally a different plot than Frozen, and I think I like the drama more. It's much more complicated this way. And I look forward for the MarkSon and MarkGyeom part. I just wished for the jjproject part, you will make jaebum be like the damzel in distress for Jinyoung to save. Or maybe a peasant that works outside the castle that he falls in love with when he turns 18, which he fell in love with, and jaebum was playing hard to get, so jinyoung tried to court him. And gosh, I hoped this will be Markson, and not Markgyeom, though. Cause, seriously, who can resist Markson?
HanJacks #8
Chapter 7: Update juseyoooo. Love this. Mark is beautiful. Cant wait fr the others appearances
Cisne18 #9
Chapter 6: I started reading it today and I liked it! Hope you update soon!!