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7thhaven
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By booobbypooh
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Reviewer
xXxmani923xXx
Duration
12.1.15 to 12.2.15
Genre
Friendship, , angst
Characters
Ikon
Overall Grade
95%
KEYpoints
Title: 5/5 Your fanfic has a very catchy title.
Poster: 5/5 Not only does the poster catch the reader's attention but also, makes them want to give your fanfic a try.
Description + Foreword: 9/10 The description and foreword was written together nicely, though you have just a tad bit too much information but nothing that gives away the plot in your foreword section.
Layout: 5/5 The layout was done well
Characterization: 15/15 Your characterization was done very nicely. Each character was portrayed nicely and the character growth each character went through was excellent!
Plot & Flow: 28/30The plot and flow was done really good as well, though I had gotten confused at some points of the story and had to reread through sometimes.
Grammar & Vocabulary: 18/20Spelling and grammar is a little off, which I would recommend you, a co-author, or a trusted friend to go through your chapters again and edit the mistakes that are still in there.
Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 As for personal enjoyment, I really liked your fanfic! The storyline was very interesting and the read was written well to the point where the readers could relate to some, if not all the contents in the plot!
Poster: 5/5 Not only does the poster catch the reader's attention but also, makes them want to give your fanfic a try.
Description + Foreword: 9/10 The description and foreword was written together nicely, though you have just a tad bit too much information but nothing that gives away the plot in your foreword section.
Layout: 5/5 The layout was done well
Characterization: 15/15 Your characterization was done very nicely. Each character was portrayed nicely and the character growth each character went through was excellent!
Plot & Flow: 28/30The plot and flow was done really good as well, though I had gotten confused at some points of the story and had to reread through sometimes.
Grammar & Vocabulary: 18/20Spelling and grammar is a little off, which I would recommend you, a co-author, or a trusted friend to go through your chapters again and edit the mistakes that are still in there.
Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 As for personal enjoyment, I really liked your fanfic! The storyline was very interesting and the read was written well to the point where the readers could relate to some, if not all the contents in the plot!
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